Victor Buhagiar Poet Rhyme

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Nocturnal Reverie

The sultry night dispelled the light warm breeze,
As he snoozed on the hot sand of the beach:
She smiled and giggled, a dance of a tease,
Till she flew up quite far beyond his reach.

          He moaned; desire urged him to fly with her.

Could he zoom towards scintillating stars?
Achieve a love along the milky way,
Add her in his voluminous memoirs?
Search for passion in dark night's misty ray?
Summer silence held him in tangled blur.

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Paula Goldsmith December 13, 2021 at 10:14 AM I enjoyed this write and fun picture. Have a great/blessed day writing away.....................

Beryl Edmonds December 5, 2021 at 10:50 AM What a reverie it was, it’s a pity you didn’t get to zoom to the stars. Lovely and romantic Victor… Belle

Judy Ball December 1, 2021 at 1:33 PM Beautifully romantic piece here Victor. Loved it. God Bless, JB

Delice Arleen Skelly December 1, 2021 at 2:33 AM Romantic and lovely...Delice

Arthur Vaso November 30, 2021 at 10:40 PM I find this to be such a lovely and beautiful poem! Enjoyed the read! I hope you are doing well Victor.

Sally Eslinger November 30, 2021 at 9:31 PM Victor, this reads as being of a high inspiration. I found quite elegant with a music and sensuous flow. A Fav! Hugs, Sally

Eve Roper November 30, 2021 at 9:36 AM Lovely verse, dear friend ! lots of Love and Hugs

Unseeking Seeker November 30, 2021 at 3:00 AM Beautiful dreamy reverie! Enjoyed

David Smith November 29, 2021 at 12:42 PM Wow. Did not see that one coming. You just can't stop showing off. Age has not slowed down your sense of fun. You old romantic you. Hope you eventually make it up there amongst the stars. If you go before me I will be watching the night sky for you. Very best regards David in NZ

Kim Rodrigues November 29, 2021 at 11:16 AM Dreamlike fantasy - a lovely write, Victor!

Evelyn Judy Buehler November 29, 2021 at 10:01 AM Fantastic and lovely images of a dream romance. I love his pondering on flying off to the stars. :)

Sotto Poet November 29, 2021 at 6:23 AM Victor, you have created a stunning poem. In the summertime calm of twisted rods, your wonderful metaphors create a crystal-clear image!

Sara Kendrick November 29, 2021 at 6:20 AM Very emotive and passionate work you have penned in this one. Dreams whether they be daydreams or night dreams make a mark on our lives. Your visit to my page was delightful. Sara

Supraja Kannan November 29, 2021 at 6:15 AM Beautiful and unique imagery....

Vijay Pandit November 29, 2021 at 5:02 AM Much revelry in this reverie, Victor--though short lived. But that is how dreams are. Creative thoughts!

Jan Allison November 29, 2021 at 4:58 AM A joy to read Victor, hugs jan xx

Jenna Logan November 29, 2021 at 3:28 AM I know you don't reply to comments, but I wanted you to know how much I enjoyed reading this one. Even in a dream, he was afraid to join her. More is the pity.

Valsa George November 29, 2021 at 2:39 AM So he levitated up into the air travelling on the wings of a beautiful reverie, chasing his love ! Even a reverie is half good as a real experience... ! Lovely presentation Victor

Joanna Daniel November 29, 2021 at 1:52 AM Very unique and interesting, Victor:)

Silpika Kalita November 29, 2021 at 1:49 AM Deep and profound, wrapped in the connotation of summer silence of tangled bars, with the splendid metaphors creating the vision crystal clear! Awesome Victor, love the interplay of words and imageries... Silpika