Victor Buhagiar Poet Free verse

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Stormy Day

Can a poem be as lovely as a rainbow?
Should one protest when a rainy day comes?
Do birds mind the wetness or find shelter?
Though soft rain increases the fragrant blooms.
For even the fields are covered with blossoms.

Still dark clouds spread above the skies.
The rainbow disappeared from up om high.
Grey gulls appear diving for tasty fish.
I trudge the meadow towards some shelter
Wondering if I’ll be able to utilize my muse.

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Ann Foster June 12, 2022 at 6:16 AM I love rainbows... This is a well-written, lovely poem. Ann

Delice Arleen Skelly June 8, 2022 at 1:45 AM Lovely, yes a poem can be 'as lovely as a rainbow'...Delice

Joanna Daniel June 6, 2022 at 6:22 PM A wonderful poem, Victor, congratulations on POTD:)

Kim Rodrigues June 6, 2022 at 3:23 PM Congratulations on POTD!

Deb M June 6, 2022 at 12:18 AM Well done Victor on another POTD…..glad you got it…..very well deserved! Debx

Ann Gilmour June 5, 2022 at 11:56 PM Many congratulations Victor for your wonderful POTD... with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Tom Cunningham June 5, 2022 at 10:32 PM Back with congratulations Victor on your POTD honour. Tom

Valsa George June 5, 2022 at 9:45 PM Congratulations on your well deserved Poem of the day. Sad to hear that you are in the hospital .... ! Our prayers are with you for a speedy recovery, dear friend ! Come back to Poetry Soup at the earliest, hale and healthy !

Beryl Edmonds June 5, 2022 at 8:57 PM Back to say congratulations on poem of the day, so well deserved Victor … Belle

Brandy Nicole June 5, 2022 at 6:30 PM Yes, a poem can be as lovely as a rainbow, having so many beautiful thoughts within. You have created a masterpiece, my dear friend. Congratulations Victor, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Ann Peck June 5, 2022 at 5:19 PM Congratulations on POTD! Lovely poem. Please send that stormy day my way :)

Sam Kauffman June 5, 2022 at 4:37 PM Congratulations on your POTD Victor. Wonderful opening question and powerful concluding line. When inspired I always hope it will not fleet into a mist to be forgotten. There is a profound depth to your poem. Blessings.

Constance La France June 5, 2022 at 3:48 PM Victor, wonderful and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, blessings ~Constance

Eve Roper June 5, 2022 at 2:42 PM Congratulations on POTD

I Am Anaya June 5, 2022 at 1:56 PM Colorful, questions on which to ponder. Congratulations on your POTD Victor!!

Jennifer Fenn June 5, 2022 at 1:09 PM This is lovely Victor. Congrats on scoringa POTD.

Mike Gentile June 5, 2022 at 12:04 PM Victor, congratulations on your POTD honors for this lovely poem extolling the virtues of nature !!

Heidi Sands June 5, 2022 at 9:23 AM Congratulations for this nice POTD Victor. :)

L Milton Hankins June 5, 2022 at 9:06 AM Congratulations on your P.O.T.D., Victor. I'm proud for you.

Paula Goldsmith June 5, 2022 at 8:37 AM Congratulations on your POTD win. Your "Stormy day" is a lovely write. Have a great/blessed day with your win.

Joseph May June 5, 2022 at 7:48 AM Very nicely penned Victor, Congrats on POTD

Susan Lawrence June 5, 2022 at 7:29 AM I have been away Victor and so very happy to return to these lovely words penned by you. Images and emotions galore. Big congratulations on POTD ! Hugs and blessings, Susan :)

Connie Marcum Wong June 5, 2022 at 6:58 AM Back to congratulate you on your wonderful poem being honored for POTD Victor. Very deserving! Blessings xxoo

Jennifer Proxenos June 5, 2022 at 6:58 AM Hi again, congratulations on your POTD, Victor, not at all surprised you were awarded the honor - well done my friend. Hugs blessings, Jennifer.

Jennifer Proxenos June 5, 2022 at 6:56 AM Rain is the essence of life, without water we cannot survive, be it storm or drizzle, near or far, we wont have any if we move to Mars. Wonderful poem Victor, well penned. Hugs Blessings. Jennifer.

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