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Imagining a Devotion Series Poem

*** IMAGINING (a Devotion Series Poem) *** My beloved, do you see my eyes Approaching near to sweet tears Whenever your intimate touch Comes — as you brush my hair or reassuringly pat me twice — Before proceding with the tasks at hand, Leaving me to sit here, mere steps away? And, constantly I begin to imagine You standing apart from the hour And purposefully, resolutely You pass through the room Into my vision Of you returning Through dimensions To receive my longing… Always Stopping for an instant, a step away, sensing the impetus of our decades of love. You go on to slide between me and all the glaring lights —- In slow motion —- You incline toward me… To fall over me… Thus in my imagining, nearly Every time when I see you Away in your being in the somewhere else of sleep, I will imagine you nearing… For that gentle touch Through the walls aound my heart — Even to the thought of us lying abreast, Held in our combined warmth As the rythm of our heartbeats pulse — the one aside the other — Tranquil ————————————————————————————————————— (c) sally young eslinger 6/19/2023 Thanks be to God

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Date: 7/15/2023 3:05:00 PM
Your poetry is very engaging, Sally. You share a deep romantic experience with the reader. Well written, my friend. I'm following your poetry now as I noticed you are following mine. Thank you. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 11/20/2023 7:52:00 AM
Hi Bill! You know, my husband is luke warm to my being a writer. Also he is right brained & i am left (or do i have that backwards?). Anyway, i think even he was affected by this one…Thank U for ur kind words & 4 being my friend! xoxo
Date: 7/6/2023 11:01:00 AM
you always walk me in measured steps to insure no moment one may falter....and herein I leave the path of your limn....grateful for the depths you guided me thru....awesome poem
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 11/20/2023 7:46:00 AM
Timothy, i’m just now reading your lovely comment on this poem. I was so hoping you’d read this one. I thank you and as always, send up a word for God to bountifully bless you! xoxo
Date: 7/2/2023 10:34:00 PM
Knowing your ailment I was delightfully surprised at the delicate way you expounded your romantic emotions. Thanks be to God indeed. Charming and alluring poem. Permit me to send you a hug.
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 7/6/2023 4:12:00 AM
Dear, dear Victor (Poet of Love) i return your hug. I thank uou for your complete understanding, and for your touchingcomment. Your own many poems of your longing heart played some part in inspiring my own to speak in poetry. God bless you every gay!
Date: 7/2/2023 10:01:00 PM
Sally the anticipation in your poem is almost heart-breaking. I was just waiting for him to grab you and kiss you madly. A well worded poem. leaving the reader wanting more. Loved it. Splendidly written to build suspense and make the reader pay attention
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 7/6/2023 4:24:00 AM
Seeker-Sweet One, from your nm de plume to your skilled & inspired pen, you are one of the poets whom i ieep in mind when i set to writing. This poem, of body and not the soul, having captured you as you read, brings me to a ton of humble smiles. Thank U for reading & commenting! Xoxoxo

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