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vast fields on vast fields yet no tall corn can be seen ... dark cloud from afar

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




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Date: 4/7/2022 11:35:00 PM
just now seeing this one and also the fact it was POTD. wow, belated congrats, Victor.
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Date: 3/21/2022 11:02:00 AM
Hi Victor. I see your entry won POTD so congratulations on that. Your format is in true form and your theme leaves us with imagery. May this day find you well. Have a great night. Remain safe please. Love and Blessings always. (smile)
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Date: 3/20/2022 6:14:00 AM
Congratulations on being chosen as the Poem of the Day for your haiku. I hope you're feeling much better, Victor
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Date: 3/18/2022 9:00:00 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/16/2022 5:56:00 PM
CongratuLations on having your haiku honored with POTD. I hope you are feeling much better now Victor. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 3/16/2022 3:31:00 PM
What an incredible Haiku Victor, that coupled with your image is very striking. Congratulations on your POTD! ~ BJ
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Date: 3/16/2022 1:35:00 PM
Victors, powerful words and image . So much said in a few words . Congratulations on POTD! Cheers, Susan :)
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Date: 3/16/2022 11:11:00 AM
I enjoyed your poem, Victor, I like how you repeated "vast fields." To shows the fields went on for acres. Congratulations! on POTD. It sure was well deserved. Blessings ~ Debra
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Date: 3/16/2022 6:00:00 AM
Such a beautiful haiku'and congratulations...
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Date: 3/15/2022 5:30:00 PM
Those dark clouds linger so low to the ground, which create a tender mood, but one that is also beautiful and soothing. Congratulations Victor, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 3/15/2022 12:51:00 PM
Those dark clouds seem to be fraught with foreboding. Congratulations on POTD, Victor. Blessings, Evelyn
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Date: 3/15/2022 12:49:00 PM
Happy this one made POTD! Congratulations!
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Date: 3/15/2022 10:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I see the picture in your haiku write. Have a great/blessed day...............
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Date: 3/15/2022 10:13:00 AM
Nice Haiku Victor... Congratulations on your POTD honor... God bless... ~ Ani
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Date: 3/15/2022 9:54:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 3/15/2022 9:18:00 AM
It is great to see a haiku winning POTD honors. Wonderful composition and image. My best to you during these hard times for the AG community. Best wishes from the Palouse. - Ken
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Date: 3/15/2022 9:17:00 AM
This is a fine haiku, Victor. Enjoyable with hints of grim. Congratulations on P.O.T.D.!
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Date: 3/15/2022 8:52:00 AM
Congratulations on Your Haiku being chosen POTD, Victor. Takes a lot of faith and patience to be a farmer. Bill
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Date: 3/15/2022 8:46:00 AM
Great one. Congratulations for POTD :)
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Date: 3/15/2022 8:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD! We all await clear skies and the fields filled with stalks of life. :)Paulette
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Date: 3/15/2022 8:01:00 AM
Only hope it's not a tornado!... Here in the USA, farmers want the corn to be 'knee high by the fourth of July'... by September, 'higher than an elephant's eye!' Congrats on POTD, Gershon ~ Ex-farmer (in Israel)
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Date: 3/15/2022 6:10:00 AM
Congratulations, Victor, on your POTD. Darkness can be sublime - like a Van Gogh painting, your haiku portrays that infinite sublimity. BW ~ Mala
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Date: 3/15/2022 6:09:00 AM
Congratulations Victor on your POTD haiku !! Enjoy your day!
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Date: 3/15/2022 5:17:00 AM
Congrats on POTD Victor
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Date: 3/15/2022 4:43:00 AM
Back to you Victor with Congratulations on your POTD
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