The Empty Academy Schoolhouse

The Empty Academy Schoolhouse

It stands on a vast green lot,
No trees to shelter it from heavy, gray clouds
on the rolling foothill horizon.
Its thin coat of white paint peels,
revealing bare, dry-rotted wood.
The rickety porch boards,
once sturdy under children’s energetic steps,
look about to collapse at the slightest wind gust.

What’s it like inside?
Puddles of water from the last rain?
Rat’s nest in the woodstove?
Any desks or yellowed books, pencils,
love notes left behind?
A soiled ribbon slid off some girl’s braid?
A chalkboard with spelling words
or arithmetic problems still on it?

What songs, prayers, or memorized poems
still echo off faded, white-washed walls?

When was the first day of school?
When was the last?

What became of all the children,
who once ran around laughing
all over this green meadow?
What happened to ball players,
clover-chain weavers,
kids who picked lupines and fiddlenecks
for their teacher?
Did they leave Academy,
or do they lie in the cemetery on a nearby hill?

Published in Song of the San Joaquin, Spring 2021 Issue

This old school house is in the tiny pioneer town of Academy, just outside of Fresno, California, near the Sierra Nevada foothills. Some of the descendants of the pioneer families still remain in the area.
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Kingston Avatar
November 5, 2023 at 7:11 PM
All the children back then learned the same things at different ages in 1 room. Wasn't that something? Reading, writing & arithmetic. Almost like the Amish still do now. I would love to visit the old school house you write about as a former teacher. Your poem reminded me of the TV show, Little House On The Prairie, from the 70's. It was nice to read, close my eyes afterwards and imagine your words and and the history wrapped around them.
Fenn Avatar
December 19, 2023 at 2:01 PM
Wow I appreciate your really cool comments. Maybe some day you can see this old school house. The same society that restored the church now wants to restore the school house.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
July 29, 2021 at 4:57 AM
A beautifully crafted moving poem! Congratulations, I see this poem had been published - definitely a remarkable poem with detailed and excellent images! It brings back the memories of a schoolhouse I went for a few years, in a village, when I was very young. Trying to imagine how that building looks like now! Love ~ Mala
Fenn Avatar
July 29, 2021 at 1:35 PM
Hi Mala! Thank you for visiting me. You should write a poem about that school house you went to. I would love to read your story.
Wells Avatar
July 28, 2021 at 6:46 PM
I love visiting old, unoccupied buildings. They are full of shadow stories. I feel the ghosts roaming this abandoned schoolhouse. Nicely done! :)
Fenn Avatar
July 29, 2021 at 1:34 PM
Hi Thomas! Always great to hear from you. Thank you for the awesome comment!
Adams Avatar
July 21, 2021 at 5:18 PM
great job making this one come to life so we could see the school...in my area they have taken some old school buildings and turned them into apartments and condos, a factory too...i got to live in the one for a couple years, it even still had the original boiler room and school bell up top, sometimes kids would go up and wring it and the police would get a good laugh from it... good write :)
Fenn Avatar
July 23, 2021 at 7:23 PM
Thank you Sandra! Must have been cool to love in one of those!
Callus Avatar
July 20, 2021 at 10:43 AM
What a strikingly beautiful poem, Jennifer! I have an urge to peep inside and see with my own eyes...and yet, I would feel like I'm intruding on the past. ~ Best regards // paul
Fenn Avatar
July 20, 2021 at 2:53 PM
Hi Paul! Thank you for the compliment. I would feel much the same way.
Rose  Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 6:08 PM
How beautifully depicted,, every word gives us a glimpse into the school house, Some things remain a mystery to most, but not to those who lived it. Thanks for sharing with such keen observance, :)
Fenn Avatar
July 19, 2021 at 4:37 PM
Thank you! So happy you like it!
Jayasankar Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 10:36 AM
What great imagery of the school.... you literally took us to that old school as it is now... so many beautiful lines... Congrats on this poem being published too Jennifer.. Thank you for your recent visit to my poem and comment... God bless... ~ Ani
