Shifting Plates of Time

The ground rumbles, ominously, I'm on the steep side of a Mississippi River Bluff, mid-August, gathering bursting crimson red trophies of Staghorn Sumac for my favorite sumac-ade, a spright, invigorating tonic I enjoy this time of year. The smell in the air, forest-sage beginning to dry and ripen, the bitter tang of scattered paper-birch bark chimneys...must keep alert for the origins of the earthly rumble.

The unsettled earth, sweet and bitter smells...mix with my age and I sit down as if in a trance and drift asleep...harkening back to my training as a young man in a Manhattan Bagel Deli, assembling prep-stations for the customer onslaught about to descend. Proofed bagel dough, seeded and rotating in the elevator slate-shelved oven after a frothy malt-bath in the bubbling giant kettle, delectable aromas of fairly vibrating paper-sliced spiced meats and piquant aged cheeses, briny sheets of smoked lox, pots of sweetly acidic capers and luminous heirloom tomatoes...

But I'm much older now, my mind remembers, but my body can't function like it once did, I can't perform the once-easy configurations effortlessly like before.

The rumbling, just my imagination...

I awaken, gather my bunch of fluorescent sumac, which I am still able to concoct, mindful of God's Grace in my spiritual and physical evolution...He

Has Blessed me with.

8-13-20
6:03 am
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 10/12/2021 3:05:00 PM
Here, I was completely captured, from referring back to my own memories of scents, noises and look of Manhattan de lies to feeling my muscle aches as I read of your aging changes. Marvelous images in a super flow. A Fav for me! Hugs and blessings!
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 10/12/2021 9:44:00 PM
Thanks for relating, Sally...
Date: 9/3/2021 12:02:00 AM
Very descriptive of your precious memories... Enjoyed reading James... God bless... ~ Ani
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 9/3/2021 4:02:00 AM
Nice to see you Ani! Thx for stopping by...james
Date: 7/30/2021 7:37:00 AM
This is absolutely delightful. We all find these memories of things as they were when we were younger, and, if we are lucky, we are able to age gracefully and find peace with it. I loved the description of your work in the deli!
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 7/30/2021 9:16:00 PM
Thank you Barbara! My family gathers for my yearly bagel nosh while watching thanksgiving parades!
Date: 7/1/2021 6:06:00 PM
Nice description, wonderful contrast in this write; very nice.
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 7/2/2021 8:19:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 5/23/2021 4:24:00 PM
I am glad I chose this piece so rich in whimsy & Reward, James the gentle scenery you portray Frames my reading of you at this. Time gets Me thinking of long ago memories that can Give insight of how to deal with a polar opposite Problem of today, really enjoyed it."
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 5/23/2021 5:51:00 PM
Enjoyed your reply, Joe! Blessings your way! jmg
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