Simply

*** SIMPLY *** Simply The elements unite Linked and willing, In no prescribed order The route’s lay swirls Through Our simple souls, Appearing still But Bleeding subtly Along the outstretched Fibers of the cosmic fabric God breathes ~ His effects In seemingly Simple Measures — His music and mathematics — Annotate The dances we seek — The steps for the soul With its holy and awed Communion… Graces exclaiming Alleluhia! Shaking the stillness Wherein He is found Ever yet renewing His Love ————————————————————————————————- (c) sally young eslinger 5/30/23 Thanks be to God

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Bill Baker

Date: 6/6/2023 7:25:00 AM

A tribute to God's unending revelation of His interaction with His creation. Just as He breathed the breath of life into Adam, so has He breathed the breath of life into all of creation. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us through your poetry, Sally. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 5/31/2023 6:54:00 AM

Wow an awesome poem and i admire your mention of God, for His math runs the world yes and your sublime poem is on tribute to Him and His creation. Kudos!! >>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<^^^^^^^^>>>>>>>><<<<<< Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 5/31/2023 3:59:00 AM

it is only in the stillness Sally that we get a chance to hear our soul whispers, which are necessary if God is to speak to us, nicely penned, loved it, hope your keeping well :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/31/2023 2:01:00 AM

A poem that dwells on mystic thoughts. So well done.