Fenn Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 1:41 PM
Thank you Ani! That made my day!
Halliday Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 4:57 PM
That was a very moving poem. It reminded me of some old places I've visited. It also brought to mind a statue at Lovers Point in Pacific Grove CA, of a boy carrying a sailboat, that was part of a graduating class at the beginning of World War 2. https://www.google.com/search?as_st=y&tbm=isch&as_q=&as_epq=Lovers+point+statue+class+of&as_oq=&as_eq=&imgsz=&imgar=&imgc=&imgcolor=&imgtype=&cr=&as_sitesearch=&safe=images&as_filetype=&tbs=#imgrc=PxoXhFmS9Q-FAM
Fenn Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 5:13 PM
Happy 4th Mark! So glad you enjoyed this poem! Thank you for the visit. I will look at this site for Lovers’ Point.
La France Avatar
July 1, 2021 at 4:48 PM
Jennifer, beautifully penned poem full of wonderful word selection and great lines, well done ~ love and serenity _Constance
Fenn Avatar
July 2, 2021 at 11:39 AM
Thank you Constance! Your encouraging words made my morning!
Alex Avatar
June 25, 2021 at 7:14 PM
A very wonderful and dynamic poem.
Fenn Avatar
July 2, 2021 at 11:38 AM
Thank you Christuraj! Glad you like it!
Eslinger Avatar
June 23, 2021 at 8:17 AM
OMG, A Wow and fave. Not the ordinary. expected words of imagery, but the extraordinary painted, heard, seen from a born poet soul, with a striking end! Thank you, Jennifer. Hugs
Fenn Avatar
June 25, 2021 at 3:04 PM
I’m so glad Sally! That made my day! Thank you!
Alex Avatar
June 18, 2021 at 7:27 PM
Wonderful Description.
Fenn Avatar
June 25, 2021 at 3:03 PM
Thank you Christuraj!
Pandit Avatar
June 16, 2021 at 4:38 PM
Your description of the school make me want to know more--I suppose that is what the town feels--as eloquently you queried. Well done, indeed! Congrats Jennifer for having this poem published.
Fenn Avatar
June 16, 2021 at 5:03 PM
Thank you Vijay! So glad you dropped in!
Y. Avatar
June 14, 2021 at 10:12 PM
WoW! Jennifer, You’ve penned a well-written poem about the old school. I found it to be heartfelt and powerful. The last two lines of your second stanza were profound and impactful. Congrats on getting the poem published. Have a good evening- Alexis
Fenn Avatar
June 15, 2021 at 1:46 PM
Thank you Alexis, for taking the time to write such encouraging words.
Foster Avatar
June 14, 2021 at 10:00 AM
Wow... powerful. A trip through yesterday, felt and relived... Excellent ... Ann
Fenn Avatar
June 14, 2021 at 4:07 PM
Thank you friend! Glad you like it!
Buehler Avatar
June 12, 2021 at 4:29 PM
It is fascinating to contemplate the history imbued in such a place, Jennifer. Your captivating poem, filled with likely imaginings, was a pleasure to read throughout. Congratulations on having it published. Evelyn
Buehler Avatar
June 14, 2021 at 9:27 PM
You are more than welcome, Jennifer. Thank you for the compliment. I am so happy that my poem was a part of your mom's special day. Please give her my belated happy birthday wishes. I hope she had a truly wonderful day. :)
Fenn Avatar
June 13, 2021 at 2:21 PM
Thank you Evelyn, for visiting me and I’m happy you like the poem. Yours are always a treat to read. I introduced my mom to yours by printing your poppy poem and other Soupers’ poems about all things orange for her birthday, since orange is her favorite color. She liked your poppy one.
Cunningham Avatar
June 12, 2021 at 1:18 PM
Enjoyed your verse Jennifer, you painted a lovely image with your words. I bet that old building could tell many stories. Congrats too on having it published in the San Joaquin journal. Hope your weekend is going well. Tom
Fenn Avatar
June 12, 2021 at 2:50 PM
Thank you Tom, for stopping by with encouraging words. Yes, praise Jesus all is going well. Hope the same for you!
Hankins Avatar
June 12, 2021 at 1:11 PM
This is an exquisite, poignant poem, Jennifer, full of rich images of a time from the past well-remembered. I'm not at all surprised that it has already been published and wider read. Thanks so much for visiting me, too.
Fenn Avatar
June 12, 2021 at 1:14 PM
Hi L Milton! Thank you for your encouraging words! So happy you like it! Thank you for stopping by.
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