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Mirror Mirror Who Is That

Mirror, Mirror, Who Is That? Who is that Sleeping close enough To dream of kissing my nose…? Well, almost… Who is that who keeps inside Of him the man I’ve loved For more than forty years? Who is that whose hair — once mink brown — Appears whiter these days…now blending with Pillowcase white at night? Who is that who’s kidnapped My darling, young husband, bearing — I thought — the stregth of youth for all of life? With the decades passing…with their toll on Our looks, bones, and veins, along comes this Rage! How each night it thieves a bit of youth for a ransom of age! Who is that, then, who could ask who I am? My heart’s love — just as his — is deeper, no older Than when we met and married …still keeping Each new dawn full with hope, and for our life ahead, we still author dreams’ envisioning. ————————————————————————- (c) sally yougeslinger 11/17/2023

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Date: 11/21/2023 4:00:00 PM
Sal, I'm so proud of you for being able to share your wonderful attitude with us after all these years of thinking young and sharing your poetry and love with others. Your poem says a lot about carrying on as we age, especially when bedridden or ill to the point of little activity anymore. I wanted to congratulate you on having your poem published in Poetry Soup's latest Anthology! YEAH !!! I also wanted to wish you a Happy Thanksgiving, my friend. Hugs, Bill
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 11/23/2023 10:00:00 PM
Bill, I am grateful for long aging/age, but can think of next to zip I’d claim to like, except that Love does deepen if one has kept at it…love for spouse, God, strangers, poetry, Nature, music, beauty, truth…. 8-). Love!
Date: 11/19/2023 3:29:00 PM
I read your reply to my comment and I can see how I managed to misinterpret what you were saying. I'm sincerely sorry I did. You're right...living in spirit helps as we get older and when we're living with pain and physical challenges. Wishing you a blessed evening, Sara
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Date: 11/23/2023 9:54:00 PM
Sara, sure hope i didn’t make you feel you had to apologize! Goodness! Big hugs!
Date: 11/18/2023 11:57:00 PM
Oh my sally.' This touches so much of my Awareness, May the Lord bless you '
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Date: 11/23/2023 9:52:00 PM
Joe, hi! Hope your Thanksging was good! Yes. I know we learn to be thankful life allows us to live into old age, but while, yes, that is wonderful, there can be a lot aching in that Demark, you could say…Acceptance doesn’t completely follow the gratitde. People will load u w/cliche stuff abt that too. I struggle with it every day & IMHOspeak the true of it. Thank u for your dear comment Xox
Date: 11/18/2023 7:44:00 AM
"Who is that, then, who could ask who I am? My heart’s love just as his, is deeper, not older Than when we met and married, still with dawn’s refreshed envisioning." Sensitive truth. I try to see all in the light of dawn, though the aches and pains cast a slight shadow. Precious poetry.
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Date: 11/18/2023 11:12:00 AM
Thank you, Joe! Sure hope you’re keeping it all together cool inthe jive of life & not screechingthru the galactic streams too too much! xoxo
Date: 11/17/2023 4:59:00 PM
your poem echoes my feelings and thoughts about my dear hubby and our love and relationship. Our love is deeper, not older. Well said, Sally. Am faving this one, Sara
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Date: 11/18/2023 11:03:00 AM
Sara, this is also complicated by my being x3 yrs bedridden, getting over paralysis. I DO NOT get the occasion to look in a mirror! Inside, i am 32 — the great yr i’ve decided to live in the spirit of…Plus, i am vain (sad but true), have dark eyes, so dye my hair. U might re-read now knowing these things. Marvelous sister poet, i embrace U, thank you!
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Date: 11/18/2023 10:46:00 AM
Sara, it much bothers me (!) hence this poem. Like everyone in days & in dreams, we do not SEE ourselves. We do not walk beside a mirror, do not watch (we only feel) the aging. BUT we can all the time SEE our beloved aging. For me at least, that ACHES. I DO NOT want him to age, to ever have an ending, for 39 yrs there we no signs of it, but last yr the gray came & the trouble standing. NO!I scream inside As bob Dylan’s song goes” may we stay forever young…”. My hugs. God’s blessings 4 U & ur darling…
Date: 11/17/2023 1:03:00 PM
How very beautiful Sally….growing old together is a wonderful gift! Debx
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Date: 11/18/2023 11:18:00 AM
Deb, thank you & True..gift! Blessing! God’s meaning & desin for His unknow reason. I’ve lived 64 yrs past age 8 when i got a very brittle case oftype 1 diabetes (a scourge). I am thankfu EVERY DAY tobe alive, in service to God, & in love! Blessings!
Date: 11/17/2023 6:48:00 AM
How each night thieves a bit of youth for a ransom of age!--a powerful thought Sally. My heart’s love just as his, is deeper, not older Than when we met and married--well said--blessings my friend.
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Date: 11/18/2023 11:21:00 AM
Vijay, thank you. Honored by your visit to my pg! Yes, i perhaps got the thought to inspires a memorable line…hmmm….may the muses bewith you!
Date: 11/17/2023 12:30:00 AM
A good poem. Well done.
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Date: 11/18/2023 11:28:00 AM
Hi Jeanette, thank you for coming by to read and comment…always an appreciated thing for all of us. Blessing of health & inspiration!

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