Vijay Pandit Poet Rhyme

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June 11, 2023

Placed 1st: Any Poem Contest by Robert Liguori

Placed 7th: Poetry in a Glimpse Premium Conest by Ink Empress

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Be the Flame of Compassion

Be the star that brightens someone’s dark sky,
Be the light that illuminates a gloomy night,
Be the flame of compassion to life gone awry,
Even if you don’t think your candle is bright.

Despair not in a world gripped in jaws of woe
For beyond hills of grief dwells halo of hope,
Be the spring that rises through wintry throe,
Even when struggling in laments hard to cope.

Be the forest that grows through ashes of fire,
Be the dream that assuages angst of nightmare,
Be the angel of goodwill when times are dire,
Even when fate, callously, ignores your prayer.

Be not pain of misery, be not voice of dismay,
From goals of life revered, you must not stray,
Wish not for anyone, horizons shrouded gray,
Even while a storm drenches your sunny day.

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Duke Beaufort February 28, 2024 at 10:46 AM Vijay, I am glad I had the chance to read this. Compassion is so important regardless of how long of an opportunity we have. You put it so very well. We certainly try to remain optimistic despite all the difficulties we see ahead.

Susan Ashley December 10, 2023 at 10:55 AM Dear Vijay, the shine of your golden pen reaches in deep to illuminate the depths of one's heart with inspiration. The beauty of empathy and the ability to be a positive force has power to uplift intentions to beyond the cumulus and turn idle thoughts into dynamic action. A splendid uplifting poem, my friend. Congratulations for your excellent win in Ink Empress's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Daniel Henry Rodgers December 7, 2023 at 7:49 AM Vijay, Congratulations! Your poem is a beacon of inspiration, urging us to be the light in the darkness and the hope in despair. It’s a powerful call to action to be agents of change and kindness, even when our own light feels dim. Shine on. - Blessings, Daniel

Silent One December 7, 2023 at 4:21 AM Great message in your poem and choice for this contest.. Congratulations on your placement..

Ink Empress December 7, 2023 at 1:38 AM Dear Vijay, Words that we need to read, i hope this reaches many, you’ve passed such a profound write woven with such brilliant rhymes in sheer eloquence. I especially love the way this emanates such an empowering light, and also “ Be the forest that grows through ashes of fire, Be the dream that assuages angst of nightmare,“ i just love how you’ve phrased that! Loved this. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Thank you for sharing

Speaks Volumes December 7, 2023 at 12:51 AM Congrats on your well deserved win in Empress's contest. Best wishes. Wen

John Hamilton July 31, 2023 at 7:15 AM Well done Vijay, words to live by.

Daisy Meadows July 31, 2023 at 12:46 AM A beautiful poem. Well done.

Debjani Mitra July 23, 2023 at 3:16 AM a powerful message that should be the Mantra of life. none of us is spared the struggle of life, we should help the ones who are in a tougher battle. Thanks for this gem

Smita Kulkarni July 21, 2023 at 1:28 PM Inspiring words Vijay!

Mv Venkataraman July 20, 2023 at 8:35 AM I greatly first admire the structure of the poem, The poet could write by giving the poem a fine format, Then, he could incorporate lovely rhyme to inspire, He has given the poem a positive projection, I feel he has penned a wonderful poem surely!

Daisy Meadows July 10, 2023 at 8:53 PM A lovely poem. Well written.

John Watt July 10, 2023 at 11:08 AM Vijay, I am always drawn towards wisdom poetry, a la Kipling's "If" or Henley's "Invictus". This is a shining example of that genre, and is filled with wise counsel to align one's moral compass towards compassion and selflessness. Well done, much enjoyed, congrats on POTD, a Fav ~ John

Saivi Kurian July 5, 2023 at 12:39 PM Very impressive poem Mr.Vijay. Carefully selected words. Nice reading experience.

Mv Venkataraman June 26, 2023 at 12:56 AM Truly a remarkable poem!

M. L. Kiser June 25, 2023 at 1:11 PM We must all practice this every day; it will enhance our world and lives. Well said.

John Loving Iii June 23, 2023 at 2:17 PM Never, I mean never have I see comments on here 2 pages long. But this poem is worth it. Perhaps it will get memorized or brought up in a class. It's certianly the material worth it.

Janice Canerdy June 21, 2023 at 1:10 PM I see this wonderful, inspiring poem was deemed POTD~~WELL deserved, Vijay! Janice

Darlene De Beaulieu June 20, 2023 at 10:56 AM Hello Vijay, It is not easy to be cheery when you do not feel it. Sometimes the sadness last a short time or longer. I agree with the last verse. Also my fav. My friend. Enjoy your day. /Darlene\

Judy Ball June 19, 2023 at 6:19 PM Sometimes it's hard to keep a cheery outlook when even though you try your best things just don't seem to come together. It's important to remember that even the disciples didn't always have a good day. This is a fine write Vijay and a very encouraging one. It always gives me a good feeling if something I say helps to lighten someone's load. God Bless, JB

M. L. Kiser June 18, 2023 at 1:21 PM An excellent pen with wonderful advice; we all have a light to shine in this world; the best part is that we can shine. Why not keep doing it? Lovely.

Supraja Kannan June 18, 2023 at 6:10 AM Wow!!! This is beautiful ?????? cud feel the postive Vibes throughout... a well deserved POTD and a fav!!!

Joanna Daniel June 17, 2023 at 6:53 AM How did I miss this beauty, Vijay? Simply stunning:) belated congratulations on a well-deserved POTD:) this one surely goes into my faves:)

Mike Gentile June 16, 2023 at 4:07 AM Such a beautiful message contained within the beauty of this composition Vijay! I am late to the table yet nonetheless so happy to see that it was celebrated ! Indeed, a wonderful write! Vijay Pandit June 16, 2023 at 6:08 AM Much appreciate Mike. Many thanks for your kind remarks.

Kim Rodrigues June 14, 2023 at 11:14 AM Back with congratulations on POTD! Vijay Pandit June 16, 2023 at 6:08 AM Many thanks my friend.

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