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Balmy Dawn

verdant slopes sparkle
create a silver valley
river snakes gently

© Harry J Horsman 2021

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Brian Strand

October 2, 2021 at 12:36 AM

Very picturesque images Harry

Evelyn Judy Buehler

May 9, 2021 at 8:46 AM

So visual and lovely, Harry. Sigh...

Malabika Ray Choudhury

March 7, 2021 at 2:02 PM

Love your haiku, Harry. Beautiful images ~ Mala

Alexis Y.

February 28, 2021 at 8:37 PM

WoW! Harry, You have penned such a lovely scene. Well done. Have a wonderful evening:-) Alexis

Angela Crabtree

February 20, 2021 at 3:43 PM

Your words portray beautiful images, Harry. :)

Eve Roper

February 13, 2021 at 11:00 PM

Great imagery, Harry. It is cold outside and we might get snow in South Texas.

Robert Pettit

February 12, 2021 at 5:07 PM

With the temperatures as cold as they have been the past few mornings, a balmy morning would be very appreciated. Good write.

Judy Ball

February 12, 2021 at 1:16 PM

You paint a beautiful majestic picture here Harry. Love it. A fave. God Bless, JB

Kim Rodrigues

February 12, 2021 at 11:32 AM

A lovely scene!

Akkina Downing

February 12, 2021 at 10:29 AM

WOW!! This is superbly done, Harry. Such freshness to be admired for sure :)

Andrea Dietrich

February 11, 2021 at 5:23 PM

a very lovely picture you painted here, harry.

Paul Callus

February 11, 2021 at 2:42 PM

You have created a beautiful sparkling, slow moving image, Harry! Well done! Regards // paul

Heidi Sands

February 11, 2021 at 2:13 PM

Beautiful Haiku Harry! I love it :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

February 11, 2021 at 11:43 AM

Hello Harry Horseman, I love the way you describe the dawn. i have never seen the dawn. Only sunsets Enjoy your day my friend.

Carolyn Devonshire

February 11, 2021 at 8:18 AM

What a lovely haiku, Harry! I can see the slopes, valley and river clearly through your creative descriptions. Excellent work, my friend. Hugs, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

February 11, 2021 at 7:11 AM

Those snaking rivers have those negative ions that restore the body, emotion, and mind. Enjoyed reading your work. Still thinking about my work "Doomed". Sara

Tom Cunningham

February 11, 2021 at 5:41 AM

You paint a stunning image with your words Harry. Tom

Mystic Rose Rose

February 11, 2021 at 5:25 AM

I can scene it all in my mind. Its beautiful when we are one with nature . The greatest gift God ever gave us was the gift of the eyes. How can one not appreciate the beauty that surrounds us. Sending you a cup of imaginary coffee this morning. Sip it slowly and think of He who gave you the eyes to see. Whats there not to love. xo

Mahtab Bangalee

February 11, 2021 at 1:41 AM

superb and fantastic

Victor Buhagiar

February 11, 2021 at 1:33 AM

A description I love and which I often use, Great one, Harry. ~~

Rama Balasubramanian

February 10, 2021 at 11:24 PM

Top of hill view. After you replied, it has become even more beautiful. The image of flowing river, green sparkling hills. Too good. The very thought is so much joy giving. Thanks for writing such a beautiful haiku