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Whisper Me a Song, My Love

Whisper me a seraphic song, my love.
Let every other useless noise be still.
Let me be gratified in your sweet melody,
Let music in my heart with love fill. 

Let me listen to the rustle of the soft wind,
It blows through all the weeping willows,
It scatters fragrance of the verdant woods
It is like mellow music, a lullaby of shadows.

Or just like billows that roll towards the shore,
Turning up a light foam as each kiss the dark rocks,
Can you hear the lullaby that they vibrantly compose?
Mellifluous sounds that issue from a beautiful music box.

So, whisper me a pleasing song, my dear,
A lucid theme of infinite clear harmony, 
Let my soul feel ceaseless euphonic ecstasy,
Let us indulge in our lasting love eternally.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Edmonds  Avatar
May 14, 2021 at 4:16 PM
Beautiful words Victor, may that song of love whisper to your heart forever… Belle
Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2021 at 4:55 AM
A lovely write! A fave.
Horsman Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 9:44 PM
Beautiful poetry Victor.
Ball Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 3:39 PM
Beautiful Victor. You write the most beautiful sonnets. Love it. A fave. God Bless, JB
Eslinger Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 1:48 PM
Have sent this to my Fav list. Really! I think it as close to a perfect love poem as one can write. Dazzling...
Andresen Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 11:20 AM
- Love is written in capital letters in this poem, Victor :) - Beautiful :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)
Buehler Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 10:09 AM
Serene and joyous, an enchanting song of love and beautiful nature. Wonderful! :)
Roper Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 10:07 AM
Great write, Victor. To be at the beach right now would be refreshing and listening to all the sounds around and no people.
Jayasankar Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 8:45 AM
The mellifluous song from the soul of nature is sweet and gratifying... a melodious verse Victor... God bless.. ~ Ani
Rose  Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 8:25 AM
Love by its very own nature is always eternal. If not by chronicle age then by spiritual age. Much love :)
Kannan Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 7:02 AM
Pleasant read!!! This is so beautifully written, Victor. Loved the flow and the emotions. Thanks for sharing...
Seeker Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 6:39 AM
Ah! To be in love! Oozing sweetness
Kendrick Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 6:23 AM
Ahh!! So romantic. I do like the sounds that are heard when listening to a seashell but I know you are speaking of deeper meaning here. Thanks for your visits to my page. Sara
Daniel Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 6:10 AM
A touching melodious song of love, Victor, can feel the harmony:)
Pandit Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 5:20 AM
You speak of what she is thinking. Delightful song of love, Victor--enjoyed the tenor of your romantic verse.
Poet Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 2:16 AM
Absolutely charming Victor, and so full of visceral, vivid imagery - words we can feel in your wonderful poem. Have a great day, best regards
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