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Home Is My Beating Heart

 
I call my apartment (my home) my nest, with this and that collections and beloved stuff displayed: Oh, when within my nest I am not stressed, where my art supplies, books and papers are arrayed; and it is a place where my soul- can rest. There is a beautiful kitty that waits, when I open the door I get meows, kisses and love: I dread the day heaven opens the gates, and kitty walks over rainbow bridge to above; so, amazing the special love- life creates. Often, I don't want to leave my nest home, so nice to listen to quiet music, to draw and write: In my home library I love to roam, with the sun shining in the windows it feels right; so I stop- selecting to read a vast tome. ______________________ October 11, 2022 Poetry/Quintain(Sicilian)Non IP/Home is My Beating Heart Copyright Protected, ID 10-1493-732-11 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Premiere contest, Three Stanza Poem in Quintain (Sicilian) sponsor, L MILTON HANKINS, Judged 10/30/2022 Eighth Place
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Miller Avatar
October 31, 2022 at 1:39 AM
This a warm and fuzzy poem, congratulations on your placement.
La France Avatar
November 2, 2022 at 8:16 AM
Terry, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings
Fowler Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 12:14 PM
What a lovely write about your nest - perfection. :) Congratulations on your win Constance!
La France Avatar
November 2, 2022 at 8:16 AM
Linda, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings
Logan Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 9:28 AM
Constance, I feel as you do about my home. It's my sanctuary... my nesting place. Congratulations on your poem being among Milt's winners.
La France Avatar
November 2, 2022 at 8:17 AM
Jenna, thank you so much for the nice comment, and the congratulations, blessings
Hankins Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 8:57 AM
A lovely poem, Constance. Ah, all of us should be so blessed with a home characterized by love and peace. Congratulations on your placement in my Quintain (Sicilian) contest!
La France Avatar
November 2, 2022 at 8:18 AM
Milt, thank you so much for the inspiration and contest and my placement, and for the compliment and congratulations, blessings
Anaya Avatar
October 22, 2022 at 4:55 PM
I came here for a peek at your entry Quintain, and found it warm and fuzzy and cozy, a stunning picture as well! ~Anaya
La France Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 11:24 AM
Anaya, thank you so much for the visit, comment and compliment, blessings
George Avatar
October 16, 2022 at 9:18 PM
I love the little nest you have built where you find joy and comfort with only two inmates... you and your kitty cat. The house artfully laid with a library must be cosy ! A soothing poem dear Constance. I too love cats, but unfortunately my husband is averse to them. So gradully I have learnt to adapt to his interests and focus more on my garden.
La France Avatar
October 17, 2022 at 8:40 AM
Valsa, thank you so much for the lovely comment on my poem, a home is not a home without a cat for me anyways, gardens are a beautiful hobby too that I also love, blessings Constance
Seeker Avatar
October 13, 2022 at 7:00 AM
Back again! What a delightful poem ~ our son has two cats, Waffle and Jeepney so I can relate
La France Avatar
October 13, 2022 at 2:43 PM
Seeker, thank you so much for the compliment, those are such cute names, blessings Constance
Horne Avatar
October 12, 2022 at 6:21 AM
a beautiful write here, my friend - i always picture you with Snuggles, reading in your nest by the maple trees
La France Avatar
October 12, 2022 at 12:55 PM
Jack, thank you so much for the compliment, yes we love our trees, blessings Constance
Eslinger Avatar
October 11, 2022 at 11:46 AM
Constance! A Fave! In imagery,heart, soul and flow…we could be sisters. To me, this reads classic elegance, accomplished choice of words, lyrical , not alarming rhymes. Thank you for this. Made my day. Don’t leave your nest for too long a time…GiGi (my pup) and I might sink in; she likes cats. BIG HUGS
La France Avatar
October 11, 2022 at 4:29 PM
Sally, thank you so much for the FAV and the wonderful comment and compliment, blessings Constance
Kendrick Avatar
October 11, 2022 at 10:29 AM
There is something about afternoon sun coming through the windows on a fall or winter afternoon that is so wonderful. I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my blog. Sara
La France Avatar
October 11, 2022 at 4:29 PM
Sara, thank you so much for the comment and encouragement, blessings Constance
Seeker Avatar
October 11, 2022 at 9:29 AM
Superb beginning ~ am sure the other two stanzas will delight as well :)
La France Avatar
October 11, 2022 at 9:57 AM
Seeker, thank you so much for the visit, and comment and compliment on my first stanza, hope you can come back to read the completed poem, blessings Constance
Rodrigues Avatar
October 11, 2022 at 9:21 AM
Love this, picture and all! I love my books that tend to be walls on either side of me…lol!
La France Avatar
October 11, 2022 at 9:56 AM
Kim, thank you so much for the visit, comment and compliment on my photography. Because my book cases are full, I am starting to pile my books up against walls too, but in a organized way only I understand, blessings Constance
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