January Sky

walls of clouds tumble through wind split branches, coated with silver sunlight.

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Gary Radice

Date: 8/11/2021 12:14:00 PM

Your haiku makes me want it to be January again. Great writing. Cheers - Gary

John Watt

Date: 1/4/2021 12:02:00 AM

Delightful haiku, my friend. I like the walls of clouds colliding with the trees. ~ John

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/2/2021 7:55:00 PM

3rd line --- There's the 'silver lining.' Nice ku, Michelle! HNY, gw

Sally Eslinger

Date: 1/2/2021 7:09:00 PM

Hi, Michelle! This is beautiful! It’s a FAV for me cause you have painted a picture in stark simplicity that can fill the whole mind’s eye at the cal forever. Thank you!

Rico Leffanta

Date: 12/31/2020 10:43:00 AM

You must have digital windows with all the colour washed out? Hau'oli Makahiki Hou! Aloha! Rico

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 12/31/2020 8:24:00 AM

A sparkling poem! Happy New Year hugs to you! xomo <3