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Finding and Forgiving

We have seen the need for self-forgiveness.
A cluster strengthens in the air quite fast.
Oil-painted clouds poised over the liveness.
We have grasped the need for self-forgiveness.
Creating a scrumptious safe, quaint witness.
We all forge faults, yet beware of clouds blast.
We have seen the need for self-forgiveness.
A cluster strengthens in the air quite fast.

Written: February 17, 2023

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Sara Kendrick February 18, 2023 at 9:48 AM We all need to do that and move on but it is hard and we keep bringing up to ourselves for our mistakes, missing the mark, going our own way and plain outright sinning. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Victor Buhagiar February 18, 2023 at 6:13 AM Before we forgive others, we must first forgive ourselves.

Stephan McBride February 17, 2023 at 7:31 PM Wow , what a powerful poem, and picture, the detail and light within each rain drop to serve it's purpose, : ).