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Michael & Inessa Garmash

She is young and free, and most of her love lies in front of her As the dawning twilight holds one breathless air under misted whispers A sight she often looks beyond the vast land that always ends in the ocean Upon the rocks driven by a seabreeze salted fragrance lingers Waves and natural forces full of power draws upon sound and rhythm Mixed echoes crying gulls rise and fall as they crash ringing home To walk along the beach barefoot, she has time to be young Reflecting back on each step forward petals of a sunbeam enters Feeling divine happiness every second heartbeat without a special reason Time begins to challenge the labours of the trodden path Live it is to dare, nobody has gone in her step before Standing upon the apex captivated by thought spiralling Form a sculpture of wet sand, without being critical Leaving an imprint under the shell where holds precious pearls A way to expose oneself to something unfamiliar and unsafe Petals of a flower dancing to a winds melody rings midnight bells She dreams of love, with expectations and hope to be a queen Under the starlight where a moon's cradle swoons her with a smile A hand to hold, the first kiss ... a puzzling thought Where memories are born a fire always burns regally sealed A collaborated poem Anne-Lise Andresen and Liam Mc Daid 08.06. 2017 (unrhymed couplets) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Shreastha Vyas

Date: 7/8/2017 1:12:00 PM

Nice thoughts.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/9/2017 3:10:00 PM

- Thank you for your visit and comments, Shreastha :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Hamilton

Date: 7/2/2017 2:56:00 PM

Congrats Anne-Lise and Liam for poem of the week, a great honor on a fine collaboration!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/9/2017 3:09:00 PM

- Thank you for your visit and comments, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 7/2/2017 2:10:00 PM

Hello Anne-Lise, I'm very pleased to see that your and Liam's romantic couplet made the "Best New Poems" list. I'm not surprised at all. It's an enchanted write. Congratulations again -- and continued best wishes from Ingrid and me!! Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/9/2017 3:09:00 PM

- Thank you for your visit and comments, Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 6/16/2017 11:55:00 AM

Hello Anne-Lise, Congratulations to you and Liam for POTW!! My earlier comments below are most certainly still in effect. A Superb write by you both!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/16/2017 12:47:00 PM

- Nice to see you back on our poem, Gary :) - Thank you for your congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chula Fleming

Date: 6/16/2017 7:39:00 AM

Congrats on your POTW. Lovely and lyrical.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/16/2017 12:45:00 PM

- Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Chula :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maria Williams

Date: 6/14/2017 9:46:00 PM

Back again to say Congrats Anne-Lise and Liam for this well deserved accolade of POTW - you should be so proud...Mariaxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/15/2017 2:05:00 AM

- We are, proud and happy Maria :) - Many thanks for your visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/14/2017 6:42:00 AM

This is really beautiful, Anne-lise and Liam, you both collaborate well:) congratulations on POTD:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/14/2017 6:45:00 AM

- Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 6/13/2017 4:40:00 AM

This is absolutely wonderful Sunshine. It transmits energy to live and hope. So inspiring. Congrats on the collaborations and for the POTW. Hugs Sunita :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/13/2017 5:04:00 AM

- I'm really glad you enjoy and admire this poem, Sunita :) - Many thanks for your visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 6/12/2017 10:28:00 AM

Many congrats Anne-Lise and Liam on POTW:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/12/2017 10:48:00 AM

- Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lin Lane

Date: 6/12/2017 9:47:00 AM

Anne-Lise, this is a beauty of a love story. Congratulations to you and Liam.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/12/2017 10:46:00 AM

- Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Lin :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/12/2017 8:11:00 AM

Superb collaboration Anne Lise and Liam. Congratulations on POTW. Much deserved!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/12/2017 10:46:00 AM

- Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Daniel :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 6/11/2017 6:57:00 PM

Hi Anne- Lise n' Liam!Wow! Congratulations to you both on POTW!Very beautiful, outstanding collaboration from you both my dearest friends.Very beautifully written.Just dazzling!You both more than deserve this great honor.I'm so very happy for you two.Just awesome! Perfectly done!Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:)) Love n' hugs! xoxox D ^0^

