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Through Sleeps Veils

Through Sleep’s Veils 

through sleep’s veils
my feet battle blankets
as comets streak the bleak night





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(c) sally young eslinger 8/17/2023

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/18/2023 12:16:00 PM

Hello Sally Thais right sheets and covers are not always a comfort, on a hot night. enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene\

Karen Croft

Date: 9/6/2023 9:13:00 AM

Love your haiku. Am a big fan of writing them! Thanks for your kind comments!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/5/2023 12:16:00 PM

Some nights it seems that way. LOL..Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/21/2023 5:18:00 PM

Ohhh I like this one a lot!

Bill Baker

Date: 8/18/2023 5:15:00 PM

Sheets don't seem to like feet much. Nice imagery in your poem, Sally. Bill

Sally Eslinger
Date: 8/19/2023 8:11:00 PM

So good to see yu Bill !! Thanks! I’e been working on painting with words. In my next life, i do hope it will be music with comments by Bach & Puccini b-)

Silent One

Date: 8/18/2023 8:24:00 AM

You've really created deep imagery here..

Sally Eslinger
Date: 8/19/2023 8:14:00 PM

Thanks Sulent One! For me, that’s been hard in haikus. Working on it. Hugs…

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/18/2023 1:35:00 AM

- ... cold feet at night ... no sleep :) - Great one, Sally :) - hugs

Sally Eslinger
Date: 8/19/2023 8:16:00 PM

Thanks for commenting Anne-Lise! Hugs

Eve Roper

Date: 8/17/2023 9:10:00 PM

I love this one. I don't have the issue of my blankets I when I fall asleep I sleep soundly. Not unless I take something that will make my legs have releases leg syndrome. Enjoyed reading.

Sally Eslinger
Date: 8/17/2023 9:58:00 PM

I have Restless Leg syndrome too but dr RXed Ropinerole for it, which works to stop that but knocks me out, too. So glad you liked this haiku. Thanks.

Speaks Volumes

Date: 8/17/2023 8:31:00 PM

Oh Sally, I can so relate. I thought I was the only one whose feet battle to secure a place under the blankets. Such realism. I truly enjoyed this. Well done.

Sally Eslinger
Date: 8/17/2023 9:55:00 PM

Volumes! No, you aren’t alone. Jim sleeps with no tussling of blankets, but always has his feet left uncovered. Haha i suppose if our feet were truly flat, there’d be no issue. Perhaps there’s a suggestion box in heaven? Hmm…or maybe not 8-)