Summers Ending Nocturne

Over the pond’s lilies’ leaves,
morning dew settles glistening sleeves —
a covering to compliment the green,

a translucent, hint-of-blue ~ from a quivering 
mist hanging, hushing everything, so all the doing
of sunrise dances must in-stasis remain…

~ or transfer by essence to the understanding
intuiting within — to find birds preen, not taking wing;
and trees upswing drying branches, delighted by wet dew.

All breathe the notes of summer’s ending nocturne
 composed throughout the woods and, now, day upon day, 
repeat that lullaby, trickling the scales as in a piano’s play

to accompany the year’s passing time, turning into autumn
with her blazing, flaming, dazzling, bejewelling
before Mother Nature deeply exhales — weeping dew

over all her gardened Beauty blooms — beginning
their fated wilting, falling, final, felt arias’ murmuring
the refrains life plants within, holding a promise of re-birth

to come past winter’s dominance, all frozen still 
with a quiet sleeping peace — prelude to renewal…
to dawn’s Spring dances and the refreshing touch of dew.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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September 14, 2023 at 10:09 AM
I'm sitting here listening to amour by Jean-Michel Blair taking in it's beautiful flow
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September 10, 2023 at 6:00 PM
Sally, your poem is an absolute treasure trove of beauty. Every word flows effortlessly, creating a symphony of emotions. The imagery you have woven is so exquisitely vivid, that it feels like stepping into a vibrant painting. The rhymes in your poem are like sparkling jewels, adding an extra layer of enchantment. Overall, your work is a stunning masterpiece that captivates the senses and leaves the reader in awe.
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September 9, 2023 at 12:37 PM
This is visually so, so beautiful Sally.Stunning rhymes. Flows so beautifully. So much to love about the poem. The last stanza in particular, is divine. So, so enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you.
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September 9, 2023 at 3:51 AM
A truly inspirational and very fine positive poem. Your free verse works wonders for me.
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September 8, 2023 at 7:32 PM
I see you don't often do rhyming poems, but this is dazzling, love all the internal dashes like 'birds preen not taking wing' and 'Mother Nature deeply exhales' - all a picture of the softly ending summer~
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September 8, 2023 at 5:56 AM
This is great! Again, very descriptive and vivid. Inspiring
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September 7, 2023 at 7:48 AM
A lovely write. Summer is gone for this year and fall is almost here with winter coming. Have a blessed day................
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September 7, 2023 at 4:25 AM
"to come past winter’s dominance, all frozen still with a quiet sleeping peace — prelude to renewal… to dawn’s Spring dances and the refreshing touch of dew." -- so beautiful, soothing and hopeful. Started playing in my head "The Right of Spring" -- love it! Wow!
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September 6, 2023 at 11:46 AM
- Beautifully poetically written, Sally - Depicting the seasons in all their colors ... spring is my favorite time ... winter is my enemy (due to my fibromyalgia) - Thank you very much for visiting my poems today :) - hugs
Volumes Avatar
September 6, 2023 at 9:04 AM
A stunning poem Sally with glorious descriptive phrases that set one's mind to enchanted woods and blossoming gardens divine. A favourite for me.
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September 6, 2023 at 7:11 AM
over all her gardened Beauty blooms — beginning their fated wilting, falling, final, felt arias’ murmuring the refrains life plants within, holding a promise of re-birth--how eloquently you convey end of summer my friend. Beautifully crafted poem, Sally.
Allison Avatar
September 6, 2023 at 5:59 AM
sally this is a joy to read, I especially love the imagery in the second stanza - sooo beautiful:-) hugs jan xx
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