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Views of You

Now, when the day is cool and new
While fragile light is still allowed
My paper captures views of you
Your eyes, the shape of shifting clouds

While fragile light is still allowed
I sketch your hair as blooming trees
Your eyes, the shape of shifting clouds
As rain replenishes the seas

I sketch your hair as blooming trees
Noting beauty by scars contrast
As rain replenishes the seas
Like souvenirs from journeys past

Noting beauty by scars contrast
Where mirrors stand, fractured and bent
Like souvenirs from journeys past
With all the futures you present

Where mirrors stand, fractured and bent
My paper captures views of you
With all the futures you present
Now, when the day is cool and new.

5/16/22

Rhyming Pantoum of Five Stanzas contest
Sponsor: L. Milton Hankins














Copyright © Michelle Faulkner | Year Posted 2022

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Date: 5/21/2022 4:39:00 PM

My artistry sibling, I am in agreement with Connie that this poem belongs in a pantoum textbook to study when one is courageous enough to pursue writing in this challenging form. I've tried only a few and know that a line that works well in one stanza doesn't necessarily mesh with the next. The pairing of "Your eyes, the shape of shifting clouds / As rain replenishes the seas" is nature, artistry, and romance coalesced into a stunning poetic statement. Again, "Like souvenirs from journeys past / With all the futures you present", is a delightful expression of committed love and the future arc it enables. Beautiful, a poem to be revisited and re-enjoyed. Hearty congrats for the deserving POTD ~ John
Date: 5/21/2022 4:31:00 PM

You pieced this together so nicely. Sometimes it's hard for these to flow, but this is so natural. I love the vision you gave of sketching their hair as blooming trees.
Date: 5/19/2022 6:35:00 PM

Wow Michelle, you could give lessons in how to write a proper Pantoum! The flow of your repeating lines exquisitely blend together. I see why this wonderful poem was honored with POTD! Very deserving my friend. I am Faving this beauty in case I ever get the courage to write one! Congratulations! Blessings xxoo
Date: 5/18/2022 7:26:00 PM

Painting with words in this way, is so beautiful and creative. Your thoughts leave me in complete awe. You have captured the essence of your subject, in such a wonderful way. Congratulations Michelle, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Brandy
Date: 5/18/2022 5:53:00 PM

Beautiful write Michelle, Congrats on POTD
Date: 5/18/2022 5:23:00 PM

Michelle, beautiful Pantoum and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, blessings ~Constance
Date: 5/18/2022 3:26:00 PM

Congratulations on your POTD, Michelle, you have created incredible poetry. The imagery you use and the way you express yourself are both breathtakingly lovely. Kindest regards
Date: 5/18/2022 2:27:00 PM

Dear Michelle ~ Another exquisitely lovely poem. It flows magically. I love this line: when fragile light is still allowed. So descriptive.5B Congratulations on POTD!
Date: 5/18/2022 2:02:00 PM

Congratulations on your POTD honour, Michelle. You have created such an outstanding Pantoum - enjoyed every line of this exquisite creation by a master poet. Love and blessings ~ Mala
Date: 5/18/2022 10:20:00 AM

Your poetic grace shines out from every line in this romantic pantoum! A beautiful and serenely crafted poem of agape love! You have gathered your immense skills for this exquisite poem of love underpinned by your romantic passion. The work of a master poet indeed! Congratulations on your win POTD dear friend.
Date: 5/18/2022 9:47:00 AM

WoW! Michelle, You have composed such a well-written Pantoum. It’s just beautiful; it has good content and imagery. Who did you write this for? Whomever it is, I know that they appreciated it very much. Best wishes in the contest.Congratulations on a well-deserved poem of the day. Enjoy the honor. Have a nice day:-) Alexis
Date: 5/18/2022 7:56:00 AM

Once again, 'your poetic strains replenish my feeble brains.' Just love this write, Michelle. Congrats on POTD! Best always, Gershon
Date: 5/18/2022 7:56:00 AM

Congratulations for this beautiful POTD Michelle :)
Date: 5/18/2022 7:31:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. A "Wonderful" Write. Have a great/blessed day writing away.................
Date: 5/18/2022 6:45:00 AM

Eloquently written, Michelle, with beautiful imagery. Congratulations on your POTD honor, Bill
Date: 5/18/2022 5:47:00 AM

A beautiful Pantoum form poem Michelle, congratulations on poem of the day… Belle
Date: 5/18/2022 5:25:00 AM

Michelle, Wonderful write. Congratulations on POTD~ Warren
Date: 5/18/2022 4:59:00 AM

Michelle, what a beautiful poem. it's positively captivating! Congratulations on your POTD honors !!!
Date: 5/18/2022 4:53:00 AM

Back with BIG congrats Michelle for POTD. Enjoy your day.
Date: 5/18/2022 4:10:00 AM

Wow! I find this form tricky ~ congrats on POTD
Date: 5/18/2022 4:07:00 AM

Stunningly beautiful piece Michelle. Congratulations on POTD! Enjoy the day! xomo
Date: 5/18/2022 3:50:00 AM

That’s a beauty of a pantoum. Well done, and congrats
Date: 5/18/2022 2:05:00 AM

Congrats dear Michelle. ThanX for your presence ( & i just posted my Monoku & reasons for my "absence") peace & shalom
Date: 5/18/2022 1:52:00 AM

dropping back with many congrats on POTD I love the pantoum form and know its so challenging to write:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/18/2022 12:37:00 AM

A perfect pantoum, not the easiest form I find. Congratulations Michelle on the honour of POTD. Have a great day. Tom
Date: 5/17/2022 8:06:00 PM

Very well written. Thoroughly enjoyed reading.
Date: 5/17/2022 7:23:00 PM

'As rain replenishes the sea,' so does this 'View' resonate with me. Beautifully penned, my friend. Thank you, Gershon
Date: 5/17/2022 1:10:00 PM

I know how challenging this form is to write and you have penned a beauty, into my faves:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/17/2022 11:20:00 AM

Well thought and done! Enjoyed! Aloha!
Date: 5/17/2022 9:38:00 AM

Refreshing view! Love it! Well done, Michelle!
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