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Lyrics III - Dream Theater Finalized - rob carmack's Blog

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I reside in Maryland, with my dog Boo
Never forgetting:

Whatsoever thy hand findeth to do, do it with thy might; for there is no work, nor device, nor knowledge, nor wisdom, in the grave, whither thou goest.
~ Ecclesiastes 9:10


Lyrics III - Dream Theater Finalized


Blog Posted:4/18/2017 10:29:00 PM
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Date: 4/21/2017 1:28:00 AM
Thanks so much for my win, Rob. It means a lot to me because I know how hard you try to be fair by judging blind and abiding by the rules you set. Sorry I took so long to get here and say thanks. I can't believe how my time is just slipping through my fingers all the time!!
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Date: 4/18/2017 11:54:00 PM
Rob thanks very much for my placement
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My Past Blog Posts

 
Descry Finalized
Date Posted: 6/21/2017 12:30:00 AM
Screwed XVII Finalized
Date Posted: 5/6/2017 12:44:00 AM
Lyrics III - Dream Theater Finalized
Date Posted: 4/18/2017 10:29:00 PM
Screwed XVI Finalized
Date Posted: 3/7/2017 10:56:00 PM
An old friend
Date Posted: 2/21/2017 5:44:00 PM
Premiere I - Open Finalized
Date Posted: 12/27/2016 9:54:00 PM
Screwed XV Finalized
Date Posted: 12/22/2016 8:27:00 PM
Screwed XIV Finalized
Date Posted: 7/14/2016 11:44:00 PM
Lyrics II - The Black Crowes Finalized
Date Posted: 6/11/2016 1:25:00 PM
Screwed XIII Finalized
Date Posted: 5/1/2016 12:07:00 AM
Lyrics I - Tomahawk Finalized
Date Posted: 4/23/2016 8:58:00 PM
Screwed XII Finalized
Date Posted: 3/21/2016 9:57:00 AM
Screwed XI Finalized
Date Posted: 3/1/2016 11:48:00 AM
Screwed X Finalized
Date Posted: 1/20/2016 5:59:00 AM
One of your best contest finalized
Date Posted: 1/7/2016 8:36:00 AM
Screwed IX Finalized
Date Posted: 12/24/2015 7:32:00 AM
Kool-Aid
Date Posted: 12/20/2015 5:00:00 PM
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Date Posted: 12/19/2015 10:27:00 AM
Screwed VIII Finalized
Date Posted: 12/3/2015 8:01:00 AM
Vice Contest Finalized
Date Posted: 11/29/2015 10:57:00 AM
Screwed VII Finalized
Date Posted: 11/4/2015 12:09:00 AM
10 Lines or less contest finalized
Date Posted: 10/14/2015 6:26:00 PM
Screwed VI Finalized
Date Posted: 9/27/2015 1:14:00 AM
One Contest Finalized
Date Posted: 9/12/2015 6:13:00 PM
Screwed V Finalized
Date Posted: 8/19/2015 1:28:00 AM

