Vaporise

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Toroidal heart and bliss bubbles bursting in thousands noiselessly at head ovoid, ushers rapture for which we were thirsting, being by ego no longer decoyed. As a sublime fragrance suffuses form, we are both in this world and in heaven, enveloped by a magnetic bliss storm, soma nectar drips through chakras seven. When jarring life notes deflect attention, bliss remains but its attributes dilute, prompting us to restore meditation, that our soul presence within may reboot. Deepen oh hermit, deepen each bliss strobe ~ Layer by layer, ignorance disrobe 07-November-2022

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Sally Eslinger

Date: 11/6/2022 7:23:00 PM

Seeker! I sure did miss you! This Must go on your Best Of list. Superb in concept, rendering, rhyme, flow. (typo in last stanza of its now reads it’s) anyway, a fave and rounds of applause! xoxo sally

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/6/2022 7:50:00 PM

Thank you, Sally, good to have you back in the thick of action!

Becky Forbes

Date: 11/6/2022 7:03:00 PM

Somehow, I've come to imagine it's back to ignorance we go? Disrobing what we'd thought to be knowledge??

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/6/2022 7:21:00 PM

What is fragmented knowledge but ignorance of lower mind, knowing not the whole, which is garnered when we imbibe wisdom that’s graced by universal consciousness, by letting go of imagined knowing?