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Yes Obscessed With Poetry

*** Yes…Obscessed with Poetry! *** As the moon was releasing finale beams And the sun was dressing For her later, post-solstice, winter rise… I had not yet slept, kept Awake by epiphanies of poetics — My tireless pen scribbling Down the rushing lyrics to their Rising score. Then, as the clouds refused to part To reveal our sun’s well-warming light at her mid-day height, I was excitedly expounding About the knowlege my night with poetry had brought, revealing, So i thought, some meaning about the human psyche, More than just matters of words. But, beyond the import Of Poetry growing a range of spring Violets across my nigh clear pages, An afternoon’s gust replete With January hail, Fell over me after I exclaimed, “Amazing?” and to hear in response: “Look, you’re obscessed with poetry. I’m not. And I was just wondering how long before quiet would —“ Eliminate the wondering… As (justdays before Christmas), on A cold afternoon, a storm passed through The city with little warning. Flashed lightning twice over The sky, and sounding but once, Thunder struck us dumb. Quiet? I hear inner gusts Smack my tears against the windows’ panes. My amusement is drowned within the room. Quiet? While I could scream — Yes! Yes! I am obscessed With poetry With God With my beloved, and our pups With drawing, dance and music, too… But, foremost, I am obscessed — To say and stay so, With living With surviving in blessed Hope — on past the trials of ailments and the hard gales of age — While Thankful to poetry — perhaps anong the least of most of these, For its patiently waiting ways — Within the All and everyone one of us — So we hold images in our dreams of seeing Violet buds spring their heads Above a layer of January snow, And we might hear the poems’ rise In its brilliance From each opening purple petal. —————————————————————————————————————- (c) sally you g eslinger 1/ /2023 Thanks be to God…

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Date: 1/13/2023 4:27:00 PM
Hello my dearest friend Sally! This is another very impressive and outstanding masterpiece of yours that goes to my fave. Your exceptional talent really shows your deep passion of poetry. I love this so much. I'm hugging this and you my dear great poetess and artist. So marvelous and amazing. So much thanks for sharing. God bless you always with good health, joy and all the best in life.
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 1/13/2023 7:19:00 PM
Ken, you are very sweet and i’m humbled by you supportive words! You’ s given me a smile after a hard week here. Hugs for you! Thanks for the fav too!
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Date: 1/13/2023 7:06:00 PM
Ken, you are very sweet and i’m humbled by you supportive words! You’ s given me a smile after a hard week here. Hugs for you! Thanks for the fav too!
Date: 1/9/2023 6:10:00 PM
"Yes! I am obsessed With poetry With God With my beloved, and our pups With drawing, dance and music, too…" Poetry is passion. Life, living is passion. Without passion we are mere donuts absent the tasty filling. I have sadly chosen wrong, lured by the passion. Regretted the wrong, but never regretted having tried passionately. That is what separates poetry from all other forms of writing...daring to inhale words until one risks bursting, having faith that God, may judge our syntax, our punctuation and spelling, but never our eternal quest to define and know. Great writing!
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 1/13/2023 7:18:00 PM
Joe, wish my mom could see your comment, but i think PSp is read in heaven…one eve, quite crirically, she said to me, “sally, you have to learn to love the language.” It was a dare i took and my love is still growing probably 55 years later. Thanks for your dear comment! Hugs!
Date: 1/9/2023 3:39:00 PM
wow this is outstanding poetry, to hear poetry Yes not that is creative to boot Sally, thank you for sharing your talent. Alongside your precious heart
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Date: 1/9/2023 9:25:00 AM
Poetry is needed in life…our emotions and grand images…even in the book of Psalms and Song of Solomon. Nice poem, Sally!
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Date: 1/9/2023 11:10:00 AM
Yes! Wonderful point, Kim! When i edit a poem, or even read one by another, i take after the first read, every single word to be sure the meaning & music of it fits, because God Made The Word. His Voice spoke His created into being. And, ive always loved KJV because the whole bible reads like poetry. Thanks, so much for reading &commenting. Enjoyed several of your poems this morn. sally
Date: 1/9/2023 5:09:00 AM
Your creative muse is on display in this poem of intrigue and imagination, Sally. Wonderfully contemplating in artful inspiration. Keep the poetic spirit humming.
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 1/9/2023 8:18:00 AM
Vijay, Thank you! Perhaps muses like flaming emotions? I honor you opinions & excellence. You’ve no idea how much thought you comments to others have sparked much thought for me. May the muse be with you! xox sally
Date: 1/9/2023 1:58:00 AM
I find this poem very positive and with a hint of spirituality. Hope to see you around.
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Date: 1/9/2023 8:09:00 AM
Dahlin, Victor! (That’s Darling in a New England accent 8-). Of course I’m around. Always! I haunt Malta at least once a day. I think you’ve a whole Soup crew traipsing after you on all those walks you do? Goodness! Many, many thanks for reading my poem! Many hugs! sally
Date: 1/8/2023 8:26:00 PM
Careful: Obsessions breed depressions as well as ascensions!
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Date: 1/9/2023 7:59:00 AM
Gershon, i really DO appreciate your wise comment & take it to mind&heart. I have been an individual on introspective alert probably since i was 15. That’s partly how this poem came to be — my 1st response was “oh no! Obscessed? Not good. I fail again.” But, after reflecting, i realized ( w/some defensive anger) “No! We’re talkin My Vocation! The thing God himself wants me to do! It takes obscession to improve! AND, I have to be alive to create, which means surviving all this illness, so…” This poem became the reply. The epiphany re poetry is a half complete poem soon to go up. Well, Gershon…more than you ever wanted to know! I will caarry your words. Blessings! sally

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