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Blog Posted:6/10/2023 9:42:00 PM

(My 1st try here was eaten, so a 2nd go means more abbrieviated)  Creative efforts want their works presented to others, with the hope of getting some reactions, responses.  Energy is put into making art of all different genres -- from dancing, singing, acting, composing, to painting, designing, delivering a sermon, directing or producing, exhibiting, cuisiniers.

works are made to entertain or impact or affect, even impress.  Works are made for an audiene (from one to general public), and most likely every single creator involved in the process likes to have some comment about the work that's been presented.

Critiqes may become a kind of extended editing.  Praise and applause of course give support and strength in both obvious and the future's unknown ways.

we have joined the Community of PoetrySOUP to share our own creatuve work.  SHARE   and to read, appreciate, be inspired by the work of other poets.  Many of us have formed deep feelings of friendship; have found being part of this community duspels feeling Alone.  
Many know that I make an effort to commeny on the poems I read.  I like to note the best points in what I read, because (more than commenting on the poet), for me, poems are living and meeting them deserves a stated response.  I do not speak of or approve of a "like button" to click.  I think a poem evokes response in most all cases.  It helps poets as well ss readers to state or explain our reactions.  I also think it helps the art of poetry itself.  Of course, it goes without saying, that PSp's policy of staying positive is the only way to be here, or out there in our time.  I hope we can be more sharing as the audience to one another.  
Thanks for reading.

sally

 



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Date: 7/3/2023 4:16:00 PM
Thanks for taking the time to write a blog on commenting, Sally. Your blog was well written and organized. I enjoyed reading your thoughts on the subject. Write On! Bill
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Date: 6/12/2023 1:50:00 PM
This is a good blog post Sally, it is so true. I appreciate the sweet friendships and positive atmosphere that most of the community on here have embraced. We poets often express the deepest insights of our hearts. To read the poems of others in the realm of poetry helps us to contemplate the depths of life, or to have the fun of a chuckle reading others funny poems! Poetrysoup is a beautiful community, almost like a neighborhood, and it's easy to love our neighbors on here! Receiving comments and commenting is important, similar to a sweet visit from an encouraging friend. I love your blog post, thank you for posting this <3 :)
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Date: 6/12/2023 1:00:00 PM
I like Jan was a novice and still am when I joined and the only reason, I joined was because of my cousin Lucy Carrilo. Thank you for this insightful and important blog.
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Date: 6/11/2023 2:46:00 AM
Good blog, Sally. I've been thinking along the same lines recently, but more related to contest entries. I, for one, appreciate any errors pointed out (even under the poem itself) instead of just say it is a nice write. Or worse, not comment for whatever reason. Constructive criticism helps me grow as a poet, far more that anything else. The positive feedback helps me to keep forgings ahead. Regarding the contests: It might be a bit troublesome if a number of people should comment that a particular poem is a good contender for a particular contest, but it actually misses the mark by a mile. It creates exceptations and the loss in the contest is puzzling. So, I refrain from commenting in such cases.
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/11/2023 5:53:00 AM
I agree with you Suzette, I don't mind getting a soupie to let me know of errors, you can read a poem time and time again and still miss something out.
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 6/11/2023 4:22:00 AM
Hi, Suzette! I agree. My husband is now my number one reader/editor, Critic, after 2 years of my teaching him about poetry. There was a time when he woukdn’t even read it if i asked. “Negative” comments help growth & improvemen for me. Listen & apply if agree.
Date: 6/11/2023 1:00:00 AM
Fab blog Sally, Since I joined soup (as a total novice to poetry) I have thrived on the comments and encouragement of others, and being gifted premium memberships and a lifetime membership it's spurred me on with my writing and I have learned so so much from gifted people here. I can't see any point in having comments turned off, but some don't like any form of feedback, especially when they consider their poetic efforts are far superior to others. Write on ! hugs jan xx
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 6/11/2023 4:39:00 AM
Must say i’ve not come across anyone who’s turned off comments. I wouldn’t think much of that — it would just be indication that i can save my energy by not typing. :-)
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 6/11/2023 4:29:00 AM
Itry to keep comments very general if poem says it’s a contest entry.when a poem has indeed placd & says so in the intro, of course that makes commentingeasier. Raves about entries don’t help, but i think peple just trying to be nice in those cases. .?
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Suzette Richards
Date: 6/11/2023 2:35:00 AM
Yes, that is also a mystery to me: Why would anyone post a poem and not allow comments. It is much like slapping a plate of food in front of someone daring them to complain about it.

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