Journey a Devotion Poem

JOURNEY   — A Devotion Poem 
                         (For Jim)

We have been blessed
To make a thick book
Of calendar pages,
A long past to now
With our passports
Stamped across the continent
  Of the Unexpected.  We
Kept brave on joint
Climbs over the peaks
Of the high range of Difficulties;
And been deeply affected
By observing so many wonders
On our voyages
Over Surprised Sea.

During this life together,
We have encountered the Furies;
Filibustered the Fates; 
Entertained Muses; 
Tried to help those with greater needs;
Shared trials, delights and feasts
With family, as well as recent
Holidays alone with each other.  
And, all the years, shared
Our home with darling cats and pups.

We have followed the rule
Of forgiving seventy-times-seven;
Believed Love is God-given;
Had occasions to carry each other. 
Across heavy traffic on the highways
Of hard Elsewheres, of massive Unknowns;
And we were often pelted with questions 
Pouring on us in sudden storms
That only faith could calm.

But I doubt either of us
Has ever wondered 
If our love would last.
For silence can still carry
The conversing of our thoughts;
Anticipation still lies
   in our meeting after being apart;
And our hearts touch 
Through any distance
In a testimony to the destiny
And promise
Exchanged in our first 
Moonlit embrace of each other.



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(c) sally young eslinger 2/22
Thanks be to God…….

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 12/7/2022 3:22:00 AM
Only through the Holy Spirit can we love with an all-compassing love. Life together is not easy, but through His love and grace a couple can pull through. I enjoyed reading this work. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 12/3/2022 10:37:00 AM
Wow, extraordinary write. Honest, heartfelt, something most of us can relate in the way of journeys and trials. I think Jim and you are very lucky to still have one another. And I think love carries through all distance and lifetimes. Beautiful read. Thank you.
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Date: 12/3/2022 5:42:00 AM
Sally a simply beautiful poem of love and a journey of togetherness! Is Jim your husband? You are a good kind soul Sally! Debx
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 12/3/2022 9:50:00 AM
Great thanks for your appreciative words. In 2023 Jim and I will have 40th anniversary! Blessings upon you!
Date: 12/2/2022 9:57:00 AM
...wowza...nice write....been a while since my last visit.....you're right....an innner devotion to the journey through peace.... ....stan sand
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 12/3/2022 9:57:00 AM
Brother Sand! Glad to see you back again, man, €8~). I’d looked for blogs of yours too, tho I’ve been gone bits with SIX surgeries not minor, since 5/29. Hope you and all your family are fine. I’ll check out your latest work…& True, I doubt Great works are written IN strife, tho may be caused by it… xoxo
Date: 12/2/2022 6:58:00 AM
Great use of metaphor and imagery. I suppose one would understand more if one knew who Jim is.
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 12/3/2022 10:07:00 AM
Victor, thought you knew Jim is my husband of four decades. And I hope all is well with you this weekend. Here in central kY, the sun has shone beautifully for two days; the trees are bare now tho the proud evergreens hold their deeper verdant greens silhouetted against the clear blue sky,; & I lie here under 3 blankets, thinking of you. Be well! y
Date: 11/30/2022 8:51:00 PM
Oh wow! Reads like a fairy tale! A fav
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 12/3/2022 10:18:00 AM
As written, I do hope it is Part One of a tale. Inside me, it feels like it wants to be. I must put Milton, and Dante on audible perhaps to btrah through the creative cocoon. I’ve been quite I’ll lately, unable to draw, but the poetry has come well, I think, and often. The up and down, in and out of my embroidery stitches keeps me in a sort of continuing prayer, perhaps bringing prompting lines. I’m embroidering an I-designed mother and child “icon”. Enjoy your weekend. Hugs!
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