In This Last Waltz

** In This Last Waltz **

I am swirling around thoughts,
Swirling even ‘tween ‘em , too — stepping forward —
Getting ready for this nght’s joys to end , and 
See The Last Waltz come up on my dance card.

I’m twirling thru wonderings 
— Biding my time hopping with the rocket man —
As my mind goes wandering,
Considering all the ways Time’s passing
    Changes things — 

I’ve been tapping along to the music’s beats 
While “tripping through the light fantastic”
Off into only the finest of old memories.
I beg away the painful ones, 
Keeping them in a far, secluded realm, 
    Which  I look to name Forgotten  — 
And from where their attempts to recur will be for naught.

I’ve been gossiping with Caledonia 
About which men will still be fit for the last dance.
We’ve been stomping to rythms of the blues —
Both of us wearing our alabaster shoes,    
    So fine for kicking up our gowns with some flare.

We’re running away from The Last Waltz as it ends..
    Just minutes before midnight…
We’re sliding onto the taxi’s backseat,
Snagging our dresses, plus losing a shoe!

Nonetheless, we’re squeezed tightly together,
Shouting for the driver to race speedily off into the wind…
As we’re testifying that only good memories
      Will be lived
To end our fun, illustrious, regal  most fanciful night!


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(c) sally young eslinger. 6/28/2023
** written to “The Last Waltz” concert  music by The Band
  With a mention of Elton John as the Rocket Man.
  The prince, not notedwas, I think in another realm…;-)
Thanks be to God…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Eslinger Avatar
June 30, 2023 at 9:28 PM
Did anyone get the clues that this is 90% update of CINDERELLA, before any prince (tho i used word Regal in description at dance’s end??? Ie. Not a carriage… but a taxi; not just cinderella, but 2 women, etc.
Goldsmith Avatar
June 29, 2023 at 12:05 PM
"In This Last Waltz" is a lovely write/story. I enjoyed this one. Have a great day writing away....................
Andresen Avatar
June 29, 2023 at 6:54 AM
- Many years since I danced ... but, many good memories :) - A lovely poem, Sally :) - hugs
Pandit Avatar
June 29, 2023 at 3:44 AM
Enjoyed the musical tenor of your poem, Sally.
Meadows Avatar
June 28, 2023 at 11:08 PM
It is good to have a dance! A good poem. Well done.
Volumes Avatar
June 28, 2023 at 10:45 PM
Wow Sally what a wondeful night ! Long ago memories of dancing out on the dancefloor til after midnight. Wow those were the days. Loved your poem. So lively and descriptive, with a sweet story running through it. So well done.
Buhagiar Avatar
June 28, 2023 at 10:23 PM
Delightful poem, Sally. I wish I could dance like you.
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