A Loud Hullabaloo

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And trees . . . a wild hullabaloo, as I walk a loud chirping path; deep into the forest of green, I am delighted with bird trills. Listen- the murmur of water, and trees . . . a wild hullabaloo; through the tangle a stream whispers, I follow the gurgling water. To the crash of the stream plunging, it gushes, booms down jagged rocks; and trees . . . a wild hullabaloo, I sit near water beautiful. The sky above is azure blue, green forest wraps me in hued arms; yet, in the din there is a peace, and trees . . . a wild hullabaloo. _______________________ July 09, 2022 Poetry/Quatern/A Loud Hullabaloo Copyright Protected, ID 07-1472-542-09 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Premier contest, Onomatopoeia sponsor, Emile Pinet, Judged 07/30/2022

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/11/2022 7:24:00 AM

Very pretty with given words!

Constance La France
Date: 7/11/2022 8:53:00 AM

Kim, thank you so much for the compliment, it was a fun poem to write, blessings ~Constance

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 7/10/2022 2:57:00 AM

Wonderful - a gentle treasure. I love it. Wishing you a win. God bless you, Love, Gina

Constance La France
Date: 7/10/2022 4:25:00 AM

Gina, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem, blessings and love ~Constance

L Milton Hankins

Date: 7/9/2022 10:24:00 AM

Such a fine job using the onomatopoeia words, Constance. I feel sure Emile will like this. Best of luck!

Constance La France
Date: 7/10/2022 4:29:00 AM

Milt, thank you so much for the compliment, I hope Emile likes my poem too, blessings ~Constance

Sally Eslinger

Date: 7/9/2022 8:44:00 AM

Constance! Oh my! This poem a Fave for me. It’s also a lesson in a new, thrilling @# you’ve done it) form, with your innovative choice and use of words giving me the highest regard for your work… making me feel I need to get to work together beyond the flat terrain I may be blindly traversing too long. Thank you! xo

Constance La France
Date: 7/10/2022 4:30:00 AM

Sally, thank you so much for the FAV, and the compliment on my poem and my writing, appreciate, blessings ~Constance