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Womans Desire

Woman’s Desire What’s all this rigmarole and claptrap About the man being the only one thinking of sex? Well, truth be known, A woman, skin deeply eager, thinks much of it too… Once leaving the job, after The shopping; the vaccuuming; the cooking; the pots, Pans, and dishes; after the childrens’ Homework, meals, baths, and good-night kisses; Once the cat and dog have gone out and in Twice, been fed, and cooed over while petted; After inquires about her spouse’s work, complaints, And wishes; after the phone calls to people of concern; After checking the bank account, new emails, and Cleaning out her handbag; counting out lunch monies; Preparing the morrow’s snacks and clothing; writing The lists of to-do’s and schedules; and, preparing medications… Afrter all that, following ten minutes of rest In a cushioned chair, Among the first wishes of her long-patient body, Is for some time to linger, living Pleasure’s words whispered by her passion’s tongue. A woman desires to lay felt and feeling sensuously With her beloved, warm and spent, Close to sleep at her side. —————————————————————————————————— (c) sally young eslinger 9/16/2023

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Date: 10/23/2023 2:49:00 PM
...'A woman desires...felt and feeling'.... nice write......yes, we all desire to sense and be sensed.....something worth while ......stan
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Sand Blown
Date: 10/23/2023 2:51:00 PM
cofcofhrrmmph......we...as in men and women : )
Date: 10/19/2023 2:55:00 PM
Well, you're spot on. Your poem portrays a big family. It takes two to tango.
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Date: 10/17/2023 12:38:00 PM
So thats a woman..' I can't see whether the description is to The left or right by by the way; Sally, I'm sure There will be some giving me a narra..? Er Narro-tive.?? Does that suit the pre-shambles um ambles.? I could go on.' But I'll just leave it to Those in pomp-ference rooms worldwide I'm Sure they will come up with some new type of Gravy..They are trained in it btw ' anyway g'day.(
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Date: 9/24/2023 4:36:00 AM
I'm exhausted...just let me sleep. Love it! Brilliant!
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Date: 9/21/2023 4:56:00 PM
And that kind of woman deserves everything she wants, Sally. Thanks for telling it like it is my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 9/19/2023 4:34:00 PM
Enjoyed your poem, and the message, too. It makes sense all the way, even after that busy day, phew!
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Date: 9/18/2023 1:30:00 PM
a relatable poem for sure!
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Date: 9/18/2023 4:58:00 AM
A poem many women can relate to - excellent in Sally, hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/17/2023 2:58:00 PM
This is a fantastic poem Sally that made me smile as it resonates with so many who, when reading this, are probably nodding their head in agreement! I love the last line in particular. So enjoyed it. Thank you. Smiles to you xx
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Date: 9/17/2023 4:55:00 AM
Excellent poem Sally, no man should tell a woman how she should be or behave.. you have written it with a lot of power and many women and men will love your words.. Hope you are well...
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Silent One
Date: 9/17/2023 6:35:00 AM
I hope your surgery goes well Sally. All the best.
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 9/17/2023 6:05:00 AM
Big thankful hugs for time to read and your dear comment. I Actually am having surgery on my rt leg tomorrow. So sweet of you to ask. Xox
Date: 9/17/2023 4:18:00 AM
Brilliant Sally! She can do anything She is strong she is invincible she is woman, but she has such a long, way to go, until she makes her brother and partner understand. Wonderful poem. If ever a poem screamed to be POTD it's this one. FAVE
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Date: 9/17/2023 3:04:00 AM
A woman's work is the greatest thing on earth. Her husband should adore her and love her with all the gentleness that she deserves. Blessings.
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