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Haiku No 15

vast fields on vast fields

          yet no tall corn can be seen ...

                  dark cloud from afar

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Andrea Dietrich

April 7, 2022 at 11:35 PM

just now seeing this one and also the fact it was POTD. wow, belated congrats, Victor.

Lisa Ricci

March 21, 2022 at 11:02 AM

Hi Victor. I see your entry won POTD so congratulations on that. Your format is in true form and your theme leaves us with imagery. May this day find you well. Have a great night. Remain safe please. Love and Blessings always. (smile)

Sotto Poet

March 20, 2022 at 6:14 AM

Congratulations on being chosen as the Poem of the Day for your haiku. I hope you're feeling much better, Victor

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 18, 2022 at 9:00 AM

- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong

March 16, 2022 at 5:56 PM

CongratuLations on having your haiku honored with POTD. I hope you are feeling much better now Victor. Blessings xxoo

Bj Legros Kelley

March 16, 2022 at 3:31 PM

What an incredible Haiku Victor, that coupled with your image is very striking. Congratulations on your POTD! ~ BJ

Susan Lawrence

March 16, 2022 at 1:35 PM

Victors, powerful words and image . So much said in a few words . Congratulations on POTD! Cheers, Susan :)

Debra L Brown

March 16, 2022 at 11:11 AM

I enjoyed your poem, Victor, I like how you repeated "vast fields." To shows the fields went on for acres. Congratulations! on POTD. It sure was well deserved. Blessings ~ Debra

Supraja Kannan

March 16, 2022 at 6:00 AM

Such a beautiful haiku'and congratulations...

Brandy Nicole

March 15, 2022 at 5:30 PM

Those dark clouds linger so low to the ground, which create a tender mood, but one that is also beautiful and soothing. Congratulations Victor, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy

Evelyn Judy Buehler

March 15, 2022 at 12:51 PM

Those dark clouds seem to be fraught with foreboding. Congratulations on POTD, Victor. Blessings, Evelyn

Kim Rodrigues

March 15, 2022 at 12:49 PM

Happy this one made POTD! Congratulations!

Paula Goldsmith

March 15, 2022 at 10:52 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. I see the picture in your haiku write. Have a great/blessed day...............

Anitha Jayasankar

March 15, 2022 at 10:13 AM

Nice Haiku Victor... Congratulations on your POTD honor... God bless... ~ Ani

Eve Roper

March 15, 2022 at 9:54 AM

Congratulations on POTD.

Ken Rone

March 15, 2022 at 9:18 AM

It is great to see a haiku winning POTD honors. Wonderful composition and image. My best to you during these hard times for the AG community. Best wishes from the Palouse. - Ken

L Milton Hankins

March 15, 2022 at 9:17 AM

This is a fine haiku, Victor. Enjoyable with hints of grim. Congratulations on P.O.T.D.!

Bill Baker

March 15, 2022 at 8:52 AM

Congratulations on Your Haiku being chosen POTD, Victor. Takes a lot of faith and patience to be a farmer. Bill

Heidi Sands

March 15, 2022 at 8:46 AM

Great one. Congratulations for POTD :)

Paulette Calasibetta

March 15, 2022 at 8:26 AM

Congratulations on your POTD! We all await clear skies and the fields filled with stalks of life. :)Paulette

Gershon Wolf

March 15, 2022 at 8:01 AM

Only hope it's not a tornado!... Here in the USA, farmers want the corn to be 'knee high by the fourth of July'... by September, 'higher than an elephant's eye!' Congrats on POTD, Gershon ~ Ex-farmer (in Israel)