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When fate pulls at my haiku of heartstrings, I curse the syllables of my poetic musings. If I do not express my sorrows, how will petals blossom in my garden? Upon the midst of bewilderment, lost without a bosom for a sanctuary. Life can cause confusion; seem somewhat an illusion; when the mind only sees disillusion. Upon the depths of despair; placed upon the ledge of melancholy - legs dangle, eyes stare into random space. Absent thoughts have no demand, yet the soul is insistent, but, all that is seen is darkness; charcoal horizons with no guiding stars, with the moon obscured by dull smoke, jaded eyes simply wonder why. What has become of me? I despise the voices controlling my head. I'm afraid of the images they've created. Who will save me from this ludicrous lucidity. Can anyone prevent vicious vines from suffocating me? Vertigo seduces the mind, influencing it to leap - but it has no faith. Below lies an endless void, a collection of human delusions; an abyss of crushed expectations. Heaven's broken arrows rain down, blood dripping with fragments of broken dreams. A reminder of another false pledge - the final episode of a heart's connection. Flames of hell prepare to scorch me. Sometimes growth is like a stream, that has lost itself in an ocean. No identity, misplaced and alienated, so it dies a slow death. A sigh can only become deceased, when a heart does not beat. So, why do so many die when the water of existence is in your hands? In the marketplace of life, each merchant will give you a different price. Some will try to sell you dreams, others, goods on false pretences. Be careful, not to give all your emotions away to the first bidder; life is an auction - don't let the auctioneer play with your heart. Sometimes love is an unpredictable enigma. I'm tired of living around gambolling gambits, who's games condemn a soul to suicide. But, little do they know, I am a master of self deprecating. The greatest of all pretenders, suffering from a poison mistake that lives with me forever.

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Date: 4/13/2022 6:39:00 PM
This is a Masterpiece, Silent One.. Really enjoyed this! An absolute gem with such depth and imagery. This work of art also contains truth. An exquisite diamond that shines and stands out! Many Blessings..
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Date: 3/28/2022 6:08:00 PM
"life is an auction - don't let the auctioneer play with your heart." - these lines really appeal to me. Good to know this poem was written as a challenge, although great poems emerge from sadness and sorrow. Best wishes ~ Mala
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Date: 3/21/2022 11:08:00 AM
This poem has intense depth, it is powerful, imagery beyond conception - amazing poetry. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 3/20/2022 1:58:00 PM
This is a powerful write and masterfully created. This left many feelings and glad it was fictional. love phyl
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Date: 3/18/2022 10:33:00 PM
The power of words depicted so masterfully in this piece!!! A TRUE MASTERPIECE, my poetic friend.
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Date: 3/16/2022 4:06:00 PM
An excellent fictional write for you Silent One but it speaks the the truth for some. I’m sitting on the ledge of melancholy right now and my husband’s in the depths of despair, we’ve been through so much in the five months, crushed expectations, broken dreams, lost in an ocean of bewilderment… Belle
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Date: 3/16/2022 6:18:00 AM
As one with thoughts shared by many, glad to read as fiction! That being said, only a soul who can understand such depths can write about it in such a way as to convey, without a doubt to the reader, such feelings. Silent One, you never cease to amaze me and though I think you don't want or need such praise, I want and need to give it! Happy Wednesday!!
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Date: 3/15/2022 9:54:00 PM
You were up to the challenge, Silent One. Deep thoughts on deep despair in many areas of life. I can identify with the feelings of lostness and detachment as one drifts through the space of non-resistance. Growth can make a person feel very insecure and vulnerable while internalizing the changes taking place. Thanks for share the emotions and depth of your thoughts. Bill
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Date: 3/15/2022 6:31:00 PM
Another amazing write, sweet friend, glad it was fictional verse. Blessings to you and yours
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Date: 3/15/2022 6:21:00 PM
Emotions tangle around the heart, leaving us confused at times. Lost. You are able to dive deep in the doom and gloom - such darkness. "Silence" seems to stir your muse. ~ Brandy
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Date: 3/15/2022 4:49:00 PM
my goodness, i am glad to get to the end and know this was fictional for you. but REALLY great writing, you rose to the challenge!!
