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July 5, 2023
Placed 1st: Choose A Line Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Joseph May


 

“The silent song of the sighing breeze,” In leafless demeanor of shuddering trees, Whispered cries of a dismantled dream Augmenting dissonance of broken theme, A theme composed in the promise of yore Avowing endearing passions evermore, Of love eternal, enamoring core of soul, Till its amorous glory, fate savagely stole. Though zephyrs forlorn, still cruelly blow, Wailing lovelorn woe of forgotten throe, Despair is vanquished from song of sorrow, For hymns of bliss sing of hopeful morro. Pledges of today, foretell future of ardour, Vying dreamscapes, musings-ecstatic adore, Buoying tides of love to tomorrow’s shore, Abandoning yesteryears memories abhor; Of pensive sighs, spent-emotions decry, Of dejection lamenting love gone awry, Of nightmares trembling sleepless night, Of allegories wistful, destiny’s hands write. “The silent song of the sighing breeze,” Now sings of love, from flowering trees, Whispering melodies to a dulcet dream Augmenting allure of lovesome theme. Line #1

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Date: 10/6/2023 1:37:00 PM
an elegant poem with superb lines and rhyme scheme. The silent song of the sighing breeze...grabbed my attention, and the rest of your poem didn't disappoint. The ending was uplifting and reminded me of how I feel in the spring. Have a grand evening, Sara
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Date: 9/4/2023 7:43:00 AM
Another exquisite write from you really the way your poems flow in such captivating rhythm is truly impressive. And i always love your imagery and descriptive diction, I especially love the line” leafless demeanour of shuddering trees” wow! “ pensive sighs..” You really use such sumptuous language! So good! Always a pleasure reading you
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Date: 8/21/2023 11:08:00 PM
Quite a gamut of thought and desire here Vijay A blessing to read your thoughts, a shame to Think any would wish you ill.? I am just speaking generally really.' I was just re reading My incendary poem..And thinking how hard People can be to one another some poets must Have geen caught in that firestorm, and now Others want to own their homes.? Its so terrible.'
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Date: 8/14/2023 3:35:00 PM
Gorgeous feelings elegantly shone Vijay. I also see congratulations re in order! :)
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Date: 7/30/2023 2:01:00 AM
Beautiful. Congrats and God bless you. Love, Gina
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Date: 7/23/2023 12:43:00 AM
Vijay, this is absolutely and incredibly beautiful. You are an amazing poet, this is another fave for me <3
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Date: 7/21/2023 7:31:00 PM
Beautiful Vijay. God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/20/2023 1:52:00 PM
Just beautiful Vijay…..Debx
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Date: 7/15/2023 11:20:00 AM
You go, Poet! … Despair is vanquished from song of sorrow, For hymns of bliss sing of hopeful morro. Very nice, Vijay!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/16/2023 5:56:00 AM
Many thanks for your kind remarks, Kim. Much appreciate, as always.
Date: 7/15/2023 9:29:00 AM
this can almost be a love song, if only you could sing it Vijay :) thank you for appreciating my humble lyrics, love and friendship Vie
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Date: 7/16/2023 5:56:00 AM
Glad you liked the poem, Vienna. Much appreciate--many thanks.
Date: 7/14/2023 3:57:00 PM
Lovely, descriptive~~flows romantically along, Vijay. Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/16/2023 5:55:00 AM
Thank you Janice. Much appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 7/14/2023 7:06:00 AM
“The silent song of the sighing breeze,” Now sings of love, from flowering trees, " -- Hi Vijay. Perfect! beautiful poetry, deeply felt and understood. Love is omnipotent. When truly felt it survives, transcends individuals and circumstance. Once clearly experienced, it is like seeing and touching the face of God. One always returns. Great write!
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Date: 7/16/2023 5:55:00 AM
