Devotion Poem, This Painting I Do

*** This Painting I Do ***
                        (A Devotion Poem for Jim)

It is my heart
Painting your portrait
Out over this paper
After I caught your profile, 
When you weren’t looking,
Casting your attention
In another direction,
While I blended in
The colors of your chin,
And you hadn’t known that
I’d peeked over 
Your well-kept
Walls of mystery, which
Usually…no, always even I 
Do not cross…But
Today the artist, I,
Let my sight spy
To set down the contour lines
Of your portrait, which
I promise when completed 
To then hide this artwork 
From the view of anyone else:
Beneath a cross-hatched weave 
Of a thousand tiny strokes
Of glittering beams of gold,
And shining rays of silver,
Stippled stars overall to consume 
You — silhouetted by all the light
Of God’s gracing and
My loving heart’s way 
Of seeing you.


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(C) sally young eslinger 12/10/2022
Thanks be to God…



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(C) sally young eslinger 12/10/2022
Thanks be to God…
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Legros Kelley Avatar
December 14, 2022 at 2:12 AM
What an amazing gift, both as a poet with a gifted pen as well as an artist, that is wonderful :) Thank you for visiting my poem today, your words were so beautiful. You just cannot know how much your precious words of compassion touched me; you are a blessing <3
Lawrence Avatar
December 11, 2022 at 7:40 AM
Sally , This is so intimate and beautiful. I too am a painter. It has always been my first love. The details and emotions you have woven touch my heart . I love this devotional poem ! Hugs and blessings, Susan :)
Eslinger Avatar
December 11, 2022 at 7:53 AM
Susan, your dear note of relating your own art/poetry to what you felt here has made me weep. You see, my husband will not let me “stare” at him long enough for me to do his portrait. This poem, then, IS my heart painting…if you go on FB check my pg my art is lots posted. At top is a yellow kid’s angel. I look forward to our sharing! Big Hugs!
DiMino Avatar
December 10, 2022 at 8:44 PM
Wow! Extraordinary writing! You paint with both brush and words. Exceptional poetry. Beautiful, heartfelt portrait. You get a Fav!
Eslinger Avatar
December 11, 2022 at 8:13 AM
Joe, dear heart! The sketch in this poem describes the tale of my wish to paint Jim’s portrait IF he’d agree to it! I don’t even have a good photo to copy from! Your words are so supportive & touch me deeply. You & I share a very deep mutual respect. Thank you for your words & your Friendship …many blessings over you! sally
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December 11, 2022 at 8:01 AM
Joe, dear heart! The sketch in this poem describes the tale of my wish to paint Jim’s portrait IF he’d agree to it! I don’t even have a good photo to copy from! Your words are so supportive & touch me deeply. You & I share a very deep mutual respect. Thank you for your words & your Friendship …many blessings over you! sally
Rose  Avatar
December 10, 2022 at 10:18 AM
Ah, spoken like a true artist dear Sally, your observation as as impeccable as this precious poem, Love this xo
Eslinger Avatar
December 11, 2022 at 8:11 AM
Mystic Rose! I include your title to commend another who is not afraid of the designation “mystic.” I am blown away by this comment from YOU! I deeply thank you! Xoxoxo sally
Eslinger Avatar
December 11, 2022 at 8:06 AM
Mystic Rose! I include your title to commend another who is not afraid of the designation “mystic.” I am blown away by this comment from YOU! I deeply thank you! Xoxoxo sally
Poet Avatar
December 10, 2022 at 6:02 AM
Sally, you've put a lot of thought and affection into your dedication. You're a poet at heart, with a pen that can compose beautiful, moving verse.
Eslinger Avatar
December 11, 2022 at 8:21 AM
Lasaad, thank you for such supportive words. I often think about the ways and how’s poetry lives in us. I gave it up for 35 years because I found its process SO painful. But 2019, I took it on again, now I transcribe it more than seek it & I keep hoping to improve. You are a very talented poet. Your words touch me! Bless you! sally
Eslinger Avatar
December 11, 2022 at 8:20 AM
Lasaad, thank you for such supportive words. I often think about the ways and how’s poetry lives in us. I gave it up for 35 years because I found its process SO painful. But 2019, I took it on again, now I transcribe it more than seek it & I keep hoping to improve. You are a very talented poet. Your words touch me! Bless you! sally
Pandit Avatar
December 10, 2022 at 5:21 AM
You have a mind of an artist and pen that writes heartfelt poetry. Much care and love in this devotion, Sally.
Eslinger Avatar
December 11, 2022 at 8:28 AM
Vijay, my poet friend. I thank you for coming by to read and your time you write such a supportive comment. With your own poetry being so excellent, so truly a holding of the depth of the art of Poetry, I am very touched! Blessings of continued inspiration to you! sally
Buhagiar Avatar
December 9, 2022 at 10:42 PM
If you can paint you have great talent. Jim would be proud to see your work. Lovely poem. Happy dreams.
Eslinger Avatar
December 11, 2022 at 8:38 AM
Hi, dear Victor! Well, not sure if Jim will see this poem haha I drew since always. Wrote first poems at 10. Studied ballet locally til at 17, when I was accepted to study at Met Opera School of Ballet NYC. stunk at playing flute. Couldn’t act but helped make the costumes. Taught ballet since 17 and writing since 18. Had to quit college cause they required swimming and calculus & I couldn’t do either haha. Hugs!
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