Gershon Wolf Poet Rhyme

Missing, the Magic

missing, the magic
  stars shrink
the moon cowers
  all that's sweet turns sour

heartfelt sighs
  comfort food
steam baths
  no good, no good...

O, before ye despair
  love will repair
nature's caprice, no one spares
  ~ angels in heaven yet care

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Caren Krutsinger January 25, 2022 at 1:59 AM Straight to my FAVE list. I like everything about it! Gershon Wolf January 25, 2022 at 6:58 PM Thanks, Caren. On 2nd reading, I see that this is a bit 'lovey-dovey.' ~ Blood and Guts Wolf

Lindsay Laurie January 21, 2022 at 5:09 PM Hello Gershon ... this covid pandemic is sending people into a spiral of lost magic through the loss of freedom from fear - thanks again Gershon - Lindsay

M. L. Kiser January 17, 2022 at 5:30 PM Oh no, no the universe can't miss it's magic...no! Well penned though, I want that magic back. Gershon Wolf January 17, 2022 at 7:48 PM Just ask the magician!

Sally Eslinger January 16, 2022 at 4:55 PM Gershon, for me, this is a complete poem…total poetry. I cannot say higher. A Fav. Best wishes. Thank you. Thank Gershon Wolf January 16, 2022 at 8:29 PM So nice of you to FAVE this one, Sally. Much appreciated, Gershon

Debra L Brown January 16, 2022 at 3:47 PM Is it plausible that I sense  depression as a result of a love that didn't feel the same way? The only on who can answer you prayer is God...Excellent write, Something to ponder about!.... Blessings ~ Debra Gershon Wolf January 16, 2022 at 8:29 PM Nah, couldn't be me, Mr. 'What-Me-Worry!' ~ Alfred E.

Kim Rodrigues January 16, 2022 at 12:43 PM An emotive write! Gershon Wolf January 16, 2022 at 8:28 PM I have moved on from e-moji writes now! ~ Mr. Emotive

Joseph P. DiMino January 16, 2022 at 11:24 AM Where there is life, there is hope. Got to say in the play. Excellent write! Gershon Wolf January 16, 2022 at 8:04 PM And where there's hope, exuberance blooms! Here's to Flowers and Fragrance, gw

L Milton Hankins January 16, 2022 at 10:18 AM Yes! And they are the sweet celestial magic, gw. Nice job. Gershon Wolf January 16, 2022 at 7:57 PM Just doing my job, as it were. Thanks, Milt. :)

Ronald D Thompson January 16, 2022 at 9:36 AM Nice work Gershon. As you say 'love will repair'. Best wishes...Ron Gershon Wolf January 16, 2022 at 7:55 PM I hope that love will repair, anyway. Thanks, Ron! ~ gw

Charles Messina January 16, 2022 at 7:39 AM Magically delicious! Oh, sorry wrong guy (lol). Magically Gersh'd... Have a great weekend., Gershon. ~CM Gershon Wolf January 16, 2022 at 7:51 PM That's OK, Charlie. I'm at least as delicious as Alouicious. lol. Weekend Wonder, Gershon

Mike Gentile January 16, 2022 at 7:02 AM Some magic, a muse, adrift to confuse! Yet, they will return so have no concern!! How's that? Happy Sunday GW!! Gershon Wolf January 16, 2022 at 7:48 PM That's a corker of a comment, Mike. Hope you've had a refreshing, relaxing weekend. Fidelity and Friendship, Gershon

Silpika Kalita January 16, 2022 at 7:02 AM I was indeed missing the magic of your compositions, was away from the splendid forum from a long time.. Gershon Wolf January 16, 2022 at 7:41 PM Happy to bring a little magic into your life, Silpika. Thank you for your generously kind words, Gershon

Valsa George January 16, 2022 at 12:43 AM The magic is still on. Everything will be repaired and there is no need to despair, dear Gershon ! Gershon Wolf January 16, 2022 at 7:39 PM You're right. I just had to call 'Mr. Fix-It,' Valsa. Cheers, Gershon

Brenda Chiri January 15, 2022 at 10:22 PM Ahh my dear Gershon the magic is in your writings! Lovely piece!;) Gershon Wolf January 16, 2022 at 7:37 PM Brenda, what a treat to see your avatar, my darling. Hope you are well! Magic and Moonbeams, Gershon