What Is Torn

** What’s Torn **

What’s been torn off or away may be
a recurring theme — of dreams or memory —
that nags, popping up unexpectedly
to recall or, for dear losses, again grieve…

The things thieved 
from life — as divinely conceied,
like the Amazon forest’s trees — 
don’t leave, but remain in a spectral reality…

What’s been torn away 
may similarly refuse to leave —
like my calve, cut from my body, will scream,
sending phantom pain in suffered agonies…
	
What was seized from me on that mournful day,
— sculpted by dancing ballet for a decade,
stayed as I went from anestesized to awake
into a daytime nightmare without any escape…

When life sends us to dire places,
where hopelessness would subjugate us,
God will guard our souls and grace us 
with a strength: resounding to the soul…

Left ragged, like having my health fail
in reaching goals, I will feel my heart wail
near breaking, but I refuse to  let my faith pale
…believing the prayers of heaven will entail
blessings to help all God’s children prevail.



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((c)  s.y..eslinger 3/2024
**an addition to “On Phantom Pain” poem still in progress at this time

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 5/2/2024 5:32:00 PM
Sally, sorry for anything lost but still feeling like it might be there still. Life can be cruel at times, and we all try to do the best we can though it's painful. When I first read the "Amazon forest trees", I was wondering what does Amazon have to do with trees....like they use a lot of paper or something for their packaging although what does that have to do with spectral reality. My head might be messed up. On the other hand, language is funny. Hope you are well.
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 5/3/2024 1:20:00 AM
Duke, yoke might chheck out my latest blog, when i wrte abt being back to Soupmafter absennce of two mos. when my right calf was amputated.
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 5/2/2024 10:35:00 PM
Hi Duke! I refer here to the Amazon Forest in South America, which has been greatly torn down mostly to create cattle ranging land and that has hurt the world’s environment.
Date: 3/30/2024 9:07:00 AM
Sally, "What Is Torn" says this to me: It explores the aftermath of loss, whether it's a piece of the self, or the environmental devastation symbolized by the Amazon's deforestation, emphasizing that such losses linger in a "spectral reality." It juxtaposes the visceral experience of 'phantom' pains with a resilient spirit bolstered by faith. The poem suggests that divine grace and inner strength are crucial for overcoming the despair brought on by irrevocable change and adversity. Cheers, Don
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Date: 3/27/2024 10:17:00 AM
Faith and hope which you aspire as you adore God.
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Date: 3/26/2024 7:44:00 PM
Very evocative, albeit graphic, painful description... which you segued into a powerful poem of Hope and Faith. Nicely done, Sally!
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 3/28/2024 2:54:00 PM
My huge thahks, Gershon! It is a,k Truel. It is the Lord alone sustaining & ny purpose on thus earth to Try to give testimony. That is my Hope. Alleluia! Happy Easter!
Date: 3/25/2024 5:40:00 PM
I can feel your loss my dear friend and admire your courage and faith in our loving God. Thanks for sharing this meaningful poem of hope and faith. A FAV for my list! Stay strong, my prayers are with you. Hugs, Bill
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 3/26/2024 2:57:00 AM
Yo, Bill! My immense thanks for your prayers snd for your comment here, Actually, the prompt for this was the PSp “ragged” contest, making me get so hugely personal…& the part Gos’s been ppplaying as bthe soul is Never torn. But took e too long to pen to enter. Oh eell…my love, hugs, sally
Date: 3/25/2024 12:13:00 PM
A heart-warming poem Glad to hear from you.
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