The Spaces Between

No Particle Theory can ever be Unified – 
for there is always the space between...the
unknown that separates while binds us
in a matrix of primitive wonder. Dark
Matter is only dark to those accustomed to one
light...for those whose eyes adjust to the
thin horizons of others who have passed 
before them – and not the endless expanse within, 
the heart and soul of a boundless Universe.  So, 
we slowly peel-back our outer layers, those of 
earth and moon, the illumining stars, limiting 
skins of meagerly defined senses. Without God 
there is only Science...
hopping from one physical rock to the other, skimming
over the depth of spaces,
stepping cautiously into shallow pools
as yet to explore the unimaginable realms
of a far greater Spiritual Sea. 


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We are observers...consciousness existing
in an elevated dimension of reality. Difficult
to imagine, yet our thoughts are entirely
separate from our physical senses and their
body sources; we truly, not figuratively,
look in or down upon the many instances
and vehicles of manifest substance. 
                 There can only be
one Unified Theory: it must be a Continuity Theory,
where separation is merely an elaborate illusion: 
In fact, all we see and seem are Wave effects
propagated through a flexible yet solid dimension, 
driven by vibrations or shivers (so to speak) – 
Waves collide, and those peaks or points
of collision become our physical reality – 
these are the pixels our eyes and minds interpret
and assemble in the likeness of recalled
references, desires and predilections – We look down,
look in, look out, but always from positions independent 
of the objects of our inquiry. Mind, Consciousness 
is entirely independent of the physical. This 
explains the phenomenon of Savants. Our 
brains are not developing receptacles of 
knowledge – but, in fact, developing
gateways. Who we are, where we come
from, and how long we live progresses
far outside our experiences of birth and
death.

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Date: 9/14/2021 11:34:00 AM
Fascinating subject and fascinating observations! Not to mention the fact that I wrote a poem with the same title, though some alternate observations; and some that have degrees of accord. The said poem is on line in Poetry Soup.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 9/14/2021 9:10:00 PM
Hi Goeffrey; just found your work, far more poetic than mine. Really quite special to read. I left you a lengthy comment. On the same subject, I wrote a thesis some 20-25 years. It's quite long, but when you have some time you may enjoy. Here is link: Blessings! http://light-cards.com/Unified%20Theory.html
Date: 9/10/2021 1:34:00 PM
Hi,Joe! u’re now on my follow list! Thiss is ,after reaching heart into heart, the journey continues…the most accomplished,thrilling work I’ve come upon in ages. Can’t wait to read more of. your work & share with you some of my theories of dimensions, poetics, seeking to journey into the soul of God. Thank U!
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Joe Dimino
Date: 9/10/2021 4:38:00 PM
I just looked and guess I haven't publised "Unified Theory" on Soup: Html will take you there: http://light-cards.com/Unified%20Theory.html
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Joe Dimino
Date: 9/10/2021 3:24:00 PM
Wow Sally; you truly made my day. A pleasure to meet a kindred spirit here. A wee bit latter on in the evening I will get to your works -- want to be able to take my time and enjoy fully -- very anxious to read what you have to state and speculate on. This is thrilling. Oh, when you have time, please go to my stories page, and read "Unified Theory." Be back with you shortly. Blessings!!
Date: 9/6/2021 3:05:00 PM
To me, this poem has existential meaning, Prince deMino and showcases your work as an artist with a pen. Hey...I haven’t been by a lot recently! Was really down over Afghanistan,etc. I know you understand. Greets to Princess Ila. *****Panagiota the Patriot ******
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Joe Dimino
Date: 9/6/2021 6:08:00 PM
Thank you, Pangie; I know...it is difficult to stay happy and positive with all that is going on. Ila says hi! Blessings my friend.
Date: 9/6/2021 11:26:00 AM
Hello Joe DiMino, just by reading this poem made me feel like i was on a journey there. Wow! So beautiful! Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/6/2021 4:10:00 PM
Hello Joe DiMino, you are welcome my friend. Yes i do see the beauty in this. Yes there is true beauty in science. It is hard to prove science. I will. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 9/6/2021 1:20:00 PM
Hi Darlene; thank you thank you thank you. So pleased others here see the beauty and true poetry in Science. Well, my theoretical speculations for what they are worth. I can swear by them but am hard pressed to prove some of my conclusions externally to others. You also have a perfectly beautiful day.
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