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Stormy Day

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Can a poem be as lovely as a rainbow? Should one protest when a rainy day comes? Do birds mind the wetness or find shelter? Though soft rain increases the fragrant blooms. For even the fields are covered with blossoms. Still dark clouds spread above the skies. The rainbow disappeared from up om high. Grey gulls appear diving for tasty fish. I trudge the meadow towards some shelter Wondering if I’ll be able to utilize my muse.

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Ann Foster

Date: 6/12/2022 6:16:00 AM

I love rainbows... This is a well-written, lovely poem. Ann

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 6/8/2022 1:45:00 AM

Lovely, yes a poem can be 'as lovely as a rainbow'...Delice

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/6/2022 6:22:00 PM

A wonderful poem, Victor, congratulations on POTD:)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/6/2022 3:23:00 PM

Congratulations on POTD!

Deb M

Date: 6/6/2022 12:18:00 AM

Well done Victor on another POTD…..glad you got it…..very well deserved! Debx

Ann Gilmour

Date: 6/5/2022 11:56:00 PM

Many congratulations Victor for your wonderful POTD... with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/5/2022 10:32:00 PM

Back with congratulations Victor on your POTD honour. Tom

Valsa George

Date: 6/5/2022 9:45:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved Poem of the day. Sad to hear that you are in the hospital .... ! Our prayers are with you for a speedy recovery, dear friend ! Come back to Poetry Soup at the earliest, hale and healthy !

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 6/5/2022 8:57:00 PM

Back to say congratulations on poem of the day, so well deserved Victor … Belle

Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/5/2022 6:30:00 PM

Yes, a poem can be as lovely as a rainbow, having so many beautiful thoughts within. You have created a masterpiece, my dear friend. Congratulations Victor, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Ann Peck

Date: 6/5/2022 5:19:00 PM

Congratulations on POTD! Lovely poem. Please send that stormy day my way :)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/5/2022 4:37:00 PM

Congratulations on your POTD Victor. Wonderful opening question and powerful concluding line. When inspired I always hope it will not fleet into a mist to be forgotten. There is a profound depth to your poem. Blessings.

Constance La France

Date: 6/5/2022 3:48:00 PM

Victor, wonderful and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, blessings ~Constance

Eve Roper

Date: 6/5/2022 2:42:00 PM

Congratulations on POTD

I Am Anaya

Date: 6/5/2022 1:56:00 PM

Colorful, questions on which to ponder. Congratulations on your POTD Victor!!

Jennifer Fenn

Date: 6/5/2022 1:09:00 PM

This is lovely Victor. Congrats on scoringa POTD.

Mike Gentile

Date: 6/5/2022 12:04:00 PM

Victor, congratulations on your POTD honors for this lovely poem extolling the virtues of nature !!

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/5/2022 9:23:00 AM

Congratulations for this nice POTD Victor. :)

L Milton Hankins

Date: 6/5/2022 9:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your P.O.T.D., Victor. I'm proud for you.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/5/2022 8:37:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. Your "Stormy day" is a lovely write. Have a great/blessed day with your win.

Joseph May

Date: 6/5/2022 7:48:00 AM

Very nicely penned Victor, Congrats on POTD

Susan Lawrence

Date: 6/5/2022 7:29:00 AM

I have been away Victor and so very happy to return to these lovely words penned by you. Images and emotions galore. Big congratulations on POTD ! Hugs and blessings, Susan :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/5/2022 6:58:00 AM

Back to congratulate you on your wonderful poem being honored for POTD Victor. Very deserving! Blessings xxoo

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/5/2022 6:58:00 AM

Hi again, congratulations on your POTD, Victor, not at all surprised you were awarded the honor - well done my friend. Hugs blessings, Jennifer.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/5/2022 6:56:00 AM

Rain is the essence of life, without water we cannot survive, be it storm or drizzle, near or far, we wont have any if we move to Mars. Wonderful poem Victor, well penned. Hugs Blessings. Jennifer.