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July 5, 2023
Placed 1st: Choose A Line Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Joseph May


 

Silent Song of Breeze

“The silent song of the sighing breeze,”
In leafless demeanor of shuddering trees,
Whispered cries of a dismantled dream
Augmenting dissonance of broken theme,

A theme composed in the promise of yore
Avowing endearing passions evermore,
Of love eternal, enamoring core of soul,
Till its amorous glory, fate savagely stole.

Though zephyrs forlorn, still cruelly blow,
Wailing lovelorn woe of forgotten throe,
Despair is vanquished from song of sorrow,
For hymns of bliss sing of hopeful morro.

Pledges of today, foretell future of ardour,
Vying dreamscapes, musings-ecstatic adore,
Buoying tides of love to tomorrow’s shore,
Abandoning yesteryears memories abhor;

Of pensive sighs, spent-emotions decry,
Of dejection lamenting love gone awry,
Of nightmares trembling sleepless night,
Of allegories wistful, destiny’s hands write.

“The silent song of the sighing breeze,”
Now sings of love, from flowering trees,
Whispering melodies to a dulcet dream
Augmenting allure of lovesome theme.

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Empress Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 7:43 AM
Another exquisite write from you really the way your poems flow in such captivating rhythm is truly impressive. And i always love your imagery and descriptive diction, I especially love the line” leafless demeanour of shuddering trees” wow! “ pensive sighs..” You really use such sumptuous language! So good! Always a pleasure reading you
Maverick Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 11:08 PM
Quite a gamut of thought and desire here Vijay A blessing to read your thoughts, a shame to Think any would wish you ill.? I am just speaking generally really.' I was just re reading My incendary poem..And thinking how hard People can be to one another some poets must Have geen caught in that firestorm, and now Others want to own their homes.? Its so terrible.'
Fowler Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 3:35 PM
Gorgeous feelings elegantly shone Vijay. I also see congratulations re in order! :)
Mcintosh Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 2:01 AM
Beautiful. Congrats and God bless you. Love, Gina
Legros Kelley Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 12:43 AM
Vijay, this is absolutely and incredibly beautiful. You are an amazing poet, this is another fave for me <3
Ball Avatar
July 21, 2023 at 7:31 PM
Beautiful Vijay. God Bless, JB
M  Avatar
July 20, 2023 at 1:52 PM
Just beautiful Vijay…..Debx
Rodrigues Avatar
July 15, 2023 at 11:20 AM
You go, Poet! … Despair is vanquished from song of sorrow, For hymns of bliss sing of hopeful morro. Very nice, Vijay!
Pandit Avatar
July 16, 2023 at 5:56 AM
Many thanks for your kind remarks, Kim. Much appreciate, as always.
Rose  Avatar
July 15, 2023 at 9:29 AM
this can almost be a love song, if only you could sing it Vijay :) thank you for appreciating my humble lyrics, love and friendship Vie
Pandit Avatar
July 16, 2023 at 5:56 AM
Glad you liked the poem, Vienna. Much appreciate--many thanks.
Canerdy Avatar
July 14, 2023 at 3:57 PM
Lovely, descriptive~~flows romantically along, Vijay. Janice
Pandit Avatar
July 16, 2023 at 5:55 AM
Thank you Janice. Much appreciate your visit and comments.
DiMino Avatar
July 14, 2023 at 7:06 AM
“The silent song of the sighing breeze,” Now sings of love, from flowering trees, " -- Hi Vijay. Perfect! beautiful poetry, deeply felt and understood. Love is omnipotent. When truly felt it survives, transcends individuals and circumstance. Once clearly experienced, it is like seeing and touching the face of God. One always returns. Great write!
Pandit Avatar
July 16, 2023 at 5:55 AM
Delighted to read your kind remarks, my friend. Much appreciate your insights as always, Joe. Many thanks.
Daniel Avatar
July 13, 2023 at 9:40 PM
This is beautiful, from poignancy to hopeful joy, very well done, Vijay:) congratulations:)
Pandit Avatar
July 16, 2023 at 5:54 AM
Thank you Jo--much appreciate.
May Avatar
July 12, 2023 at 3:01 AM
Very nicely done Vijay, Congrats on your win
Pandit Avatar