My Recent Poems

Date PostedPoemTitleFormCategories
6/26/2017 Touch Iambic Pentameterchristian,death,faith,hop
5/15/2017 Medinah's Circle Narrativebest friend,dedication,fr
2/16/2017 Find Me - Shape Version Shapebible,christian,hope,jesu
1/18/2017 Find Me In Six - Find Me Versebible,christian,jesus,lov
1/13/2017 Quadro - Western Stars Versememory,sun,sunset,
11/12/2016 His Eternal Revenue Crystallineage,god,inspirational,spi
10/28/2016 Sold Didacticbible,christian,corruptio
5/16/2016 Beautiful Ones Free verseabuse,anger,hate,hurt,pri
4/4/2016 Angels Senryuangel,christian,evil,fait
3/8/2016 Nayda Narrativebeauty,inspiration,intros
1/9/2016 3 from 15 Free verseappreciation,betrayal,lov
12/16/2015 Christmas Music Sonnetangel,christian,christmas
11/29/2015 Childhood Dreams Narrativeappreciation,childhood,gr
11/25/2015 Watery Sun Quatrainbeach,love,ocean,summer,s
10/20/2015 Songs of a Setting Sun Questionkubeauty,bird,death,growth,
10/13/2015 Slovakia Narrativefamily,history,hope,human
10/6/2015 Rigel's Angel Narrativeangel,bible,farewell,love
9/5/2015 Matthew's Odds Quatrainbible,christian,dark,fear
8/24/2015 In the Auditorium Part II Narrativeart,city,desire,emotions,
7/23/2015 Ted Free verseamerica,crazy,dark,death,
7/8/2015 OH GOD Senryubible,christian,culture,j
7/1/2015 End of Songs Iambic Pentameterbreak up,change,conflict,
5/30/2015 A Sweet Duet Trioletfriend,friendship,
5/14/2015 A Maryland Summer Quatrainbeach,beauty,drink,friend
4/25/2015 Becoming Quatrainage,change,character,grow
4/15/2015 Grand Larceny Balladeabuse,anger,bible,dark,fa
4/5/2015 A Community Pool in Richmond Quatrainbio,psychological,senses,
3/21/2015 Susan Acrosticblessing,christian,devoti
3/15/2015 Exposing the Soul Iambic Pentameterbible,christian,creation,
3/9/2015 Alone Tankadesire,feelings,life,lone
3/2/2015 Forecasts Tankachange,hope,lost love,lov
2/14/2015 Loving a Woman Quatrainappreciation,body,love,ro
2/11/2015 Turning Lies Rhymebetrayal,faith,pride,spir
1/15/2015 The Gift: Visual Three Cinquainblessing,desire,feelings,
1/7/2015 Road to Over Coupletchristian,jesus,lost love
12/28/2014 These Days Coupletappreciation,christian,fr
12/24/2014 Missing and Knowing Cinquainabsence,death,dream,inspi
12/22/2014 Theatre of my Soul Coupletaddiction,allegory,change
12/10/2014 Fading Shadows Rhymedeath,funeral,growing up,
12/4/2014 Emergent Didacticbible,christian,dark,deat
11/22/2014 Seeing Autumn's oak adorn Crystallineautumn,birth,death,life,n
11/18/2014 Kelly Free versebible,break up,dedication
11/14/2014 Sonnet Chiweenie Boo Iambic Pentameteranimal,best friend,dog,hu
11/6/2014 Workshop Poem: Third Parallel Narrativefreedom,happiness,love,me
11/2/2014 Waterfalls Verselove,metaphor,relationshi
10/26/2014 Child Coupletabsence,addiction,child,d
10/12/2014 Culling Versebird,desire,loss,love,mov
10/1/2014 Lucy Free versedark,death,lost,mystery,
9/13/2014 6 am Narrativeaddiction,dark,farewell,f
9/13/2014 Last Stand Rhymeangel,bible,christian,dar

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Fav Poems

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It's over Terza Rimaaddiction,love,
Echoes of Good-Bye Free versegoodbye,
The Malkavian part 1 perfect version Alliterationconfusion,corruption,dark
The Last Gold Leaf Elegyabsence,bereavement,death
COME WHAT MAY Rhymelife,nostalgia,relationsh
AUTUMN ON FIRE Free verseautumn,beauty,heart,inspi
Wind Songs Rhymeearth,nature,wind,
So Shall It Be In The End Free versebereavement,death,desire,
Yesterday Love Was Such An Easy Game To Play Dramatic monologuebetrayal,break up,heartbr
A New Love Found Free verseinspirational,
Alone - Visual 7 Cinquainblessing,creation,god,
Humbling Self Free verseinspiration,introspection
I Think Of You - Where You Bloom - 4 Free verseintrospection,
Optimistic White Quatrainintrospection,
Existential Reprise Free versephilosophyme,old,me,old,p
Spider web Haikubeauty,flower,
Delicacy of Leaves Rhymehappiness,nature,time,
My Poems Are Children To Me Free versepoems,
Plato and Socrates Ekphrasisappreciation,beauty,humor
Cinder Girl Rhyme 
Ode to spring Rhymeallegory,analogy,spring,
springtime flowers Sapphic stanzadream,flower,
Forced to Face the Mirror Coupletbody,desire,longing,lust,
A Palindrome called Temptation Free verseaddiction,change,forgiven
Etherees Ethereepoems,writing,
Memory Rides the Rails Rhymeamerica,childhood,memory,
Seeds Versephilosophy,
An Epic Love For Women Epicbeauty,celebration,dream,
A Time Between Gods Free verseallegory,society,
The Circle Enclosed Rhymelife,memory,
Guardian Angel Rhymeangel,child,miracle,
The Grake - For Dr Seuss Contest Rhymeanti bullying,bullying,co
More Than Love new addition Lyricabsence,angel,beauty,lost
Irresolution Quatrainangst,
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