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Lessons of Autumn

Lessons of Autumn Summaries of schooling — lessons upon lessons guiding Thoughts in class after class…as bells ring… Volumes to consider about ways of interpreting… As the world takes Life on a continuous spin — round and around — outside and within — Orbits, tides, seasons, moods, visions… Lessons taught that Winter is The Dead or Hibernating; Spring is Re-birth; Summer is The Growing; And Autumn? Well, students were asked to see — symbollically, spiritually, scientifically — That Autumn is the season of Dying, of Leaving. Autumn, the antithesis of Spring; Autumn, the harvesting, the taking away from the earth Spring’s born and Summer’s grown. Autumn is the drying, wilting, wrinkling; The changing from acting to waiting… And ending. But, in Autumn, Mother Nature displays Some greater lessons using God’s deeper palette: To layer by layer paint, and year by year present How Autumn’s weeks pass on Gifting the hemispheres with her splendors In a glorious prelude to turning with life, Tier upon tier, into a new year. All around, Autumn transforms the landscape From too monochrome into blended tones Of copper…and red…and yellow aside goldened greens That shiver before the backing blankets of violet horizons; And often the trees for awhile, may even lean in together to endure The colder winds and rains pattering. ~ When sweeping Autumn begins, Leaf by leaf breaks off from branches and twigs… And, by design created, floats down, Each laying on a palm of air, to soften The fall ~ The living in nature all have their seasons…As we Too, grow on the many branching pathways of our own, Hopefully learning the value and beauty In the circling of all time’s teaching seasons… As each and every leaf sways, wafts, flutters, twirls, Slowly waltzing down to the waiting earth, To lay there, with such vibrant color, Over the dust that made us. Autumn always, is time’s heavy curtain, Taking its cue to fall… —————————————————————————————————————————————————— (c) sally young eslinger 10/2023

