A Mystic Prayer For the Broken

** A Mystic’s Words for the Broken **

The endless prayer
Paces alert in the old cobblestone alleyways
In the nearly abandoned 
Neighborhoods where sounds
Carry easily and echo even all
Footsteps and cries —

The endless prayer
Goes on, ready to listen whenever
Called by the Holy Spirit
To intervene, to bring 
Voice to the souls
About pleas heard
Bouncing off the cobblestones;
Rattling the old tenement’s windows;
Distressing  the attendant angels,
Who quickly retrieve their armor

And join the endless prayer,
Lingering in the passages
Of the soul’s aria for healing
For the despairing hearts
    Having lost peace,
    Lost love.
Hurt carries the echoes
From the cobblestones to the clouds.

The endless prayer rains.
Drowned hearts have no tears.
Flooded streets do not echo.
The thirsty soul sighs
Along with the present angels,
Who take up the leitmotif of
The endless prayer.

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(c) sally young eslinger 9/29/22
Thanks be to God…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 9/30/2022 1:23:00 PM
Such a poignant picture you've sketched here, Sally. I can picture the poverty of certain blighted parts of the Middle East, where there as many people who have lost eyes as there are cats. It's heartbreaking, and yet the saints and the angels toil humbly in these places to plant rainbows amidst the gloom. :) gw
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 10/2/2022 8:13:00 PM
Gershon, many thanks for reading and your meaningful comment. Sun synchrony to me that the FL flooding came the day after I wrote this. Take care….
Date: 9/30/2022 11:07:00 AM
Amen Sally. Beautiful images and use of language in your prayer. We send up an endless stream of prayers that are music to God's ears and heart. Thank you for this beautiful poem. Blessings and prayers.
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Date: 10/2/2022 8:07:00 PM
Sam! So good to see you. Yoir comment is so true snout God and touched me deeply. Many refer to our endless prayers as nagging, but it feels like truth when u write they are music to God. My soul tells me God ould be upset by silence of his children. Xoxo
Date: 9/30/2022 6:44:00 AM
Your poem is full of truth. Love will take us to our destination.
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 10/2/2022 7:58:00 PM
Hi. Victor! Yes, Love through God varies us! Thank you for reading and supporting comment. Big hugs!
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