Constance La France Poet Quatern

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A Loud Hullabaloo

 
And trees . . .  a wild hullabaloo,
as I walk a loud chirping path;
deep into the forest of green,
I am delighted with bird trills.

Listen-  the murmur of water,
and trees . . . a wild hullabaloo;
through the tangle a stream whispers,
I follow the gurgling water. 

To the crash of the stream plunging,
it gushes, booms down jagged rocks;
and trees  . . .  a wild hullabaloo,
I sit near water beautiful. 

The sky above is azure blue,
green forest wraps me in hued arms;
yet, in the din there is a peace,
and trees . . .  a wild hullabaloo.

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July 09, 2022


Poetry/Quatern/A Loud Hullabaloo
Copyright Protected, ID 07-1472-542-09
All Rights Reserved,  2022,  Constance La France 


Written for the Premier contest, Onomatopoeia
sponsor, Emile Pinet, Judged 07/30/2022

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Kim Rodrigues July 11, 2022 at 7:24 AM Very pretty with given words! Constance La France July 11, 2022 at 8:53 AM Kim, thank you so much for the compliment, it was a fun poem to write, blessings ~Constance

Regina Mcintosh July 10, 2022 at 2:57 AM Wonderful - a gentle treasure. I love it. Wishing you a win. God bless you, Love, Gina Constance La France July 10, 2022 at 4:25 AM Gina, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem, blessings and love ~Constance

L Milton Hankins July 9, 2022 at 10:24 AM Such a fine job using the onomatopoeia words, Constance. I feel sure Emile will like this. Best of luck! Constance La France July 10, 2022 at 4:29 AM Milt, thank you so much for the compliment, I hope Emile likes my poem too, blessings ~Constance

Sally Eslinger July 9, 2022 at 8:44 AM Constance! Oh my! This poem a Fave for me. It’s also a lesson in a new, thrilling @# you’ve done it) form, with your innovative choice and use of words giving me the highest regard for your work… making me feel I need to get to work together beyond the flat terrain I may be blindly traversing too long. Thank you! xo Constance La France July 10, 2022 at 4:30 AM Sally, thank you so much for the FAV, and the compliment on my poem and my writing, appreciate, blessings ~Constance