Tomorrow

TOMORROW

Tomorrow keeps on
Lifting her delicate hand
And flipping back strands of
Her colored, cherry-brown hair,
Which hang alonside her neck…
     Grown long enough to just touch
           Her collarbone.

Embellished with floral 
And feathered pins,
Her exquisite hair flows down
Like the ironed lines
 Of a cut and straightened
Halo…

Volumes of secrets Tomorrow knows
About what symbols live in those strands:
    Silky, so thick, with a soft sweep
        On down from from
The crown of her head
  To cover her collar, and 
Which she keeps absently 
Tossing into the air
  With the long fingers of her right hand
   — Fingers turned and slightly bent,
   Like a ballerina’s poised hands.
This is Tomorrow’s nervous habit
Manifest
Of present worries — burdening
Since childhood
  To now —  of things that 
       Are
       Or could, shocking, crop up.

Tomorrow tries
To daydream away her sensing
  Some of the possible, provoking streams
  Of  events — standing, waiting
    In this day’s wings
 For time’s cues to begin 
  Acting out the better or dreaded things.  

As Tomorrow remains 
Always
There, inclined in her earth-toned chair,
          With her eyes half-closed,
           In a Divinely gifted peace, subject
To the Divine power, who reigns over her ways.
And Tomorrow, 
    With us giving her reasons,
Continues 
Tossing back strands of her hair.

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(c) sally young eslinger 7/16/2023
Thanks be to God—-

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 8/15/2023 1:23:00 AM
Deeply moving write with such vivid imagery using descriptive language. Absolutely love the way this flows in such a melodious rhythm. I especially loved the line “ volumes of secrets tomorrow knows” that is so deep and profound! Exquisite write
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Date: 8/13/2023 2:46:00 AM
Yes, we can worry about tomorrow. A good poem of angst.
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Date: 8/12/2023 11:36:00 AM
Oh but what of tomorrow, love this
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Date: 8/7/2023 4:45:00 PM
Enraptured fully and completely in the images of words painted and moving and so nuanced . What a gem Sally ! Bringing me back and forth in time witnessing simplicity, thoughtfulness and kisses of divinity ! I loved it . Hugs to you , Susan :)
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Date: 8/2/2023 7:51:00 PM
Absolutey captivating, Sally, especially 'like the ironed lines/of a cut and straightened halo' - and 'as tomorrow remains always there in her earth toned chair' - I think for all the worrying we do about tomorrow she will take care of herself ~
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Date: 7/27/2023 10:04:00 PM
wow,,,where to begin? gravid in its prose in every line with depth....absolutely captivating
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Date: 7/20/2023 5:46:00 PM
Creative , you had me from the word Manifest and then you continued as you should have.
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Date: 7/17/2023 6:34:00 AM
Embellished with floral And feathered pins, Her exquisite hair flows down Like the ironed lines Of a cut and straightened Halo…Beautiful poetry, Sally.-
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Date: 7/16/2023 7:25:00 PM
"Some of the possible, provoking streams Of events — standing, waiting In this day’s wings For time’s cues to begin Acting out the better or dreaded things." Wow! Speechless. Mesmerizing use of language. Love it.
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 7/16/2023 7:47:00 PM
Joe, your comment has also made me cry… Lately, in poor health as I am & feeling fairly worthless, Tomorrow & I have become quite close. Sweet. I’m honored & humbled that you like this poem. You’re a compassinonate heart. Thank you for reading & taking time to comment. ..your pal sal
Date: 7/16/2023 4:28:00 PM
Such beautiful Prose poetry Sally, Superbly written. This is just lovely.
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 7/16/2023 5:24:00 PM
Sincere thanks, S.Volumes. This one wanted to be written. Tomorrow sits right beside me as a write this, your comment has brought us both a needed smile! Hugs, sally
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