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As the Cup Runneth Over

As the Cup Runneth Over thirst dire, immediate pleading, despairing, compelling newborns, world, pneuma, rivers living, assuaging, redeeming quenched, blessed wellspring (c) sally young eslinger 11/8/2023

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Joe Maverick

Date: 11/16/2023 11:55:00 AM

Got you Sally, its a loud and sparkling Clear write, here dear..Coulden't help That rhyme slipping on in there.'

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/14/2023 8:54:00 AM

I enjoyed your Diamante write. Good Luck.... Have a blessed day...............

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/9/2023 1:51:00 AM

You chose your words with diligence. Great poetry. Blessings.

Sally Eslinger
Date: 11/10/2023 1:22:00 PM

Thank you, Victor. I worked to get this one right. Good day & weekend to you! Hugs!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/8/2023 3:49:00 AM

a well-executed Diamante, Sally. You inspire me to try this form of poetry. Your words are beautiful. Have a splendid day, Sara

Sally Eslinger
Date: 11/8/2023 1:12:00 PM

Hi, Sara. I think you’ll like this form. I found it like doing a puzzle or crossword.ci had to reallybhink thru &=choose each word for placement, esp if i want a statement, likecthis one can imply no waybto quench thirst. Thevbible ref in title tells how God provides for not only physical thirst…Looking forward to yours!