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A Fairy Tale Retold


She entered the ballroom, her nerves on fire, 
Her synthetic dress fit her like a dream, 
Rustic, she knew nothing about desire, 
In silence, she stood, a classy extreme;

He entered the ballroom, dressed like a prince, 
Wondering how these dances to avoid, 
When he saw her, his eyes he couldn't convince, 
She, a timeless beauty, he, overjoyed;

He reached her amid the swirling dancers, 
She looked at him with blue eyes astounded, 
They danced till midnight, searching for answers, 
Could love blossom this quick? Left confounded;

The clock struck twelve, it ended too soon, 
Love's illusion came to a sudden end, 
Silver rays emanate from the wan moon, 
She ran away from him, his feelings rend;

Who was she? Where could he find her again? 
Questions bombarded his lovestruck mind, 
Her glass slipper came to his help and then, 
His lovely Cinderella he did find. 

Copyright © Joanna Daniel | Year Posted 2024

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Date: 7/26/2024 12:50:00 PM

Great storytelling and use of the eight words..
Date: 7/26/2024 7:29:00 AM

Dear Joanna, What is not to love in this retelling of a story of old. You really did a wonderful job inking this one. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Date: 7/25/2024 9:15:00 PM

A beautiful retelling of the Cinderella story. dear Joanna. How that story used to fascinate me as a child. I understood it better when I used to read that story to my children with illustrations. You have done an excellent job, far better than I did on this topic. All the Best.
Date: 7/25/2024 7:49:00 PM

That you took the eight words to swirl your way is astounding. Cinderella indeed is a timeless beauty. I loved your poem dear poet. +FAV. Happy writing.
Date: 7/25/2024 2:37:00 PM

This is such a sweet retelling of it! Also so interesting where those 8 words led you
Date: 7/25/2024 11:44:00 AM

Best of luck in the contest. I enjoyed your poem.;0)
Date: 7/25/2024 9:19:00 AM

Great use of the contest words, well written, and moving fairy tale poem, Joanna. Good luck in the contest.

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