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Date: 10/20/2023 12:11:00 AM
you are such an amazing poet, and I suspect an even better artist lol, love this xo
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Date: 10/19/2023 10:23:00 PM
This is one of the best poems I have read recently of autumn. It's many sided splendor is subjected to close scrutiny and presented in your inimitable style. "Autumn, the harvesting, the taking away from the earth Spring’s born and Summer’s grown." So true. It is also the season of dying and leaving ! Lovely thoughts dear Sally. Into my FAVE.
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Date: 10/19/2023 4:14:00 PM
Sally, your poem is truly exceptional. Every aspect of it is exceptional; it possesses a breathtaking beauty, and a profound strength, and is brimming with vivid portrayals of nature's changing seasons. Moreover, it carries the unmistakable mark of God's intricate storytelling, encompassing the eternal cycle of life and death.
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Date: 10/18/2023 2:51:00 PM
Oh my goodness Sally, I can hardly breathe, this is so beautiful, powerful and filled with not only the images of earth's seasons, but the handprint of Gods story telling of life and death, the journey that all must take on this sphere. Wow, well done!! <3
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Date: 10/10/2023 5:53:00 PM
Poetically beautiful, in all tiers and shades of expression. Really a detailed masterpiece. Language and style uniquely exquisite! Good to hear you are continuing to recover. Blessings. You get a FAV!
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Date: 10/14/2023 2:25:00 PM
Wow, Joe, such lovely, humbling words you send my way. This poem came in response to a revelation of the soul. Thus, you felt it too. I am thankfully still recovering, tho not the boune back of yrs ago. Haha. God bless & inspire you! Hugs, sally
Date: 10/7/2023 4:10:00 AM
This is a stunning poem Sally full of autumn delights. Your poetic lines, creative imagination, are outstanding. This poem offers so much reflection and deep thinking. It’s incredibly visual. I love the title too! ‘ using God’s deeper palette’’ rains pattering’’ waltzing down’. The last stanza, in particular, is stunning.Loved it. Thank you. Hugs and smiles to you :):)
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Date: 10/9/2023 11:54:00 AM
Christina, thank you for you dear comments! I, like all of us, am SO touched when a poem causes response. I deeply thank you! Delighted to see you as i begin another wee of precious life! Hope you have a good one too! sally
Date: 10/6/2023 12:02:00 PM
I am so happy that you are feeling better.. what an amazing poem.. full of imagery and fitting for the season.. All the best..
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Date: 10/9/2023 11:49:00 AM
Feeling better, but slow in allthings yet. So happy to see you responded to this poem. Many thanks & well wishing over you too! xox sally
Date: 10/6/2023 9:49:00 AM
Taking its cue to fall! How beautiful is this. Yes so many think of autumn as season of dying etc but for some reason theres beauty in the season.a very insightful and very deeply meaningful write this is, i love how you’ve also elaborated on various seasons. So good to see you posting, and its an absolute pleasure reading this, made my heart full, another fave for me
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Date: 10/9/2023 12:04:00 PM
Empress! Hi! Many thanks for your responsive comment! This was a poem that did’t just flow out, but took lots of work. It began with the revelation that God via Nature was teaching (me at least) that (perhaps) the process of dying (ascending) may be (in Him, thru Him) astounding beauty. Hmmmmm. Much love to you! sally
Date: 10/6/2023 9:09:00 AM
Sally, Your writing about Autumn is truly remarkable. It captivates the reader with its profound and awe-inspiring descriptions. Your use of imagery is exquisite, bringing to life the vibrant essence of each season. The way you draw parallels between Autumn and the transitional phases in our own lives is truly enchanting as if guiding us on a gentle waltz toward self-discovery and growth.
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Date: 10/9/2023 12:08:00 PM
sotto, you are right on with your interpretation of the poem’s intention & the revelation that swept over me that made the blessed load of work it tppk to set this one down. Thank you so much! Hugs, sally
Date: 10/6/2023 5:33:00 AM
Praying that you are recovering well, the fact that you are writing again, such amazing poems, means your on the road to healing dear friend, stay well, so good to hear from you. Much love, Vie
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Date: 10/9/2023 12:14:00 PM
Vie, and so good to see you. I am still lacking in energy, but can work for which i’m very thankful. Must admit i’m wanting to put my energy into my drawings, but as you know, when the poems call out, ya gotta pay them the first attention, like the child who screams the loudest. 8-) Huge hugs! sally
Date: 10/6/2023 4:09:00 AM
Outstanding, simply profound at every level. Your imagery is perfect and the way you described the different seasons was spot on! You gently took the reader to another level comparing autumn to that season in all our lives when we, too, slowly waltz to the earth. I've got to fav this one. A true artistic creation!!
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Date: 10/9/2023 12:22:00 PM
You got it, Sara,& it was hard work figuring out how to translate that spiritual revelation into a poem! I am very touched by your comment & appreciate your time to tell me! Wonderful that we can help one another here in Earth’s kindergarten before heaven! Thank you! xox sally
Date: 10/5/2023 11:21:00 PM
Do we ever stop learning? No schooling for me but I observe life and learn. Yours is a great description of autumn which is too prosaic in Malta. Wish I could travel again, but it is not to be. So I stay in a room alone and learn what I can from poems such as yours. Magnificent. Blessings.
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Date: 10/6/2023 3:49:00 AM
Greetings Victor, fron just before dawn here in KY, tto your early afternoon! Lately, i go out & about rarly, but it means Sooo Much when I do. I also dont loke heat. Born Jan 4, i do like winter…like spring (always exciting) but Fall is unbeaable north u.s,! Always astounds & inspires. Sending u love, wellnes prayers for sure. sally
Date: 10/5/2023 10:37:00 PM
Wonderful words here about Autumn. I like from monotone to blended tones. Such a melodic line! Great job Sally!
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Date: 10/6/2023 3:53:00 AM
Hi Karen, honored you came by & thank you for your kind words. I much enjoyed visiting your poetry yesterday! Good day.! sally

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