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Michael & Inessa Garmash



She is young and free, and most of her love lies in front of her
As the dawning twilight holds one breathless air under misted whispers 

A sight she often looks beyond the vast land that always ends in the ocean
Upon the rocks driven by a seabreeze salted fragrance lingers 

Waves and natural forces full of power draws upon sound and rhythm
Mixed echoes crying gulls rise and fall as they crash ringing home 

To walk along the beach barefoot, she has time to be young  
Reflecting back on each step forward petals of a sunbeam enters 

Feeling divine happiness every second heartbeat without a special reason
Time begins to challenge the labours of the trodden path 

Live it is to dare, nobody has gone in her step before
Standing upon the apex captivated by thought spiralling 

Form a sculpture of wet sand, without being critical
Leaving an imprint under the shell where holds precious pearls 

A way to expose oneself to something unfamiliar and unsafe
Petals of a flower dancing to a winds melody rings midnight bells 

She dreams of love, with expectations and hope to be a queen 
Under the starlight where a moon's cradle swoons her with a smile 

A hand to hold, the first kiss ... a puzzling thought
Where memories are born a fire always burns regally sealed 








A collaborated poem 
Anne-Lise Andresen and Liam Mc Daid 
08.06. 2017
(unrhymed couplets)
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Date: 7/8/2017 1:12:00 PM
Nice thoughts.
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Date: 7/9/2017 3:10:00 PM
- Thank you for your visit and comments, Shreastha :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/2/2017 2:56:00 PM
Congrats Anne-Lise and Liam for poem of the week, a great honor on a fine collaboration!
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Date: 7/9/2017 3:09:00 PM
- Thank you for your visit and comments, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/2/2017 2:10:00 PM
Hello Anne-Lise, I'm very pleased to see that your and Liam's romantic couplet made the "Best New Poems" list. I'm not surprised at all. It's an enchanted write. Congratulations again -- and continued best wishes from Ingrid and me!! Gary
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Date: 7/9/2017 3:09:00 PM
- Thank you for your visit and comments, Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/25/2017 4:25:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise , so beautiful soft and romantic thoughts going true my mind reading your write :)))hugs
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Date: 6/26/2017 2:23:00 PM
- Thank you for your visit and comments, Niall :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/16/2017 11:55:00 AM
Hello Anne-Lise, Congratulations to you and Liam for POTW!! My earlier comments below are most certainly still in effect. A Superb write by you both!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 6/16/2017 12:47:00 PM
- Nice to see you back on our poem, Gary :) - Thank you for your congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/16/2017 7:39:00 AM
Congrats on your POTW. Lovely and lyrical.
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Date: 6/16/2017 12:45:00 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Chula :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/14/2017 9:46:00 PM
Back again to say Congrats Anne-Lise and Liam for this well deserved accolade of POTW - you should be so proud...Mariaxx
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Date: 6/15/2017 2:05:00 AM
- We are, proud and happy Maria :) - Many thanks for your visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/14/2017 6:42:00 AM
This is really beautiful, Anne-lise and Liam, you both collaborate well:) congratulations on POTD:)
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Date: 6/14/2017 6:45:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/13/2017 4:40:00 AM
This is absolutely wonderful Sunshine. It transmits energy to live and hope. So inspiring. Congrats on the collaborations and for the POTW. Hugs Sunita :)
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Date: 6/13/2017 5:04:00 AM
- I'm really glad you enjoy and admire this poem, Sunita :) - Many thanks for your visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/12/2017 10:28:00 AM
Many congrats Anne-Lise and Liam on POTW:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/12/2017 10:48:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/12/2017 9:47:00 AM
Anne-Lise, this is a beauty of a love story. Congratulations to you and Liam.
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Date: 6/12/2017 10:46:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Lin :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/12/2017 8:11:00 AM
Superb collaboration Anne Lise and Liam. Congratulations on POTW. Much deserved!
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Date: 6/12/2017 10:46:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Daniel :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/11/2017 6:57:00 PM
Hi Anne- Lise n' Liam!Wow! Congratulations to you both on POTW!Very beautiful, outstanding collaboration from you both my dearest friends.Very beautifully written.Just dazzling!You both more than deserve this great honor.I'm so very happy for you two.Just awesome! Perfectly done!Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:)) Love n' hugs! xoxox D ^0^
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Date: 6/12/2017 3:48:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Dorian :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/11/2017 3:47:00 PM
congratulations anne lise brought a great big smile seeing this as poem of the week thank you always dear friend for the pleasure of joining ink with you i pray your week is blessed beautiful pal
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Date: 6/12/2017 3:47:00 AM
- Congratulations to you too, Liam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/11/2017 12:32:00 PM
This is so wonderful - so beautiful, so non-pretentious - so many special lines such as Petals of a flower dancing to a winds melody rings midnight bells. A definite fav for me! Congratulations!
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Date: 6/11/2017 12:45:00 PM
- I'm really glad you enjoy and admire this poem, Sunlite - Especially thank you for a "fav" ... greatly appreciate it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/10/2017 3:18:00 PM
Hello Anne-Lise, Yes I see this Couplet as another quite marvelous co-write with you and Liam. Beautiful, radiant, dreamy, and full of breathless expectation. The only other thing I shall add is: IT'S A FAVE IN MY BOOK!! Superb!! Cheers and Best Wishes to you both on this one!! Gary
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Date: 6/10/2017 3:37:00 PM
- Dear Gary, a pleasure you enjoyed this co- writing from Liam and me :) - Young love is always beautiful - Especially thank you for a fave in your book ... greatly appreciate it :) - Best wishes for a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/10/2017 2:59:00 PM
as always, the 2 of you....always know exactly what to do....whenever it comes to writing....you inspire a cease to fighting....and for that i applaud you both....because as you know, Love is my oath....the oath i pledge to all....because with Love, there is no way to fall....WOW my dear friend....anne, you have outdone yourself....;)
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Date: 6/10/2017 3:07:00 PM
- Thanks for beautiful comments, Eric - Always a pleasure to see you - Best wishes for a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/10/2017 12:29:00 PM
Beautiful girl with dreams in her eyes...Lovely write, dear Anne-Lise
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Date: 6/10/2017 12:34:00 PM
- Young and beautiful with soft dreams ... life is wonderful, Anand :) - Thank you for your visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/10/2017 8:10:00 AM
Just beautiful. The innocence of youth. Well done to you both.
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Date: 6/10/2017 12:21:00 PM
- Thank you for your visit and comments, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/9/2017 7:49:00 PM
also i would like to thank everyone for the heartfelt beautiful comments
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Date: 6/10/2017 12:23:00 PM
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Date: 6/9/2017 7:48:00 PM
truly a pleasure anne lise mixing ink with you your pen flowed gold through and through dear friend wishing you a blessed beautiful weekend
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Date: 6/10/2017 12:22:00 PM
- Always a pleasure :) - Lovely weekend for you, Liam - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/9/2017 10:40:00 AM
A stupendous collaboration, great imagery and emotion dancing so harmoniously:-)
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Date: 6/9/2017 12:03:00 PM
- Keith ... not Kevin, glad you enjoy it and thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/9/2017 9:34:00 AM
One word... Breathtaking!
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Date: 6/9/2017 12:02:00 PM
- One word ... Thanks :)
Date: 6/9/2017 5:25:00 AM
She basks in the beauty of nature which you and Liam painted so well. May all her wishes come true. Thanks for sharing your visions ...Maria xx
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Date: 6/9/2017 6:38:00 AM
- Thank you for your friendly visit and lovely comment, Maria :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/9/2017 3:38:00 AM
absolutely enchanting Anne Lise and Liam I do love your collaborations!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/9/2017 4:25:00 AM
- Glad you enjoy it, thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comment Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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