The Returning Smiles

The Retuning Smiles

i see beneath pairs of almond-shaped, green leavess
On white fabric, flowers set with four heart-shaped petals,
The color of sun-kissed blueberries,
Decorating the smocked sundress  of the pig-tailed toddler
.Hanging over the crook of her mother’s arm, and
With her dazzling, black eyes looking all around 
For some reason to be let down
Just as I was passing by,

Happy to see a pretty little child. and say, “Hi!”
The way any older woman might,
Wishing to receive a second’s gift
From the beauteous youth of the child’s smile.
But, she leaned into her mom’s chest, shy, seeing me
Stand there, one hand eagerly waving along with 
My saying, “What nice flowers all over your dress,”
Diverting her attention from me down to what she wore
— The bright hearts scattered over her knees,
Causing a slight smile as her head lifted,
Which I shared, showing her my own happy,
     big, slightly giggling smile,
To which her mom leamed in to kiss
Her darling girl nose to nose, thus blessing 
Away the shyness…so the little girl
Shifted to sitting tall on her mom’s elbow 
To seriously size me up 
     for herself, eye to eye —
For some moments —
While I almost lost hope.
Until at last her creased lips started to part.
The corners of her mouth rose, showing 
Her several front, white baby teeth,
Set to share her smile,
Elating me, so I announced loudly,
    “How pretty you are smiling!”
But when i lifted my eyes to see
Her reaction to my gleeful words,
There was no child, nor mother there.  Even
Gone was the street I assumed
    I’d been walking along…

And neither had I been dreaming, but 
Speaking as I had into the air beyond my bed. 
I’d been hallucinating.  Another instance lately
That comes out of the blue, while wide awake,
Likely caused by the prefacing of exhaustion and 
    horrid pain I sometimes feel
Crossing my sight and mind with a 
Boosting interplay with people who’re likely to smile ~

Who come, then go.


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(c) sally young eslinger 2/25/23
Thanks be to 
God…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 4/10/2023 4:18:00 AM
Hello Sally, yes dreams do seem real at times. so does night mares. I do not get nightmares. Ina a good dream i do not want to wake up. Wishing you the best. You are in my prays. /Darlene\
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Date: 3/2/2023 7:32:00 AM
Whoa~ I hope this doesn't continue. Is it possible it is a medicine you are taking. Of course, it was delightful and not scary. My husband when he has his last spinal surgery was way out in left field with hallucinations. He said there were psychedelic colored cars in the parking lot racing. Why he used that word I have no idea. He is not one to have that kind of vocabulary. LOL..Thanks for the sharing of this one. Sara
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Date: 2/26/2023 7:12:00 PM
Sally this is a favorite. You had me there with the child and the mom and the smile. What a beautiful thought to find out you were hallucinating. Wonderful thoughts of love through a mother and her baby. It brought joy to you at the time and sadness when you realized it was not so. such an incredible emotional tale you have written incredibly well. Thank you for sharing and I am praying you have a full recovery in our Lord Jesus name... god heal you and bless you to overcome...Hugs Michael
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Date: 2/26/2023 2:35:00 AM
What a great imagination you have Sally. One cannot but admire the details of your lovely poem. Do read my funny ghost story.
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Date: 2/25/2023 5:19:00 PM
You are so descriptive, Sally, those first lines of almond shaped green leaves and sun kissed blueberries to the bright hearts scattered over her knees and set to share her smile - so glorious, then the drop to the air beyond my bed and the exhaustion and pain, it all weaves such a sad story, but in a masterful way, I am touched and amazed~
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Date: 2/25/2023 8:08:00 PM
Michelle, my thinking was that description of a dream could be a but vague and a but vague fir something real that is familiar to oeoplee. Butdescrjbing something very rea, which allears as shch bht js nit, needs kits if descruotuin (Exactly as alleared ti me) tk Becine set un cincrete..Vsdjre debtjng its reakuty jn krder ti shicj the reader the wat u was shicjed, hmmm, hooe thar najes sense. Very happy you related ti this one, thanks 4 pyour time & dear comment!
Date: 2/25/2023 4:07:00 PM
Reading this poem, I went from smiling ear to ear to a sad face instantly. Such a range of emotion. Very sad, Sally but very well written.
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 2/25/2023 7:46:00 PM
Hi, Daniel. Thank you for your time & comment about this lomg, rather packed poem. I had auite a good time earlier meeting your poetry, which i greatly enjoyed doingIt’s quite an honor for you to read my work. Thank you so much.
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