Painting You

Painting You

Before painting, I first sketch you
In my mind’s eye…To compose
The lines, shapes, shadows and lights, 
That work altogether to form a semblant sight
Of you for any relative, friend or acquaintance…

Next, I embrace the required courage
To face the blank canvas; to dip my brush 
In sublime tones for my wild orchid wishes,
Wanting to stroke across the heavens
For reflecting starlights bright,
Which I’ll situate to split the darker places
Where the inks bleed and branch out
Around you, smudging your purest colors…

That I endeavor to recover
When illness tries to smother
You with a viridescent blanket for on-going days;
Cloaking the glance of your azure blue eyes; 
Pulling gray and white from your skull
To streak through your forest brown hair;
Rushing flag red moments to your cheeks 
When you growl, “No.  Don’t—“ when I 
Try any way to help you through the fevers
That hang dredged plum-violet clouds over
The sofa — away — where you stay sleeping…

While I sit crimson awake worrying,
Watching you breathe…And asking
Through faith’s golden prayers for your healing;
For our holy Lord to send some ministering angels 
— With their glistening opaline feathered wings;
Who side by side, place hands on you ~ veiling
My first view of prayers’ answers coming true;
Lifting me to a bloom of rosebud gratitude.

I paint you never far.
I paint your ocean blue eyes opening.
I paint you always beside me in a sandcastle brown.
I dapple the air over us an effervescent pink.
I paint your prism presence close.
I paint your mid-night’s Arora Borealis dancing hues.
Our love is a stippled, rolling color wheel
Of our linked diamond destinies: journeying
Together on amber roads under sapphire skies.


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(c) sally young eslingwe 10/17-18/2023
Glory to God…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 10/29/2023 6:51:00 PM
...wowza....wrt life....you be 'sum-writer' ......stan
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 11/13/2023 11:33:00 AM
Stan, yo thnx xoxoxoxo xxx ooooooooh!
Date: 10/29/2023 1:06:00 PM
you are amazing girl !
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 11/13/2023 11:36:00 AM
Vie U tu aussi! 8-) luv
Date: 10/28/2023 6:15:00 PM
had to read again
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 11/13/2023 11:39:00 AM
Oh, Timothy, hug your beloved for me! Thanks over and again!
Date: 10/21/2023 3:08:00 PM
An outstanding poem for imagery and this leaves me feeling so impressed by your depth of feelings for your sick loved one. I hope they are getting better
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Date: 10/21/2023 7:03:00 AM
"Next, I embrace the required courage To face the blank canvas; to dip my brush In sublime tones for my wild orchid wishes," -- "I paint you never far. I paint your ocean blue eyes opening. I paint you always beside me in a sandcastle brown. I dapple the air over us an effervescent pink. I paint your prism presence close." Fabulous writing! I am in awe -- need I say more...I hope all is healing in your life. I know well the upsets of illness. Blessings my friend. Oh, a FAV!
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Date: 10/21/2023 3:41:00 AM
This is such a stunning, heartfelt poem dear Sally full of beautifully poetic lines. Absolutely divine that it captivates and draws ( excusing the pun!) the reader in. You are such a gifted poetess. I love, admire, every single line but especially,’‘Where the inks bleed and branch out’ ‘ With their glistening opaline feathered wings’Lifting me to a bloom of rosebud gratitude’. Wow! Your use of colour as an artist is spellbinding. This is a truly inspiring work of art from you. Loved it!
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Christina Bowring
Date: 10/21/2023 3:42:00 AM
Hugs and smiles to you both for a happy, healthy weekend. Xx
Date: 10/20/2023 2:39:00 PM
Your verse as always so evocative, Sally, I really feel the 'embrace the required courage to face the blank canvas' - everyone who creates knows that takes its own kind of courage, and the hope you convey in your last stanza is just so inspiring~
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Date: 10/20/2023 2:21:00 PM
What a beautiful write. "Love It" You are very talented/blessed. Have a great weekend writing/painting away.............
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Date: 10/20/2023 10:16:00 AM
what a blessed stroll this is and the lovely fissure that yields the working mind of an artist all the more delight, as we traverse the passageways that never reveal themselves in each stroke of the brush...in my poem "I know why i sit here" i have witnessed such as this sitting with the artist, listening in rapture as his thoughts accompany each stroke, brush or pen we are of the same soul....take a bow Sally, they are in awe and why they are not clapping
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Date: 10/20/2023 7:40:00 AM
Your talent for painting is inborn. Only a true artist can paint like you. Blessings.
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 10/20/2023 8:01:00 AM
Dear friend, Victor, what a sweet comment. As a kid, when mom wanted to get me away so she could read, she’d say, “Go to your room & draw.” haha xxooxo sally
Date: 10/20/2023 7:12:00 AM
I paint you never far. I paint your ocean blue eyes opening. I paint you always beside me in a sandcastle brown---such endearing words of love and care. A poem from the heart, Sally.
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 10/20/2023 7:55:00 AM
Vijay, thank U 4 reading & comment. I am happy the devotion jim& i feel emerged to weigh over the concerns of health. Took 3 days to write & polish this one. Learned a lot. Felt a lot. Poetry is a great teacher… Blessings, Vijay.
Date: 10/20/2023 12:14:00 AM
I can feel how challenging it must be for you through your word weaving here, how well you’ve expressed,when handling someone we love who is sick, sometimes it isnt easy, as iv seen that too myself. As for your poem i can help but admire the way you’ve woven words, especially your brilliant use of colors is so very creative and impressive! Excellent flow of words too, and i especially love your use of gems too! And the love that emanates, pleasure reading you.praying for better days for you
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 10/20/2023 8:10:00 AM
Empress! Once again, i’m thankful U could relate this to ur own life experience, & wrote such a lovely comment = humbling. Blessings & many thanks too for your intercessory prayers.
Date: 10/20/2023 12:10:00 AM
Oh Sally this is perfection at its best love. I can feel the power of your love by the colors you portray here. Prayers are with you, today and always dear friend xo
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 10/20/2023 7:46:00 AM
Vie, reading your high words of comment, i called “Whoa!” to the air. This was work to tell the story right. I checked every word & punc mark & line placement inc. cutting 60 wds. A labor of love. This wasn’t a poem that just came up in total as some do. “I paint you close” was the initial inspiring line as Jim was in hosp w/me here alone. Love you, Vie!
Date: 10/19/2023 4:35:00 PM
Sally this is lovely. Someone is ill? I pray for healing and recovered strength. This was an engaging sweet write.
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 10/19/2023 8:15:00 PM
Hi Karen! well i’ve had many battles w/my health, but my hub Jim of 40 yrs, has a genetic narrowing of duodenum tube from stomach that get very awful & drs cant treat even in hosp. Thanks for reading, commenting & caring. P.s. i like Ur poems
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 10/19/2023 8:10:00 PM
Hi Karen! well i’ve had many battles w/my health, but my hub Jim of 40 yrs, has a genetic narrowing of duodenum tube from stomach that get very awful & drs cant treat even in hosp. Thanks for reading, commenting & caring. P.s. i like Ur poems
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