July 16, 2023 at 5:53 AM
Many thanks for sponsoring contests, Joseph--much appreciate, as always.
George Avatar
July 11, 2023 at 2:55 AM
Back to your sweet poem Vijay to congratulate you on your first place win.
Pandit Avatar
July 16, 2023 at 5:53 AM
Thank you Valsa--much appreciate.
Goldsmith Avatar
July 10, 2023 at 12:19 PM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write. Have a great day writing away.....................
Pandit Avatar
July 16, 2023 at 5:52 AM
Thank you Paula--much appreciate.
Eslinger Avatar
July 10, 2023 at 9:04 AM
Vijay! After reading this, Jim heard me sigh, “Oh, God—“ one word: Masterpiece! “of allegoeiries wstful, destiny’s hands write…”. Wow! And Wow! Tell me, which level of heaven sent this poem to you?
Pandit Avatar
July 16, 2023 at 5:52 AM
Special to hear that from one who lives and breathes poetry. Much appreciate your kind remarks, Sally. Many thanks.
Kannan Avatar
July 10, 2023 at 7:19 AM
Silent song of breeze and only the pure people like you hear that!!! So beautifully written and I thoroughly enjoyed reading this... My fav!!!
Pandit Avatar
July 16, 2023 at 5:51 AM
Lovely to see you again. Much appreciate your kind remarks and your FAVE. Many thanks for both, Supraja.
Sands Avatar
July 8, 2023 at 7:58 AM
Oh my! This is absolutely beautiful Vijay. I love it. A Fave for me! It was so enjoyable and peaceful to read. Well written, my friend :)
Pandit Avatar
July 8, 2023 at 8:53 AM
So special to receive your glowing feedback my friend. Much appreciate your support, Heidi. Many thanks. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.
Buehler Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 8:16 PM
Winter's heartbreak blossomed into spring romance. A poem of pure loveliness, Vijay. This is a fave for me. Best wishes for the contest. :)
Pandit Avatar
July 8, 2023 at 8:52 AM
Glad to hear that from you, Evelyn. Much appreciate your thoughtful remarks, as always. Many thanks. A special thank you for the FAVE, my friend.
Baker Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 4:09 PM
A FAV for my list, Vijay. The transition from the shuddering to flowering trees was smooth and had a comforting rhythm with your rhyme. Nice entry for the contest ... good luck my friend. Bill
Pandit Avatar
July 8, 2023 at 8:51 AM
So nice to hear from you my friend--with your fabulous insights. Much appreciate your visit, your FAVE. Many thanks my friend.
Delaney Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 6:14 AM
Dear Vijay: Your optimism shines through in the ups and downs of love carried along by beautiful rhyme and rhythm. Best, SuZ
Pandit Avatar
July 8, 2023 at 8:49 AM
Glad you visited SuZ, with your kind insights. Many thanks.
Nicole Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 7:34 PM
Dear Vijay, this is beautiful, tender and delicate, all at the same time. Your words dance like a soft melody upon the breeze, with elegance and grace. I'm curling your thoughts gently around me. My best to you, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy
Pandit Avatar
July 8, 2023 at 8:48 AM
Always a joy to read your feedback. Much appreciate your visit, as always, my dear friend. Many thanks, Brandy. Hugs to you as well.
Ray Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 3:44 PM
the path meanders beautifully as does the Telsa coil from pole to pole....we ride the wave into the analysis and land in Eden...loved it...herein the beauty of poetry but more so the mind that commands the quill
Pandit Avatar
July 8, 2023 at 8:47 AM
So nice of you to say so. Much appreciate your visit and comments, Tim. Many thanks.
M  Avatar
July 5, 2023 at 10:46 PM
Poetic beauty Vijay…..just lovely! Debx
Pandit Avatar
July 8, 2023 at 8:46 AM
Glad to hear that, Deb. Much appreciate, as always.
George Avatar
July 5, 2023 at 8:53 PM
How the mindscape has changed from the first to the last stanza. From' whispered cries of dismantled dream, it has shifted to 'whispering melodies to a dulcet dream'. This transition, you have penned wonderfully well. All the Best, dear poet friend.
Pandit Avatar
July 8, 2023 at 8:46 AM
Much appreciate your kind feedback, my friend. Many thanks, Valsa.
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