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Date: 3/15/2022 12:27:00 PM
Quite a labyrinth of connotation emotion And thought you put in motion I hope you are well, or maybe becoming.. Resigned to so.becoming.? Ps enjoyed the journey.
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Date: 3/15/2022 12:27:00 PM
Spiritual guides--crucial for the weak living life with no direction, the mind spoils itself and mistakes are made along the way...all the makings for the disillusioned. To overcome illusions, one must be disillusioned. This is our conundrum our tragedy--Buddha "The marketplace of life--great analogy!" Your poem makes one think, thank you!
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Date: 3/14/2022 8:41:00 PM
Amazing write dear Silent One ! I am in awe of you ! Your comparison of life to a market place suggests so much. This goes into my FAV, dear poet friend !
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Silent One
Date: 3/15/2022 6:52:00 AM
Thank you for reading and also for he FAV.
Date: 3/14/2022 7:46:00 PM
wow, Silent One, is there anything you Can't do, I think not. You succeed every time, in my eyes, keep well, :)
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Silent One
Date: 3/15/2022 6:52:00 AM
You are always too kind, thank you.
Date: 3/14/2022 6:27:00 PM
A deep perspective on the trials of live, Very nicely penned Silent
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Silent One
Date: 3/15/2022 6:55:00 AM
Thank you Joseph..
Date: 3/14/2022 5:50:00 PM
The depths of despair shine through in this melancholy poem Silent. I am happy to know it is fictional. I can relate somewhat from past experience. So well expressed. Blessings xxoo
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Silent One
Date: 3/15/2022 6:55:00 AM
Thank you... just a challenge that was set and I thought I would write for it..
Date: 3/14/2022 3:39:00 PM
A brilliant and engrossing poem, S1. Of all these marvelous lines, verses 6 and 7 stand out for me. Have a great week, Evelyn
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Silent One
Date: 3/15/2022 6:56:00 AM
Thank you Evelyn... I have to say, that part of the poem was written first.. have no idea where my muse decided to go..
Date: 3/14/2022 2:47:00 PM
Very powerful ending! Many truths in this poem for sure. It is thought provoking and stirs emotions too. Very good Silent One :)
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Silent One
Date: 3/15/2022 6:58:00 AM
Thank you Heidi..
Date: 3/14/2022 2:18:00 PM
Such truth: “Life can cause confusion; seem somewhat an illusion; when the mind only sees disillusion.” “ placed upon the ledge of melancholy - legs dangle, eyes stare into random space.” “ jaded eyes simply wonder why.” and that is just three points…impeccable observation which I’ve grown to understand this past year. Well done, Silent! ~ keep writing, sweet poet.
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Silent One
Date: 3/15/2022 7:08:00 AM
Thank you.. we all feel like this sometimes, but we have this inner strength that keeps us going.. I think this is two poems in one... I think my muse was being silly..
Date: 3/14/2022 1:38:00 PM
You sum up the price and downside of living with human intelligence S1, where eventually if we overthink it, our reality can appear quite pointless, and self destructive, incredible poem, cheers David
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Date: 3/14/2022 11:28:00 AM
S1, as always this is such a brilliant write.. with so many interesting metaphors... I just loved the title and the first stanza...and the allusion of life as an auction..."marketplace of life", " "selling of dreams.. "... " first bidder"... that whole stanza so creative... not to mention the alliterative beauty throughout.. God bless... ~ Ani
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Date: 3/14/2022 10:44:00 AM
Dear Silent, a Fav! I will print out to save. An apt metaphor now to be part of my daily life. I could quote back every stanza as brilliant. Almost sounds like a comforting answer to my poem. Please read my “Warning Words from My Soul” for additional thoughts, as relate to despair &=suicide. Great imagery in ur pen
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Date: 3/14/2022 9:37:00 AM
Oh well done my friend. Here you bring out the disillusionment of every day life in general. We grow up protected as children and then the starkness of reality hits us when we become grown and must fend for ourselves. We see how people connive and cheat each other both in business and in relationships and the political world is just scary. Well done God Bless, JB
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Date: 3/14/2022 7:49:00 AM
A storm roiling emotions in this poetic journey, SO. Splendid metaphors throughout make your point about travails in life.
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