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Wounded Sanctity

The rule of sanctity is a veil to hide the blow. Love doves in the air, fading into the sky. Thoughts are mixed stiff oasis and flow. Hypnotic wizardry that's being spread away. Love doves in the air, fading into the sky, Magic using Alpha Centauri's moon sight. Hypnotic wizardry that's being spread away, Gasping the frigid breath of the frozen light. Magic using Alpha Centauri's moon sight, Mischievous haze covers the ghastly realm. Gasping the frigid breath of the frozen light, Eternal afterglows echo a motion rhythm. Mischievous haze covers the ghastly realm. Within the confines of the death's garden. Eternal afterglows echo a motion rhythm. Souls are aching and seek truth certain. Within the confines of the death's garden, Pain spills from the heart as a yearning drops. Souls are aching and seek truth certain, Stain soil with red as souls gather and hope Pain spills from the heart as a yearning drops, Thoughts are mixed stiff oasis and flow. Stain soil with red as souls gather and hope, The rule of sanctity is a veil to hide the blow.
Written: May 18, 2022 POTD of May 20, 2022 Pantoum - Old or New Poetry Contest Sponsored by Joseph May
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Marcum Wong Avatar
May 24, 2022 at 6:50 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful POTD honor with this amazing poem Sotto. Blessings xxoo
Logan Avatar
May 21, 2022 at 4:08 AM
I'm a day late, Lasaad, but congratulations on your potd!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 7:07 PM
Congratulations on your POTD honour. Brilliant Pantoum! BW ~ Mala
Nicole Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 6:49 PM
The picture you have chosen matches your thoughts perfectly. (More than a weed indeed). Beyond that- This thought curls around me softly. "Souls are aching and seek truth certain." We do search for the *truth*. Once we have it within our grasp, we should never let it go. This is beautiful and tender, all at the same time. Congratulations Lasaad, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. ~ Brandy
Faulkner Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 6:11 PM
Congratulations on POTD honors, well deserved~
Kitchin Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 3:57 PM
Lasaad, congratulations on POTD, enjoyed!
Radhakrishna Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 12:42 PM
Congrats on POTD
La France Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 12:26 PM
Sotto, excellent Pantoum and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE honor, blessings ~Constance
Kauffman Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 12:23 PM
Lasaad, high fives, hand claps, and congrats for your masterfully composed pantoum. Every line is an insightful treasury - "confines of death's garden," "thoughts are mixed stiff," "pain spills from the heart as a yearning drop," This one is special and truly deserves the POTD with your mastery of poetic imagery, metaphor, and poetic cadence. So glad to see it as a POTD! Blessings dear friend.
Peck Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 9:44 AM
That's so beautiful, Lassad. Congratulations on POTD!
Sands Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 9:32 AM
Congratulations for this beautiful POTD :)
Baker Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 8:27 AM
It is a blessing to read your Pantoum this morning. Your expertise of writing is well displayed in this stirring offering. Congratulations on your POTD honor, Lasaad. Thanks for sharing your gift with us, Bill
Hankins Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 8:03 AM
Many congratulations, Lasaad, for your P.O.T.D.!
Goldsmith Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 7:53 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. Have a great/blessed~~day/weekend..............
Calasibetta Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 7:30 AM
Congratulations on your POTD! Extraordinary….woven in Gods hands! :)Paulette
Buhagiar Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 6:33 AM
BIG congrats on POTD
Y. Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 6:04 AM
WoW! Lasaad, You made this difficult form look easy. Good content and imagery. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved. Have a nice day:-)Alexis
Eslinger Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 5:27 AM
A fave for me! Assad, I call God “the great weaver.” Here, with your beautifully chosen words & imagery, I kept feeling myself being embroidered into a passionately made -magnificent- tapestry, its words & lines: the floss with you as poet an apprentice weaver at God’s feet! I am amazed by the sight & Music of this poem. Blessings !
George Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 5:05 AM
I have tried in vain to write a Pantoum.... ! For me it is the most difficult form which you handle with so much of ease and grace. Congratulations, dear Lasaad on your well deserved POTD
Pandit Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 4:02 AM
Back with BIG congrats on POTD, Lasaad. Enjoy your day.
M  Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 4:01 AM
Congratulations Lasaad! Debx
Seeker Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 2:11 AM
An outstanding Pantoum, congrats on POTD, Sotto Poet
Kavanagh  Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 1:51 AM
Back with congratulations Lasaad, I’m so delighted your creative prowess is being showcased as potd, a fantastic piece of work, cheers David
Koplin Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 1:10 AM
Nice job Sotto, congratulations on POTD!
Cunningham Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 12:59 AM
Amazing poetry Lasaad and well deserving of the honour of POTD, congratulations. Tom
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