Frost

white feathered ruffles dressing twigs, leaves and branches… some wind like tinsels Dec. 29. 2022 8.02pm

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Sally Eslinger

Date: 1/12/2023 5:37:00 PM

This haiku has a superb flash in its Aha! moment, which brought me a smile to end my very hard, sad afternoon. The imagery is exquisite. What a precious bird you’ve painted! I’m making this a fave to keep its cheering vision close. Bravo! I thank you, Len!

Len Gasun
Date: 1/13/2023 4:41:00 PM

Welcome my dear friend poetess. Thank you more for coming by to read my haiku, your encouraging comments and faving my poem. Thanks as well for gracing my day with your wonderful poetry. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs