Ted

Old man Cowell and boy Ted,
Hardcore and alcohol
unlocked doors in his head.

Midnight’s rage held a speculum,
every one of them became Brooks.
Two escapes and from
a sling, cast or uniform
one beetle shell thinned
apartment and dorm.

Swung and dumped on both coasts,
Dipped a hand in the green river,
and lost count of his ghosts.
Paid part of his debt on a Florida chair.
Rode the Lightning to eternity.
Consumed by what awaited him there.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 2:48 PM
A terrific piece Rob! I love the language you employ and the images it creates. Powerful stuff! Best wishes, Keith
Ndaba Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 10:20 AM
creative imagination...like the style of writing.
Ndaba Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 10:18 AM
I see your poems are sentimental and have some sort of deep rooted emotion!
Donnelly Ellis Avatar
October 28, 2015 at 7:20 AM
Remarkable
Lamoureux Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 9:34 AM
This is really good Rob! Infused with sadness with a tinge of hopefulness.
Dietrich Avatar
August 11, 2015 at 3:33 PM
Hey, Rob, thanks for the visit to my sonnet today. I am always surprised by the poems of mine that you like a lot! Hope you are enjoying your week.
Dietrich Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 8:21 AM
soupmail for ya!!
Dietrich Avatar
July 29, 2015 at 1:12 AM
Rob, I am so glad you told me beforehand who this was about. I am so bad at this kind of thing, I may not have gotten otherwise, but knowing it is Bundy, I could read every line and get the picture! soupmail before I go off here!
Wigley Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 11:08 PM
Gritty, off the tracks piece, Rob. A 7 and a fave for me, thanks. Regards, Viv
Onclaud Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 4:37 PM
the pace and plot of this piece makes it an amazing tale, rob... huggs
Spagnola Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 11:32 AM
Awesome, thought provoking write :), jill
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