Reflections

A new dawn breaks with morning light As we reflect on those we knew We recall friends who lost life's fight A new dawn breaks with morning light Some friends took their heavenly flight And journeyed on beyond the blue A new dawn breaks with morning light As we reflect on those we knew 1-02-2023

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Sally Eslinger

Date: 2/4/2023 7:26:00 PM

I love this poem, Joseph. I’m fav-ing it. The flow is so easy. Comforting. Like a nightlight., and reflecting stars glued to a child’s ceiling. Also, like the gentler love & remembraces for those i’ve loved who’ve passed ononce the shock has eased. A wondros ie e. Bless you! saly

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/27/2023 5:03:00 AM

Very emotive and expressive lines penned. As we get older, more and more of those we once knew go on to meet their creator. Sometimes we can't remember for sure if a person we once knew passed. If this is for a contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/2/2023 7:18:00 PM

"we reflect on those we knew." It seems as though we've been doing that a lot lately. Your thoughts caress softly around my and my heart. My best to you, in the New Year. Hugs, Brandy