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Dance of Graves

Dance of Graves The dance of graves occurs more than we are prompted to imagine. We prefer to keep matters of death fit into that realm of Afterlife, where the divine mysteries are kept far beyond our daily lives, which are too full with concerns about budgets, health, and childcare. we tend the grown vines ripe with this day’s poems holy calls to harvest From the wedding vows to love devoutly unto death, our greater spirits adopt God’s greatest gift — Love, which our hearts compassionately open to each other. The passing years deepen the enfolding love, but being far outside perfection, we will inevitably hurt, will in turns lash out, scarring the shell of our spouse’s heart or thoughts. deep in the cold earth gold runs in cloaked gleaming veins sought by yearning hearts The graveyard has spaced its sloping, green mounds to embrace our beloved dead, who humbly uttered their vows with hopes of forever feeling the touch, the closeness, and the eternal presence of that endeared mate. But, as lives survive and pass on, marriages, too, will last and end. Th one who remains may, perhaps, go on in a new marriage…So very well does Heaven hold the last cries of those beloveed who’ve passed on. three mounds side by side dance their love story the grasps of loving passed on

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Date: 5/30/2023 1:54:00 PM
A deep poem, filled with the emotions of life and death, and the loss of both. Very respectful and relateable, Sally. Write On! my friend. Hugs, Bill
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Date: 5/7/2023 9:53:00 AM
I like the thoughts enclosed in this poem! It's been a while Miss Sally... thanks a lot for the surprise visit! hi hi Strength to you! Cliff
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Date: 5/7/2023 1:09:00 AM
Sorry, not a pantoum poem. Ryng t edit type…
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Suzette Richards
Date: 5/8/2023 10:36:00 PM
Hi Sally, It is not identifiable as a Japanese poetic form (none of the 10 popular ones used in the West, at any rate). THE 10: Haiku, Kanshi, Renga, Renku, Waka, Tanka, Haikai, Haibun, Katauta & Sedoka. You might consider labeling it "Prose poetry". Regards, Suzette

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