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/12/2017 3:48:00 AM

- Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Dorian :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 6/11/2017 3:47:00 PM

congratulations anne lise brought a great big smile seeing this as poem of the week thank you always dear friend for the pleasure of joining ink with you i pray your week is blessed beautiful pal

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/12/2017 3:47:00 AM

- Congratulations to you too, Liam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 6/11/2017 12:32:00 PM

This is so wonderful - so beautiful, so non-pretentious - so many special lines such as Petals of a flower dancing to a winds melody rings midnight bells. A definite fav for me! Congratulations!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/11/2017 12:45:00 PM

- I'm really glad you enjoy and admire this poem, Sunlite - Especially thank you for a "fav" ... greatly appreciate it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 6/10/2017 3:18:00 PM

Hello Anne-Lise, Yes I see this Couplet as another quite marvelous co-write with you and Liam. Beautiful, radiant, dreamy, and full of breathless expectation. The only other thing I shall add is: IT'S A FAVE IN MY BOOK!! Superb!! Cheers and Best Wishes to you both on this one!! Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/10/2017 3:37:00 PM

- Dear Gary, a pleasure you enjoyed this co- writing from Liam and me :) - Young love is always beautiful - Especially thank you for a fave in your book ... greatly appreciate it :) - Best wishes for a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eric Boddie

Date: 6/10/2017 2:59:00 PM

as always, the 2 of you....always know exactly what to do....whenever it comes to writing....you inspire a cease to fighting....and for that i applaud you both....because as you know, Love is my oath....the oath i pledge to all....because with Love, there is no way to fall....WOW my dear friend....anne, you have outdone yourself....;)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/10/2017 3:07:00 PM

- Thanks for beautiful comments, Eric - Always a pleasure to see you - Best wishes for a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anand Parmale

Date: 6/10/2017 12:29:00 PM

Beautiful girl with dreams in her eyes...Lovely write, dear Anne-Lise

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/10/2017 12:34:00 PM

- Young and beautiful with soft dreams ... life is wonderful, Anand :) - Thank you for your visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray

Date: 6/10/2017 8:10:00 AM

Just beautiful. The innocence of youth. Well done to you both.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/10/2017 12:21:00 PM

- Thank you for your visit and comments, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 6/9/2017 7:49:00 PM

also i would like to thank everyone for the heartfelt beautiful comments

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/10/2017 12:23:00 PM

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 6/9/2017 7:48:00 PM

truly a pleasure anne lise mixing ink with you your pen flowed gold through and through dear friend wishing you a blessed beautiful weekend

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/10/2017 12:22:00 PM

- Always a pleasure :) - Lovely weekend for you, Liam - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 6/9/2017 10:40:00 AM

A stupendous collaboration, great imagery and emotion dancing so harmoniously:-)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/9/2017 12:03:00 PM

- Keith ... not Kevin, glad you enjoy it and thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Akkina Downing

Date: 6/9/2017 9:34:00 AM

One word... Breathtaking!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/9/2017 12:02:00 PM

- One word ... Thanks :)

Maria Williams

Date: 6/9/2017 5:25:00 AM

She basks in the beauty of nature which you and Liam painted so well. May all her wishes come true. Thanks for sharing your visions ...Maria xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/9/2017 6:38:00 AM

- Thank you for your friendly visit and lovely comment, Maria :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 6/9/2017 3:38:00 AM

absolutely enchanting Anne Lise and Liam I do love your collaborations!:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/9/2017 4:25:00 AM

- Glad you enjoy it, thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comment Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 6/9/2017 1:48:00 AM

Oh to be young and free again. Fabulous collaboration which has to go in my favorites. Great picture to go with your outstanding words, congratulations.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/9/2017 4:32:00 AM

- Hi Elizabeth, a pleasure you enjoyed this co- writing from Liam and me :) - Young love is always beautiful, but it's not easy to be young today - Especially thank you for a "fav"... greatly appreciate it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)