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Night At The Carnival


screams echo in the dark
rich sweat floods 
train turns bumpy 
grab each other’s tight hugs  
my shoe- on his face, mouth

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Karen Jones Date: 6/29/2025 1:58:00 PM You made me giggle in your poet notes! A great job writing from experience! Congratulations!
Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/29/2025 12:26:00 PM hey, my friend. Glad you made the winner list. Congrats
Paula Goldsmith Date: 6/29/2025 10:16:00 AM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun and scary "Night At The Carnival" write with a great picture. Thanks for the note on the top. Guess you did not go back. Hugs... Have a blessed day with your win................
Crystol Woods Date: 6/29/2025 6:46:00 AM I love that you explained the shoe lol! So so funny!! brings the reader back to those days of youth when a scare was activity sought out!! Smh! Xoxo congratulations Len!
Susan Ashley Date: 6/28/2025 7:31:00 PM Dearest poet friend, Len, I enjoyed your dark adventure on the “ ghost train”. Wonderful imagery brings me into the fright and the fun, my poet friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/28/2025 10:22:00 AM Very cute and creative take on this topic. I really enjoyed this. When I was young and could tolerate rides, I loved going on the scariest ones
Sara Kendrick Date: 6/28/2025 3:22:00 AM Creative way to go with this one. I would not want to join them in going through this haunted house. Thanks for sharing this contest entry with us. It reads like a good contender to me. Sara K

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