A Free Spirit

How can I explain to you,
you a poor mortal,
what a free spirit is?
Consider I have no bounds,
I go just where I fancy.
I relish moments of madness
without ill effects.
 
Can you see me waltzing
with a fiery tailed comet
that orbits around far off Arcturus,
in the Herdsmen constellation?
Imbibing its bright soft orange light,
enjoying its hard-to-observe buried corona?
 
Can you imagine me swim amongst
the spiral and elliptical galaxies?
Bask in their dense luminosity,
irrespective of their fluctuating temperatures?
 
I've kissed so many moons,
and frolicked with Venus,
watched in awe a cataclysmic nuclear explosion,
as some old dwarf star goes nova.
 
I've seen all this and more,
but rest assured, o miserable mortal,
that I yearn to be substantial like you.
For you can do so much.....
but not I, 
no I can never love or be loved
like you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 12/12/2020 12:49:00 PM
Victor, how fabulous. A poem that cried to live and you realized it! Thank you. Thank you!
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Date: 12/12/2020 12:52:00 PM
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Date: 11/22/2020 11:10:00 AM
Your imagination and creativity soars in this poem Victor - loved that you frolicked with Venus. A great piece of poetry, kudos my friend. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 11/19/2020 1:31:00 AM
Creative thoughts, loved your ending, Victor:)
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Date: 11/18/2020 10:20:00 PM
Love it, a free spirit I would love to be. hugs Eve
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Date: 11/18/2020 12:22:00 PM
WoW! Victor, What a well-written, in-depth write. Nice take on a free spirit as well. Being” free of love “ would be miserable. Excellent job. I enjoyed the read, my friend:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/17/2020 6:54:00 PM
Kissed so many moons, frolicked with Venus...your words like the Milky Way!
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Date: 11/17/2020 1:20:00 PM
Back to read this one again, Victor. I love your poetry :)
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Date: 11/17/2020 3:56:00 AM
Frolics with the goddess of love, yet love eludes, Well written Victor..
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Date: 11/17/2020 3:41:00 AM
Nice... some just wont get it, Victor..
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Date: 11/17/2020 3:30:00 AM
How beautiful! How are you, Victor? I was searching for you. Did not know that you are here in a new profile. Glad to see you again.
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Date: 11/16/2020 8:26:00 PM
No one wants to be free of love. Beautifully well written, Victor. :)
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Date: 11/16/2020 6:47:00 PM
magnificent rendering of free verse, Victor. Your forte!
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Date: 11/16/2020 2:28:00 PM
Even a free spirit has its limitations. Great poem, Victor :)
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Date: 11/16/2020 12:12:00 PM
- No matter how much we want ... freedom has its limits, Victor :) - Lovely written :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/16/2020 4:47:00 AM
Quite an original thought in this poem, Victor. Enjoyed the ride with free spirit through the astral zone. Superb ending!
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Date: 11/16/2020 3:53:00 AM
An interesting write, being a free spirit would be an exciting existence but as you say there is a downside. Tom
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