Delighted to read your kind remarks, my friend. Much appreciate your insights as always, Joe. Many thanks.
Date: 7/13/2023 9:40:00 PM
This is beautiful, from poignancy to hopeful joy, very well done, Vijay:) congratulations:)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/16/2023 5:54:00 AM
Thank you Jo--much appreciate.
Date: 7/12/2023 3:01:00 AM
Very nicely done Vijay, Congrats on your win
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/16/2023 5:53:00 AM
Many thanks for sponsoring contests, Joseph--much appreciate, as always.
Date: 7/11/2023 2:55:00 AM
Back to your sweet poem Vijay to congratulate you on your first place win.
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Date: 7/16/2023 5:53:00 AM
Thank you Valsa--much appreciate.
Date: 7/10/2023 12:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write. Have a great day writing away.....................
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Date: 7/16/2023 5:52:00 AM
Thank you Paula--much appreciate.
Date: 7/10/2023 9:04:00 AM
Vijay! After reading this, Jim heard me sigh, “Oh, God—“ one word: Masterpiece! “of allegoeiries wstful, destiny’s hands write…”. Wow! And Wow! Tell me, which level of heaven sent this poem to you?
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Date: 7/16/2023 5:52:00 AM
Special to hear that from one who lives and breathes poetry. Much appreciate your kind remarks, Sally. Many thanks.
Date: 7/10/2023 7:19:00 AM
Silent song of breeze and only the pure people like you hear that!!! So beautifully written and I thoroughly enjoyed reading this... My fav!!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/16/2023 5:51:00 AM
Lovely to see you again. Much appreciate your kind remarks and your FAVE. Many thanks for both, Supraja.
Date: 7/8/2023 7:58:00 AM
Oh my! This is absolutely beautiful Vijay. I love it. A Fave for me! It was so enjoyable and peaceful to read. Well written, my friend :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/8/2023 8:53:00 AM
So special to receive your glowing feedback my friend. Much appreciate your support, Heidi. Many thanks. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.
Date: 7/7/2023 8:16:00 PM
Winter's heartbreak blossomed into spring romance. A poem of pure loveliness, Vijay. This is a fave for me. Best wishes for the contest. :)
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Date: 7/8/2023 8:52:00 AM
Glad to hear that from you, Evelyn. Much appreciate your thoughtful remarks, as always. Many thanks. A special thank you for the FAVE, my friend.
Date: 7/7/2023 4:09:00 PM
A FAV for my list, Vijay. The transition from the shuddering to flowering trees was smooth and had a comforting rhythm with your rhyme. Nice entry for the contest ... good luck my friend. Bill
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Date: 7/8/2023 8:51:00 AM
So nice to hear from you my friend--with your fabulous insights. Much appreciate your visit, your FAVE. Many thanks my friend.
Date: 7/7/2023 6:14:00 AM
Dear Vijay: Your optimism shines through in the ups and downs of love carried along by beautiful rhyme and rhythm. Best, SuZ
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/8/2023 8:49:00 AM
Glad you visited SuZ, with your kind insights. Many thanks.
Date: 7/6/2023 7:34:00 PM
Dear Vijay, this is beautiful, tender and delicate, all at the same time. Your words dance like a soft melody upon the breeze, with elegance and grace. I'm curling your thoughts gently around me. My best to you, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/8/2023 8:48:00 AM
Always a joy to read your feedback. Much appreciate your visit, as always, my dear friend. Many thanks, Brandy. Hugs to you as well.
Date: 7/6/2023 3:44:00 PM
the path meanders beautifully as does the Telsa coil from pole to pole....we ride the wave into the analysis and land in Eden...loved it...herein the beauty of poetry but more so the mind that commands the quill
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/8/2023 8:47:00 AM
So nice of you to say so. Much appreciate your visit and comments, Tim. Many thanks.
Date: 7/5/2023 10:46:00 PM
Poetic beauty Vijay…..just lovely! Debx
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/8/2023 8:46:00 AM
Glad to hear that, Deb. Much appreciate, as always.
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