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A Ramshackle Faith

Temptation’s collars choke life out of me. Truth the greatest gift, it costs everything, just one breath away. Doubt takes the joy, walked the fool’s quest too long, discern; deceived – elect. Every tongue will confess, our Spirits to kneel before Christ. -------------------------------- Written: 12.22.19 – 12.23.19 Title: A Ramshackle Faith Form: Diminished Hexaverse Sponsor: Edward Ibeh

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Joe Maverick

Date: 7/25/2022 2:22:00 PM

So we learn Christ is the author & perfector of Our faith..Meaning we are not perfect.' As are none in heaven or earth or below etc.' In the Meantime we bump along, early on especially Groping with reality here' and the promise and The ultimate reality unseen fully.) also how can We deal with temptation if we never face it? Or turn from it? In order to do so it must be Encountered, all the best Rob.'

Rob Carmack
Date: 8/14/2022 5:36:00 PM

The truth is a journey and it gets tougher as you go, but it remains the best gift God has given us.

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/13/2021 8:29:00 AM

Dear Rob, your expressive pen spills with deep and meaningful verse. Temptation challenges the strength and resilience of our faith and doubt is the devil that enters one’s heart and mind. A potent ending makes this heartfelt piece memorable. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Rob Carmack
Date: 12/18/2021 3:33:00 PM

Thank you and God Bless you Susan.

Beata Agustin

Date: 1/26/2020 2:04:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Rob Carmack
Date: 1/26/2020 9:25:00 PM

TY Beata.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/12/2020 1:39:00 PM

though I feel perplexed that you are sometimes so unforgiving to yourself, I appreciate the serious tone of your poem, Rob. Congrats on your win.

Rob Carmack
Date: 1/16/2020 5:49:00 PM

Thank You my friend.

Lu Loo

Date: 1/11/2020 3:02:00 PM

I just got chills! No joke the ending gave me chills. Amazing. congrats dear Rob x:-)-luloo

Rob Carmack
Date: 1/16/2020 5:49:00 PM

De Lu, thank you with a hug.

Sandra Adams

Date: 1/11/2020 10:06:00 AM

temptation will always try faith... i liked this one, it's a nice inspirational poem... congrats on your win :)

Rob Carmack
Date: 1/16/2020 5:48:00 PM

Thanks Sandra.

Paul Callus

Date: 1/11/2020 9:10:00 AM

Congratulations on your podium finish, Rob! Faith is a powerful 'tool' when tackled without deceit. Regards // paul

Rob Carmack
Date: 1/16/2020 5:48:00 PM

Thank you Paul, I appreciate it.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/11/2020 8:56:00 AM

Deep and meaningful--excellent write, Rob--congrats on your podium win.

Rob Carmack
Date: 1/16/2020 5:48:00 PM

TY Vijay.

Edward Ibeh

Date: 1/11/2020 7:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your deserving win in my contest, Rob:-) Awesome poem. I love the first two lines!

Rob Carmack
Date: 1/11/2020 8:50:00 AM

Thank You Edward. Happy new year and God Bless.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/31/2019 7:44:00 PM

Amen Rob. Well expressed. Happy 2020, blessings Rick.

Rob Carmack
Date: 1/1/2020 11:37:00 PM

TY Richard. Happy new year to you and your family.

Robert Lindley

Date: 12/30/2019 6:26:00 AM

As true as true can be! Exceptional verse and expression of faith in the Trinity my friend. The Universe and all beyond yields to the Light, Truth and Majesty of the Son of God... A fav.. a true and gleaming gem too!

Rob Carmack
Date: 1/1/2020 11:36:00 PM

Thank you my friend.

Ann Foster

Date: 12/23/2019 8:54:00 PM

Powerful... well written. Ann

Rob Carmack
Date: 12/23/2019 8:55:00 PM

Thank You Ann.