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Coagulation

Finally my blood began to coagulate When you stopped doing what I hate If not, expect the most unpleasant state Of things from lightest to highest skate. You should never ever be late Whenever you invited me for a date I’m a girlfriend who’s impatient to wait My boredom is always at the zenith of rate. Usual lines played like songs from Kate On ears of her most devoted suitor, Nate But, biggest surprise suddenly came in crate Carried by young men marching from the gate. Men with all kinds of roses started to sate Her doubtful heart making his proposal to escalate A wonderful rite performed by each of his mate To win successfully a wife, cutting their late dates’ fate.

Copyright © Len Gasun | Year Posted 2024

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Date: 4/14/2024 9:37:00 AM

Your "Coagulation" is a wonderful write. Love your line, "You should never ever be late Whenever you invited me for a date" So very true. Be on time or early. Wish you would write more. I know you are very busy. Hope you are OK... Have a very blessed day/week writing away..........
Date: 4/4/2024 3:41:00 PM

Dear sweet Len, this is a wonderful monorhyme with great flow and rhyme. You can sense the agitation and expectation here of the narrator and sympathise. I don’t like tardiness so I’m with them on that one! I love the last stanza especially with the proposal and a wedding. Really enjoyed it . Hope you are well dear friend and got some time to rest. Hugs to you xx
Date: 3/31/2024 4:29:00 AM

Your poem effectively conveys the emotional journey of the speaker, from frustration to joy, while also touching upon themes of romance and commitment. The imagery and language choices contribute to the poem's impact, making it a compelling read.
Date: 3/31/2024 4:24:00 AM

A man with a plan. Was he late for the wedding?

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