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The rule of sanctity is a veil to hide the blow. Love doves in the air, fading into the sky. Thoughts are mixed stiff oasis and flow. Hypnotic wizardry that's being spread away. Love doves in the air, fading into the sky, Magic using Alpha Centauri's moon sight. Hypnotic wizardry that's being spread away, Gasping the frigid breath of the frozen light. Magic using Alpha Centauri's moon sight, Mischievous haze covers the ghastly realm. Gasping the frigid breath of the frozen light, Eternal afterglows echo a motion rhythm. Mischievous haze covers the ghastly realm. Within the confines of the death's garden. Eternal afterglows echo a motion rhythm. Souls are aching and seek truth certain. Within the confines of the death's garden, Pain spills from the heart as a yearning drops. Souls are aching and seek truth certain, Stain soil with red as souls gather and hope Pain spills from the heart as a yearning drops, Thoughts are mixed stiff oasis and flow. Stain soil with red as souls gather and hope, The rule of sanctity is a veil to hide the blow.
Written: May 18, 2022 POTD of May 20, 2022 Pantoum - Old or New Poetry Contest Sponsored by Joseph May

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Date: 5/24/2022 6:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful POTD honor with this amazing poem Sotto. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 5/21/2022 4:08:00 AM
I'm a day late, Lasaad, but congratulations on your potd!
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Date: 5/20/2022 7:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD honour. Brilliant Pantoum! BW ~ Mala
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Date: 5/20/2022 6:49:00 PM
The picture you have chosen matches your thoughts perfectly. (More than a weed indeed). Beyond that- This thought curls around me softly. "Souls are aching and seek truth certain." We do search for the *truth*. Once we have it within our grasp, we should never let it go. This is beautiful and tender, all at the same time. Congratulations Lasaad, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. ~ Brandy
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Date: 5/20/2022 6:11:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD honors, well deserved~
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Date: 5/20/2022 3:57:00 PM
Lasaad, congratulations on POTD, enjoyed!
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Date: 5/20/2022 12:42:00 PM
Congrats on POTD
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Date: 5/20/2022 12:26:00 PM
Sotto, excellent Pantoum and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE honor, blessings ~Constance
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Date: 5/20/2022 12:23:00 PM
Lasaad, high fives, hand claps, and congrats for your masterfully composed pantoum. Every line is an insightful treasury - "confines of death's garden," "thoughts are mixed stiff," "pain spills from the heart as a yearning drop," This one is special and truly deserves the POTD with your mastery of poetic imagery, metaphor, and poetic cadence. So glad to see it as a POTD! Blessings dear friend.
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Date: 5/20/2022 9:44:00 AM
That's so beautiful, Lassad. Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 5/20/2022 9:32:00 AM
Congratulations for this beautiful POTD :)
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Date: 5/20/2022 8:27:00 AM
It is a blessing to read your Pantoum this morning. Your expertise of writing is well displayed in this stirring offering. Congratulations on your POTD honor, Lasaad. Thanks for sharing your gift with us, Bill
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Date: 5/20/2022 8:03:00 AM
Many congratulations, Lasaad, for your P.O.T.D.!
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Date: 5/20/2022 7:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. Have a great/blessed~~day/weekend..............
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Date: 5/20/2022 7:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD! Extraordinary….woven in Gods hands! :)Paulette
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Date: 5/20/2022 6:33:00 AM
BIG congrats on POTD
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Date: 5/20/2022 6:04:00 AM
WoW! Lasaad, You made this difficult form look easy. Good content and imagery. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved. Have a nice day:-)Alexis
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Date: 5/20/2022 5:27:00 AM
A fave for me! Assad, I call God “the great weaver.” Here, with your beautifully chosen words & imagery, I kept feeling myself being embroidered into a passionately made -magnificent- tapestry, its words & lines: the floss with you as poet an apprentice weaver at God’s feet! I am amazed by the sight & Music of this poem. Blessings !
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Date: 5/20/2022 5:05:00 AM
I have tried in vain to write a Pantoum.... ! For me it is the most difficult form which you handle with so much of ease and grace. Congratulations, dear Lasaad on your well deserved POTD
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Date: 5/20/2022 4:02:00 AM
Back with BIG congrats on POTD, Lasaad. Enjoy your day.
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Date: 5/20/2022 4:01:00 AM
Congratulations Lasaad! Debx
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Date: 5/20/2022 2:11:00 AM
An outstanding Pantoum, congrats on POTD, Sotto Poet
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Date: 5/20/2022 1:51:00 AM
Back with congratulations Lasaad, I’m so delighted your creative prowess is being showcased as potd, a fantastic piece of work, cheers David
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Date: 5/20/2022 1:10:00 AM
Nice job Sotto, congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 5/20/2022 12:59:00 AM
Amazing poetry Lasaad and well deserving of the honour of POTD, congratulations. Tom
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