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26.06.2023

Anne-Lise Andresen

Don't blow fake smoke curb your temper - keep it under control it is easily understandable don't spin as a yo-yo - a shovel is a shovel the observers of your wandering thoughts nobody wants to dance with the devil - has no energy to fight

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Speaks Volumes

Date: 6/28/2023 5:08:00 PM

Smart lady ! So right ! Someone once said count to 100 before you speak.. Doesnt work ! After 40 I forget what the topic was. You have given great advice Anne-Lise, Getting mad never paid any dividends, just look the other way toward your very good friends. Loved your poem. Time for a hug.

Valsa George

Date: 6/27/2023 7:57:00 PM

Wise thoughts dear Anne. Have self restraint and keep negative emotions under control... ! It makes us human. Hugs~

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/27/2023 1:38:00 PM

Great poem ! Wise words :)

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/27/2023 9:23:00 AM

You gift us with a winner in this fine composition. A NEW FAV FOR ME. God bless...

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/26/2023 10:23:00 PM

An intelligent poem, dear Anne Lise. Don't fear the devil. Stand up to him with God's grace.

Bill Baker

Date: 6/26/2023 3:26:00 PM

The photo and poem are a good match. Wise words of advice my friend. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us through your poetry, Anne-Lise. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Deb M

Date: 6/26/2023 2:00:00 PM

Wise advice and so well stated Sunshine! Debx

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/26/2023 1:11:00 PM

Anne-Lise, your poem is really amazing and interesting. It has strong and beautiful words. I really like the inspiring message in your poem: Don't pretend to be something you're not, control your anger, and keep calm.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/26/2023 1:09:00 PM

I see those faces of deceit. Well said, Anne-Lise: nobody wants to dance with the devil...