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Rivers Bank

by rivers memory bank - flowing current eddies of you

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Sally Eslinger

Date: 1/21/2021 10:06:00 AM

I feel honored to read this: such a concise poetic encapsulation of Vast feeling. Remarkable! A fave for me

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/21/2021 8:46:00 AM

You wrote a great monoku. Well done. ~~

Janice Canerdy

Date: 1/20/2021 2:27:00 PM

Ultra-concise, powerful, moving, Richard. Janice

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/20/2021 12:22:00 PM

Few words with much said. Memories are the best. Have a wonderful day writing away with blessings....................

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 1/20/2021 6:09:00 AM

Love it. God bless you friend

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/19/2021 12:31:00 AM

This is so tranquil, love it!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 1/18/2021 2:43:00 PM

Memories like water flow nicely in and out of our consciousness. Your thoughts flow onto the page like smooth ripples, thank you for sharing this edible line.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 1/18/2021 12:53:00 PM

Fabulous Richard - banking currencies ;) Linda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/18/2021 12:34:00 PM

absolutely love this kind. SWEET and so succinct.(plus clever)

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 1/17/2021 10:17:00 PM

I love this concisely beautiful tale of haunting memory. It's a fave for me. :=)

Juliet Ligon

Date: 1/17/2021 5:51:00 PM

Nice play on words and great visual.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/17/2021 5:01:00 PM

And swiftly may the river flow; circular may the 'eddies' go. ~ Leave it to 'Beaver' (Hate to be the bearer of bad news, but Eddie Haskell is no longer amongst the living. TV Antennas are flying at half-mast, I hear).

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/17/2021 1:41:00 PM

Ahh!! I liked the metaphors and their implications. I can see that river. Your presence at my page was welcomed. Sara

Quoth Theraven
Date: 1/17/2021 3:03:00 PM

Sara, Thank you, but I forgot the tease. Your gift for writing prose has never diminished except in Hexaverse. I learned a little and felt alot from your poem 'Our Love'. -Richard

Paul Callus

Date: 1/17/2021 8:03:00 AM

Metaphorically beautiful, Richard! Some memories keep coming back to mind, more often than others. ~ Regards // paul

Quoth Theraven
Date: 1/17/2021 10:05:00 AM

Paul, Thank you, though trying to forget. Excerpt from the best river poem ever, "Two drifters, off to see the world There's such a lot of world to see" -Johnny Mercer - Henry Mancini