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Love In the Making

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I kissed her fine nape and clipped the pendant Around her neck, a symbol of true love. A white large diamond glittered in the sun. She upturned her face for a thank you kiss. Around her neck, a symbol of true love, A glad remembrance of our happy times. She upturned her face for a thank you kiss, An endearing and meaningful caress, A glad remembrance of our happy times. A white large diamond glittered in the sun An endearing and meaningful caress I kissed her fine nape and clipped the pendant.

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 7/23/2022 8:02:00 AM

Hi Victor, this is such a beautiful Pantoum. Your words sing into the heart my friend. This is an excellent write. Have a wonderful Saturday .....Mike.

Mike Bayles

Date: 7/14/2022 7:14:00 AM

Very nice pantoum, Victor. The feeling of love comes through on every line.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/11/2022 11:27:00 AM

What a wonderful Pantoum Victor - the pic is so appropriate with the words of this beautiful poem - well penned my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Sally Eslinger

Date: 7/8/2022 9:23:00 PM

I do so like this form and I thought the worded imagery here made splendid music. I also want to thank you for your well wishes during my health struggles of past two mos. Slow but steady here L xox

I Am Anaya

Date: 7/6/2022 3:47:00 PM

Victor, unlike most, I am not a connoisseur of romantic poetry, until I read your exquisite portrait of love's true essence in such a difficult form. The mystery woman enhances the romantic dimension. Viva la romance!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/6/2022 6:34:00 AM

The simple things of life, remembered! ~ hugs, Kim

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 7/6/2022 2:14:00 AM

A gem of a pantoum Victor...Delice

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/5/2022 7:10:00 AM

Your superb words fit the form of poetry, Victor so well so emotional .Love it.

Supraja Kannan

Date: 7/5/2022 6:14:00 AM

How romantic and what a perfect pantoum!!! Absolutely a pleasure to read this cute poetry... Thanks for sharing...

Eve Roper

Date: 7/5/2022 12:02:00 AM

Perfect. Victor.. you are getting so good at the form, beside very romantic.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/4/2022 6:34:00 PM

hmmm very sensual and pleasant to read Victor, :)

Tania Kitchin

Date: 7/4/2022 4:44:00 PM

A sweet romantic poem, Victor!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 7/4/2022 11:29:00 AM

This poem is so lovely and romantic, Victor. An excellent pantoum! :)

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 7/4/2022 10:02:00 AM

A sensitive and poignant pantoum;your memories ever present~a lovely piece. :)Paulette

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/4/2022 6:50:00 AM

Victor, you've written poetry of a very high caliber here. You have, without a doubt, done a wonderful job with the pantoum form, and your work is a very romantic and exquisite masterpiece.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/4/2022 6:36:00 AM

Glittering in love and gems--a lovely romantic write, Victor.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/4/2022 4:14:00 AM

This is a seamless one. I enjoyed reading it today. I like doing these because as you go along, they are easier and easier to write. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara

Valsa George

Date: 7/4/2022 2:51:00 AM

I have struggled with pantoums ! But you have done it as easy as planting a kiss!

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 7/4/2022 2:34:00 AM

A beautiful Pantoum poem Victor, the height of romance in an awesome read… Belle

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 7/4/2022 1:44:00 AM

So well written ~ this form is not so easy as you’ve made it look